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« Reply #61 on: December 02, 2017, 01:33:41 PM » |
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OK Krennic's resurrection was perfectly done! And it not only makes sense in context but it came off as completely organic and natural within the narrative! VERY well done HB1! Now, ESPECIALLY after reading CH.25 do I believe that Krennic is the perfect foil and antagonist to Jyn and Cassian. You took these established characters and made them (and their motivations) better! I do wonder if Krennic will continue to be the "big bad" for them as you story continues Looking forward to reading CH.26 (and subsequent chapters)!
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Sig courtesy of DarthScrubCataphract Triarch of the Vhal'DanMy sabers:Zearic's Aldrnari, Archon v3 (modded w/ activation box) w/Obsidian, AS; Zearic's shoto, Apprentice v4 w/Obsidian, AS; Graflex SE w/Obsidian, GB; Archon v3 (modded w/ activation box) w/Obsidian, CG; Dark Sentinel v4 w/Obsidian, BR; Sentinel LE v4 w/Obsidian, GB; Initiate v5 w/Obsidian, AS; Sentinel LE v4 stunt, EG; Aeon LE v4 stunt, FO; Dominix v4 stunt, BR; Aeon v3 stunt, SY
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« Reply #62 on: December 02, 2017, 05:15:10 PM » |
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OK Krennic's resurrection was perfectly done! And it not only makes sense in context but it came off as completely organic and natural within the narrative! VERY well done HB1! Now, ESPECIALLY after reading CH.25 do I believe that Krennic is the perfect foil and antagonist to Jyn and Cassian. You took these established characters and made them (and their motivations) better! I do wonder if Krennic will continue to be the "big bad" for them as you story continues Looking forward to reading CH.26 (and subsequent chapters)! Thanks Dutchman! I envisioned Krennic to be Jyn & Cassian's ultimate archenemy after their encounter near the end of Rogue One movie. The rivalry just fit perfectly. This story is about Jyn & Krennic getting their revenge on each other. Actually, Chapters 26, 27, and 28 are already posted right before your post. Enjoy
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« Reply #66 on: December 10, 2017, 05:01:40 AM » |
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Just read CH.26 & 27. I like that Jyn made her own lightsaber, especially a purple-bladed one. I can understand her trepidation about Cassian (being a spy). I can only hope that she can trust her initial feelings for him. I enjoyed the lightsaber battles between Vader and Jyn&Cassian, respectfully. Good characterization with Vader: he's the most powerful and knows it. But I do like the "save" by Luke And Krennic is still a great foil for Jyn and Cassian
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Sig courtesy of DarthScrubCataphract Triarch of the Vhal'DanMy sabers:Zearic's Aldrnari, Archon v3 (modded w/ activation box) w/Obsidian, AS; Zearic's shoto, Apprentice v4 w/Obsidian, AS; Graflex SE w/Obsidian, GB; Archon v3 (modded w/ activation box) w/Obsidian, CG; Dark Sentinel v4 w/Obsidian, BR; Sentinel LE v4 w/Obsidian, GB; Initiate v5 w/Obsidian, AS; Sentinel LE v4 stunt, EG; Aeon LE v4 stunt, FO; Dominix v4 stunt, BR; Aeon v3 stunt, SY
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« Reply #67 on: December 13, 2017, 12:44:53 AM » |
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« Reply #69 on: December 15, 2017, 09:12:49 AM » |
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Chapter 34: Prisoners Link to chapter on FanFiction.net: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12311644/34/Rogue-One-ResurrectionWARNING: THIS LONG CHAPTER MAY BE VIOLENT AND GRAPHIC IF YOU VISUALIZE THE TEXT. READ AT YOUR OWN RISK. This chapter actually hurt me to write.
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« Reply #70 on: December 29, 2017, 10:25:51 PM » |
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TheDutchman
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« Reply #71 on: January 01, 2018, 01:14:05 PM » |
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Just read Chapters 28, 29, and 30. I enjoy the casual dialogue between Jyn and Cassian (when he isn't screwing up) and canon characters from the Saga. I am glad that you continued the story to Empire Strikes Back. Jyn's character trajectory is particularly interesting: she's been through more adversity than many yet she's still young and has those lingering doubts. Hopefully Cassian learns his lesson Nice story integration: we know what happens with Luke, Han, the wampa, and the tauntaun but the addition of Jyn and Cassian makes for a fresh perspective. Keep it up HB1!
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Sig courtesy of DarthScrubCataphract Triarch of the Vhal'DanMy sabers:Zearic's Aldrnari, Archon v3 (modded w/ activation box) w/Obsidian, AS; Zearic's shoto, Apprentice v4 w/Obsidian, AS; Graflex SE w/Obsidian, GB; Archon v3 (modded w/ activation box) w/Obsidian, CG; Dark Sentinel v4 w/Obsidian, BR; Sentinel LE v4 w/Obsidian, GB; Initiate v5 w/Obsidian, AS; Sentinel LE v4 stunt, EG; Aeon LE v4 stunt, FO; Dominix v4 stunt, BR; Aeon v3 stunt, SY
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