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Kham-Ryn Kurios
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« Reply #1 on: September 23, 2013, 06:13:26 PM » |
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BRILLIANT!
Honestly, that was engaging, all of it; that Pike stuff was wicked.
Specifically for me the music was spot on and really matched the swell of emotions throughout.
Best of luck in the competition.
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Dx6channnel
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« Reply #2 on: September 23, 2013, 06:18:56 PM » |
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Thank you!
BTW I am the Jedi in the film.
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Lord Krankenhaus
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« Reply #3 on: September 23, 2013, 08:49:15 PM » |
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And I thought "Prevail" was sick! Excellent job!
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Master Bluespike74
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« Reply #4 on: September 23, 2013, 10:26:40 PM » |
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I was really ticked when you didn't get it last time. This blew your last entry out of the water. Excellent job, emotional, and just down right great. You are excellent at what you do and you just made my day. Thank you for sharing most importantly, congrats on winning.
I am your newest subscriber and I look forward to seeing what else you do. If you are ever in my area, please let me be a part of one of these.
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jasond22
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« Reply #5 on: September 23, 2013, 11:52:35 PM » |
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Excellent! Possibly the best I've ever seen!
How did you keep your tabards on? Just re-adjust after every take?
This was so good not just for the fighting/choreography (in which your characters looked in more danger than in some of the fight scenes in the prequels, where the fighters were just too far apart to really be a threat to each other), but many other things done well that often aren't done well...writing, acting, cinematography, lighting, costumes, environment/sets, etc. I act in a lot of indie films, so I really notice when those things are lacking in any amateur film.
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Kham-Ryn Kurios
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« Reply #6 on: September 24, 2013, 12:36:03 AM » |
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How did you keep your tabards on? Just re-adjust after every take?
I'll venture a guess into velcro.
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BenPass
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« Reply #7 on: September 24, 2013, 12:52:06 AM » |
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Wow, that was great! Wonderful job!
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« Reply #8 on: September 24, 2013, 12:54:59 AM » |
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I'll venture a guess into velcro.
One of the people on TPLA Live was complaining that nothing works...velcro, pins, sewing, etc. I saw in one set of takes that his tabards were moving pretty far outwards...much farther and they might fall off.
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Master Venturous
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« Reply #9 on: September 24, 2013, 02:46:07 AM » |
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This was excellent for many reasons. Not only was the choreography good, but the acting was as well. Too often I see things like this on YouTube with long pauses in the fighting, choreography that was not very well thought out, and lots and lots of cheesy lines. This however was actually engaging and entertaining to watch. I loved the saberpike you used, even though you used it more like a double-bladed lightsaber. Well done and congratulations for winning.
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« Reply #10 on: September 25, 2013, 11:25:47 PM » |
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loved this video - makes me want to turn my single saber into a yari. well done!
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Dx6channnel
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« Reply #11 on: September 26, 2013, 01:42:44 PM » |
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Thanks for the comments guys!
About the tabards:
A Jedi's greatest weapon is his lightsaber. His second greatest is velcro.
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« Reply #12 on: September 26, 2013, 02:37:42 PM » |
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wow, that was pretty good! loved the way the emotions ran through it, I agree the music was a great match well done! ps im assuming you want DS points?
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jasond22
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« Reply #13 on: September 26, 2013, 03:40:11 PM » |
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About the tabards: A Jedi's greatest weapon is his lightsaber. His second greatest is velcro.
Can you tell me anything about how much velcro you used, and where you put it? Like a single 1" by 5" strip on each shoulder, or what?
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Darth Zelta
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« Reply #14 on: September 26, 2013, 04:24:03 PM » |
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WOW. 1 word: ASTONISHING! My lightsaber duels don't even compare to this. Though of course, we don't use adobe after affects. The lightsabers seem to look fine on camera. This deserves a lot more attention on the youtube for sure!
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