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Author Topic: Kuroth Metro -Series 3, Issue 3- The Second Warning  (Read 1229 times)
Kuroth Metro
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I Fight For Justice, And Serve The Jedi Order


« on: February 20, 2013, 12:12:45 PM »

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'Quick Note' Hey everyone me again. Thank you for sticking with my stories this long. I hope it makes you happy to read and enjoy. Please leave a Lightside point. I'm going to keep this note short. Please reply and tell me what you thought, Thank you. KM
(Real Quick, Do you -as readers- like the longer or the shorter stories. Please Respond.)
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Kuroth sat frozen in fear. He felt a tight grip around his throat as he stood up. The fear crept in closer as he took each step towards the door, Avoiding obstacles that had been scattered on the floor. The door looked so dominating as he stepped up the the handle. He turned it one hand on the handle, the other on his Lightsaber. As he ripped it open a figure appeared. The figure was broken and had hospital robes on. It was Zerrak, Kuroth's lost friend. Without a moment to spare Kuroth ran to him and helped him into the destroyed apartment. "What happened in here?" Zerrak choked out. Kuroth stood up and said "I don't know who did it. But I will find out" The two were happy but in a weird way, scared. Kuroth lifted his badly damaged couch and sat Zerrak on it. "You need to go to the Jedi Temple. They can help you" Kuroth said concerned for his friend's life. Zerrak looked up in fear and started to pull something out of his robes pocket. "I can't, read this" Kuroth was handed a note in the same style that he had received not moments ago. It read: Zerrak Starlight, I have been observing you and you friend Kuroth Metro. I give you this warning. Stay away from the Jedi Temple. The note ended there. Kuroth picked up the Note he was given and handed it to Zerrak. After he read it he said "Kuroth, I need your help. Please take this note to the Jedi Temple. Master Kenobi has a friend who deals in these sorts of things." So Kuroth grabbed the note and headed to the temple.

Entering the Temple Kuroth walked into the Infirmary to get some medical supplies. He was approached by a Clone Trooper who was wielding his blaster rifle. "You!, Stop right there." Kuroth was as much confused as he was scared. He had thought that he was in big trouble. The trooper walked right up to him and put the rifle to his back. "Now, stay still and we wont have a problem." He lifted his arm to speak into his Communicator "Boss, he is in here" Kuroth turned quickly and snatched the blaster and shot the Trooper. The clone fell down lifeless. Kuroth gripped his saber and waited for the Sith to come in. To his surprise the one who walked in was a clone with the red lines painted on his armor. "Frieze Jedi" He demanded as he held the rifle to his face. "What is this nonsense, what did I do wrong?" Kuroth asked starting to get annoyed. "Come with me" Said the clone as Kuroth slipped his Lightsaber up his sleeve. The hallway was filled with curious glances from the other Jedi.

They left the temple to go to a disclosed location. What the Commander didn't know was that Kuroth had hoped for this very moment to happen. The cruiser landed on a platform on a building in the dark depths of Coruscant. The room was dark red and lit very dimly. The storm outside made the walls shake. "Kuroth Metro, come in take a seat." Kuroth sat down and looked up. He saw a Shadow of a man in robes, the only noteworthy features were the glowing yellow eyes. Kuroth went to activate his saber but the Commander slammed his hand down on the armrest of the chair. He took his saber and handed it to the Dark figure. "I like this Saber design, did you do it yourself?" asked the Sith in a half mocking tone. Kuroth struggled as he was being restrained. "What do you want?" He shouted. The Sith stood and moved towards the Jedi. "Let him go" A voice shouted. The Sith looked up and saw Zerrak Starlight standing half hunched over. The Sith fled as Zerrak Ignited his saber. The Jedi Struck the Clone and with his Green saber. They quickly went to the Cruiser and started to leave. As they were flying Kuroth picked up a note that read: By now you should be in flight, if you are reading this you escaped me. This is your second warning Jedi. Back off. The note ended. Kuroth was at a small amount of piece when out of nowhere a shot from a lone fighter smashed into the ship. The Fighter exploded and Kuroth was left in the ship crashing into the middle of Coruscant. He quickly noticed Zerrak was Dying from his wounds...
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« Reply #1 on: February 20, 2013, 08:01:15 PM »

I always prefer longer stories, but honestly, it all depends on what the writer chooses to accomplish.

I've been keeping up to date with your stories and many others like Darth Abaddon.  It's kind of inspired me to continue my own story / mythology I had going on for a while which I'm composing at the moment.
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