So this is what I have so far I'm a little stuck what do you think? Be gentle with me I haven't written in years
It seemed like the stars were falling from the sky, burning bits of the republic cruiser came surging through the atmosphere. Parts of the behemoth fell across the planet destroying whole cities a piece of debris was falling towards a small settlement. A young twi’lek boy stood watching the chunk of ship heading towards the village, other people were running and screaming but the boy just stood watching. Within minutes smaller pieces crashed through buildings and into people. The boy’s grandfather ran towards him whilst in mid-flight he scooped the boy into his arms. A large fragment of the ship smashed into the ground behind them an enormous ball of razor sharp dust and flame spewed from the wreckage the young boy was ripped from his grandfather’s grasp.
After a few moments the old man rose to his feet, there in front of him was this ball of death encapsulated in what seemed like a Devine light it just seemed like it was hanging there motionless. The realization that the boy was not with him sparked panic in his amazement there stood the boy his pail skin shimmering in the dirty gold light holding the ball in place, the boy struggles and manages to push the enormous cloud back in on its self until there is no more. How did you do that the old man asks, the boy stands mute shocked in himself.
The boy was carried away by his grandfather back to their home as they entered the door there was a Human Male standing in the middle of the room. The grandfather stopped, who are you?
Please I just want to see the boy, the dark figure moved out of the shadow the grandfather dropped to his knees, I’m sorry sir I didn’t realize it was you. The master of the house Nalars walked forward and stud above the boy. Tell me your name boy, the youngling looked up and spoke Sona Hapet.
The dark figure smiled looked at the old man and motioned him to walk, Nalars placed his arm around the grandfather’s shoulder, tell me Silais how long have you served me? Silais took a step away and took to his knees once again, I have served your family for 59years Sir, if I may ask why? Nalars pauses for a moment, The boy Silais, why didn’t you tell me about the boy? A look of confusion fell over Silais.