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old ben wan kenobi
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« Reply #30 on: December 11, 2015, 09:11:55 AM »

My Star Wars character is a former Jedi but was kicked out of the order for being to aggressive towards the criminals him and his master would arrest. His name is Hartwig, after he left the Jedi he went to the with but didn't really like the way they did things. So he betrayed them and he went off on his own he went to Tatooine  and became just a day time drunk wasting away his life. Until one day Obi Wan rushed into the cantina and yelled "HARTWIG" repeatedly he said " the clones have betrayed us and the temple has been destroyed not sure who's all alive do not listen to the all jedi to the temple warning its a trap". Then Hartwig said with a drunken slur " waaaaiiiittttt what" obi wan muttered come on you drunk. They flew to coruscant and searched around the slums to find hiding Jedi an they found none.
Thats all I've got for now more will come if people like it.
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« Reply #31 on: December 11, 2015, 09:16:57 AM »

I'm working an edit of the backstory I posted before. Should be ready in a few days
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« Reply #32 on: December 14, 2015, 10:06:26 AM »

The rise of Darth Knox (edited from previous post)


Real Name:       Med Lo'Raal
Species:            Elomin
Gender:            Male
Skin colour:      Grey
Hair:                 None
Eye colour:       Brown
Born:                820 BBY (Legends era)

Sith Name:        Darth Knox
Sith powers:      Master of Sith sorcery
                                   Master of Sith alchemy
                                   Death field
                                   Force lightning
                                   Force choke
                                   Force cloak
                                   Life-force drain

Weapon:            Red lightsaber named "Mortis"
Combat style:    Kel-Maar (original style created from combining elements of Shii-Cho and Juyo)

Apprentice:        Darth Praxis

Biography:
As a child, Med often had dreams that would occasionally come true. The planet Elom was yet to have any contact with the Galactic Republic. None of its inhabitants knew of the Force or the Jedi, so these abilities frightened him. As loved as he was by his family, these abilities always made Med feel a bit of an outsider amongst his own people.

Med's father, Gram, was the captain of a trade ship that transported the valuable ore Lommite to various planets in the Outer Rim. Med's mother had died shortly after giving birth to his younger brother, Desi. Unwilling to leave his two son's alone for long periods of time, Gram insisted they accompany him whenever he had cargo drops or trade missions. They travelled so much that the brothers both viewed the trade ship as home. On what was to be a routine cargo drop to the planet Boonta, Gram's ship was attacked by Bandits of Ggy-ynt and suffered heavy damage. After being boarded and having his entire cargo taken, Gram and his entire crew were left onboard to die in the depths of space.

Realising they were close to the planet Ossus, Gram placed both Med and Desi in the only functioning escape pod and sent them to safety moments before the ship exploded. The pod landed in the mountains with both Med and Desi barely surviving the landing. It took them 2 days to trek to the nearest village where they collapsed from exhaustion. A Ysannan couple took pity on the brothers and after nursing them back to health adopted them, raising them as their own. Over the next couple of years, Med felt more at home on Ossus than Elom, as most of the Ysannans were force-sensitive.

New homeworld:
Childish curiosity about their new homeward caused Med to often escape the village to explore the ruins of the Great Jedi Library, despite warnings from his adoptive parents to never go near there. The whole area was part of an archaeological excavation project by some Jedi Lore Keepers. Unable to resist, Med would continue visiting the site though, reluctantly accompanied sometimes by Desi. Digging in the dirt often produced positive results as they would often uncover scroll parchments, artefacts and holocrons about the Jedi and the Sith. Desi could sense something wrong about the Sith items, but Med dismissed him. He found a secluded cave to store his finds and ended up creating an impressive secret hidden collection.

Med always managed to avoid detection whenever he visited the ruins as he had a natural ability to use the force to cloak himself. Eventually though, he was caught entering the area by Vim Fortuna, the lead Jedi Researcher. Impressed by Med and sensing potential in the child, Vim spoke with his parents about allowing him to go off-world and undergo formal training at the Jedi Academy. However, his parents refused deeming it too dangerous. Despite his constant pleading, Med's parents were firm in their refusal, creating a deep well of anger in him. From the little he had taught himself from the items he had recovered, he had learned how to cloud his feelings from being sensed by others. Vim felt great sympathy towards Med, and unable to sense the anger in him, she decided to allow him to aid in the continued excavation of the ruins. She also began informally teaching him in the ways of the force.

A few years later, Med had gained much knowledge from Vim and his secret collection. From he readings of the Sith scrolls and parchments, he believed that the dark side and light side of the force could ultimately be used in balance. He practised various dark-side skills in secret, but his affinity for collecting dark side artefacts and Sith teachings was soon to be uncovered. Vim and Med's parents had become aware that he was prone to disappearing for hours at a time. Vim followed him from the dig site and uncovered his collection. Disappointed in him, but believing she could still make him understand the danger of the dark side, Vim brought him back to village and informed his family of her intention to hand him over to the Jedi before he became dangerous. Angry at losing his collection and unwilling to go with the Jedi, Med used his force cloak ability to escape his room and sneaked onboard a transport supply ship, leaving his brother and adopted homeward behind.

A new path:
During the journey to Handooine, Med began to meditate, trying to discover what path the future held for him. He experienced visions of a ruined temple and indistinguishable force sensitive beings.

Once on Handooine, Med used his powers again to commandeer a ship of his own and travelled the galaxy searching for the temple in his vision. He made his way to the original Sith homeward of Korriban, unaware of its significance, but was unsuccessful in locating the temple. He eventually made his was to Malachor V. When he landed he discovered a number of force-sensitives who had also been drawn to the planet.

Despite being thought completely destroyed centuries before, they discovered that much of Trayus, the Sith Academy, had been rebuilt by an individual called Darth Proll. Proll had originally been a Prophet of the Dark Side, but had left the order to form his own Sith order. Under his guidance, Med and the others were trained to become Sith Warriors.
Proll believed that all force-sensitives could be turned to the dark side and be of use to him, if properly controlled, but the Rule of Two would never allow for this. 

Finally fulfilling his desire to undergo formal training, Med excelled at the Sith trials, mastering two forms of combat; Shii-Cho and Juyo. Finding both styles slightly limiting in their own way, he created a new style combining elements of both that he called "Kel-Maar". It allowed Med to aggressively take on take on a single combatant or multiple opponents at the same time and be victorious. This impressed Darth Proll who appointed Med as his Sith apprentice, bestowing on him the new name of Darth Knox.

During his training, Med began experiencing disturbing visions of his brother in pain and near death. Months went by and the visions continued. Fearing the worst, Med went against the wishes of his Master and left the temple to return to Ossus to investigate if these visions were true. On returning to his home village he found that his brother had indeed died during a tunnel collapse at one of the Jedi digs. In a moment of unparalleled anger, Med lashed out and went on a spree killing almost every Jedi at the temple ruins. A few managed to escape alive to report back to the Jedi council about this new Sith threat.

Rise to power:
Vowing revenge on the Jedi who he blamed for the death of his brother, Darth Knox returned to Malachor V. Confronting Darth Proll, Knox realised that under Proll's rule, the Sith would never destroy the Jedi. Being far superior in combat, Knox was able to best Proll in a duel and proclaimed himself new Dark Lord of the Sith. He took the unusual step of not immediately killing Darth Proll. Instead, he kept him prisoner for months, torturing information out of him about Sith skills and secrets.

One of his first acts was to sent some of the Sith warriors to Ossus to reclaim his stolen Sith collection. Spending time in study and meditation, Knox concluded that there were merits to both Darth Bane's Rule of Two and Skere Khan's Rule by the Strong. He created a new system where force-sensitive individuals would be trained as Sith Warriors as a group. The strongest of the group would become his new apprentice and the other would be sacrificed. Only an apprentice would have the opportunity to learn the historical techniques and secrets of the Sith. He believed this selection process would always ensure only the strongest and best would become Sith, extending their reach and power ultimately leading to their dominance in the galaxy, once the Jedi had been destroyed.

While deciding on who would be his new apprentice, Knox began to practice and master Sith Alchemy and Sith Sorcery, using information gained from the captive Darth Proll and the reclaimed Sith scrolls and artefacts. After successfully creating holocrons to record all the ancient information he had gained, and believing Proll to be of no more use, Knox had him executed. He then turned his focus to the various underground Sith movements around the galaxy. Knox aimed to destroy the Brotherhood of Darkness, the Nightsisters and any other groups that were offshoots of the Sith as a means to ensure his new order remained true, pure and strong.

Around 720BBY he finally took on an apprentice, a young human from the planet Ibanjji. He came to the attention of Knox because as he defeated three Sith warriors who were planning to overthrow Knox to claim leadership. Knox named his new apprentice Darth Praxis. For the next 30 years Darth Knox and Darth Praxis reigned death and destruction on the Jedi across the galaxy.

Rules end?
Like many Sith before him, Darth Knox began focussing on learning the secret of bringing someone back from the dead, in effort to extend his own life. He managed to achieve this feat, in a manner speaking. After years of conquest around the galaxy, a Squib contact loyal to Darth Knox informed him about a number of Sith amulets stored in a Jedi temple on Kashyyyk. These amulets were imbued with the dark side of the force and were an integral part of the Isaiwinokka Hoyakut incantation so he sent his forces to invade the temple where the amulets were stored.

In a battle that lasted three months, the Jedi were barely able to resist the wave of attacks from Darth Knox and his dark-side force creations. It is not entirely known how he was struck down or by who, but Darth Knox's body was discovered two weeks after the battle had ended. It is thought he was killed by his own Sith apprentice for demonstrating weakness due to inability to win the battle quickly. While his body was being loaded onto a transport skiff so it could be taken and burned he seemingly came back to life, killing everyone present. 

Escaping off the planet with a stolen Herglican cargo ship he discovered that Darth Praxis had already usurped his leadership role. Retreating into hiding to bide his time, he discovered that the Isaiwinokka Hoyakut had indeed worked, but there had been an unforeseen side effect. He was neither dead nor alive, but somewhere in-between…
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« Reply #33 on: December 23, 2015, 08:22:59 AM »

Name:           Cortaan Yulan
Affiliation:    Legion of Yulan
Era:               Post-Legacy Era



Early Biography
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-Childhood-

Born Cortaan Maktara Yulan on the planet of Kuat to a family of ship builders, Cortaan's upbringing would consist of anything but an average life.  His father, Juocaan Yulan, was a project manager of countless ships at the Kuat Drive Yards.  His mother, Marith Cortaan, cared for the home and shopped for any needed supplies.  During his young childhood, Cortaan would spend most of his time roaming with his friends about the streets of Kuat City causing all sorts of mischief.  Though young, he had developed quite the criminal record, having stolen from many shops a countless number of times and even went as far as stealing credits from those who were least suspecting. 

At the age of 14, his father had had enough of his son's brash behavior and put him to work alongside him in the shipyards.  At first, Cortaan did not take his punishment lightly, slacking off whenever he could and making enough minor "mistakes" that would eventually turn into major problems.  But, despite the loss of time, his father kept him on the force and Cortaan would eventually grow somewhat fond of the operation.  By the age of 16, his crime rate had essentially dropped to zero as he now spent most of his free time tinkering with gadgets in his room and even designing his own ships.  One such design sparked the interest of his father who then set up a small side-project for his son's design to become a reality.  The result was a small, single-seater starship capable of interplanetary travel that was equipped with shields and standard blaster canons hidden in the design.  He would soon after teach his son to fly in their personal ship before allowing him inside the single-seater, but that didn't keep Cortaan from trying to get inside and fiddle with some of the controls.  During one instance while on break, he mistakenly set off the blaster canons which ignited a brief chain-reaction of explosions and collapsing metal from a small amount of the machines used in the building process.  Infuriated, having taken a big hit from his superiors, his father banned him from ever setting foot in the starship again, also hinting that his son would be working his rear-off like no tomorrow to help pay off the damages.  Cortaan, though very knowledgeable about the mistake he made, thought his father's decision was unjust and overly harsh.  A ship of his own design was now forever off limits to him.  Redemption did not even seem to be an option at this point.

Cortaan retaliated.  He no longer cared about the job he had at hand.  He fled his home, he fled his family, he fled all that he had.  His only accomplice he took along with him was an old B1 battle droid he had found in a junkyard years before which he had pieced together and activated himself.  Taking a couple of his father's blasters that were hidden for emergency situations, he equipped both himself and the droid and then set off while his parents were out.  His destination?  Anywhere but Kuat.  All he needed was a starship, and thanks to his father's teachings, he could get behind the controls of just about any ship with ease.  However ... he didn't want any old starship ... he wanted his.

Getting to the ship would be quite the easy task.  Because of the mass amounts of workers constantly going to and from the the orbital shipyards, he would be able to make his way between docking ports with little to no chance of being recognized.  His droid would also make it through without issue as droids of all sorts traveled between the shipyards as well.  Upon arriving, he quickly located his ship which thankfully had not been moved.  He then had his droid fold into its de-active mode and fitted it within the small storage compartment.  Because of the mass amounts of workers, they paid him no mind as he fired it up and made a successful departure.  Never before had he left his home planet, and never had he gone any further then the outer border of the shipyards.  He proceeded away from Kuat as he watched it shrink in the distance, knowing now for certain that this was exactly what he wanted to do.

-Independence and devastation-

Though a starship, it was not designed to travel very far, but thankfully his planned destination was just around the corner.  Coruscant ... he had always wished to go there while growing up.  Upon arrival, he found it to be far more difficult to navigate and interact with than expected.  Having nothing more than the clothes on his back, his droid, his ship and a enough credits to barely get by on, he decided to scout around and find a temporary place to settle.  However, that very night, he heard news of an attack aboard the Kuat Drive Yards, one of rather immense proportions.  Cortaan may have fled to escape his father, but he still cared about him ... and he wanted to know if he was alright.

Once again, he blasted off in his starship with his sights set straight back for his home-world, and upon arrival, what he saw made him want to turn back.  There, directly before him, was an essentially destroyed sector 8 of the shipyard, the sector managed by his father.  Being unable to land due to the whole station being on lock-down, he made his way into Kuat City to find his mother.  He hoped his father would be present as well.  This, however, was not the case.  He entered his home, his mother in the corner, her face shoved into her hands as she sobbed.  Marith was startled at first, but upon seeing it was her son, ran to him in tears and hugged him tightly.  She told him that a sith had made his way into the shipyards with what looked to be a jedi in close pursuit.  Somehow the sector then exploded, but not until after the supposed jedi made his escape, leaving everyone who remained inside behind to suffer a horrifying fate ... Juocaan included.  What happened to the sith was unknown, but it was presumed that it died along with the others.

Devastated by the news, Cortaan dropped to his knees.  The only look on his face was disbelief as his thoughts raced around in his mind.  A jedi ... a jedi was the only one that had survived the explosion ... an explosion on a sector filled with hundreds if not thousands of workers.  How could he be the ONLY one to survive??  Cortaan was becoming infuriated.  HOW could that JEDI be the ONLY ONE TO SURVIVE???  He barged his way out of the house and made his way towards his ship.  He wanted answers, no matter the cost.  Heading deeper into the city, Cortaan landed and asked anyone he could find about what had happened.  One of those was a shipyard worker who claimed to have been in the next sector over at the time of the attack.  He said that he had seen what looked to be a sith land in the docking bay, only to have a jedi of sorts following directly behind.  A fight then ensued, sabers clashing, workers fleeing.  The sector then began to go under emergency protocol and sealed off all entrances into it, though there were many still on board.  The man then claimed that just before the airlock had fully closed, he witnessed what seemed to be the jedi attempting to crush one of the reactors within the complex without even touching it, the sith with his hands aimed in the same direction.  What happened next after his view was cut off was unknown ... except for the sight of a fleeing ship, the same the jedi arrived in, spotted out of the view ports of the next-door sector which was then followed by a massive explosion behind the blast door.

-The "truth"-

Cortaan almost couldn't believe what he was hearing.  He didn't WANT to believe what he was hearing ... surely it was the sith who was destroying the reactor, right?  Feeling even more enraged at this point, he fled back to his ship and set course back for Coruscant where he would make his way back to his temporary settlement.  Typing in the security code for the door given to him by the leaser, the doors swooped open to unveil a dark, robed figure facing the window on the opposite end of the room.  Cortaan jumped back for a moment and drew his blaster, his battle droid following suit.  The robed figure then spoke, a very low sounding voice echoed about the walls, telling him how it felt a strong vibe of the force emitting from Cortaan.  Cortaan, however, was not about to take any more shenanigans and demanded the figure show his face.  Upon request, the figure turned slowly, and once facing forward, it lowered its hood to expose an all black humanoid male being with a blue stripe down it's center head.  Demanding to know who he was, the being said that his name was Krool Abcardan.  Right after hearing this, Cortaan noticed what looked to be a lightsaber hilt attached to Krool's belt.  In a still demanding tone, he asked Krool if he was the sith at Kuat.  What followed as Krool spoke was the stuff of nightmares for Cortaan's ears.  In summary, Krool was a non-sith being pursued by a jedi who had followed him to Kuat.  Having nowhere else to go, he landed inside the docking bay of sector 8 and immediately defended himself from the jedi's attacks.  Krool was there because of an anonymous deal made with Kuat Drive Yards to supply ships.  Because the jedi was knowledgeable about this, Krool claimed that the jedi attempted to prevent the progression of the deal by damaging the station.  Just before reactor exploded, the jedi took off and he boarded a transport ship just leaving the docking bay before the sector ignited.

NOTE:  In reality, the assumed sith was there to cease the development of enemy ships by destroying the reactor (resorting to force crushing vital controls to it), the jedi then reaching out to try and stop him.  However, just as the damage was irreversible, Krool killed the jedi and boarded the jedi's ship to stage it as the jedi being responsible.

Cortaan, enraged like no other, threatened to kill Krool for not stopping the jedi from killing thousands of innocent lives, including his father's.  Krool however was very calm, using his persuasive techniques to eventually turn Cortaan toward his view of things, claiming that the jedi's techniques were at fault.  He mentioned how Cortaan had an exceptional vibe of the force and how he could be trained to reak revenge upon the jedi for their incompetent ways, to help prevent furthur deaths by these "defenders of the galaxy".  Cortaan was skeptic about the force claims, but lowered his weapon and acknowledged to serve as Krool's apprentice.  He would make the jedi pay for what they had done ... for they were not true defenders ... not in his eyes.  No ... they were too dangerous to be left alive.

A new life
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-Training under Krool Abcardan-

Years past as Cortaan discovered his force abilities and practiced like no tomorrow.  He also learned more early on of Krool's non-affiliation with the sith though sharing similar views.  Krool prefered it as he was able to preform his practices freely without any codes to follow except his own.  This pleased Cortaan as this allowed him to be more flexible in many aspects.  Krool had also taken interest in the battle droid used for his training, deciding that it would be a good idea to put the B1 battle droids back into action ... and he knew just how to get it done.

Now 21 and accompanied by a couple of purpose-built battle droids wherever he went, Cortaan was ready to set forth on his first assignments.  He was quick and he was quiet.  Hardly was he able to be spotted as he acted as both spy and assassin, though his main targets were not jedi ... at least not yet.  In most cases, if spotted and attacked, he would set his droids upon the target and make his escape.  In others, he would take his attacker out himself.

-The end of a master-

Cortaan felt that, after all these years, his master was not progressing him as fast as he should be. He had grown powerful, at least to his knowledge. He had succeeded in every training that Krool had put him through, however he was always being sent out on the same types of missions again and again and again. It had been requested before that his talents be tested in a much broader environment; however. his master would always claim that Cortaan had yet to reach such potential. Each mission that Cortaan completed, he would wait for his time to finally come. But ... as time grew on ... his patience began to run thin. His anger continued to swell within him, using all his might to hold it back in hopes that he may finally get his chance! ... Unless ... unless he already had that chance all along. Yes ... it had all become clear to him now. Krool was merely using him as a tool! A tool to do all of the dirty work for him! How DARE he!! It was at that moment that Cortaan stormed into his master's meditation chamber and lashed out mercilessly, not wasting a moment to turn what once was a living creature into a pile of flesh.

The deed ... was done. Cortaan Yulan had once again achieved independence, and this time ... he planned to keep it that way.

The birth of a Legion
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-Creation-

Shortly after the death of his master, Cortaan set forth in creating what he hoped would be a growing adversary against his sworn enemy, one he had yet to face. With the company of his personal droid, he would establish the Legion of Yulan.

-Foundation-

Shortly after its beginning, Cortaan went in search of a new home to establish a base of operations. Multiple planets were visited but none had shown much promise. It was when he eventually made his way to Kalee that his hopes were re-established. Knowledgeable of the inhabitant's war-like nature, he proceeded with great caution. It was within a valley near the ocean that he would stumble upon a small settlement around some ancient ruins. Barely after arriving, he was confronted by a local Kaleesh how stated himself to be Mathazar Signas, guardian and leader of the tribe. The Kaleesh warned him to leave the planet immediately, however Cortaan did not come all of this way to simple be turned away. Before getting out a proper response, the Kaleesh charged and proceeded to attack. Without drawing a single blade, he managed to defeat (but not kill) his skilled opponent. The being pleaded that he leave his people be as they could not take any more lethal attacks. It was then that Cortaan stated his actual intentions, assuring the tribe leader that he was not there to kill, but rather look for a possible settlement. To help reach his goal, he offered assisted protection if he would be given enough land and resources needed to form the foundations of his new legion. Mathazar was hesitant, but agreed under one condition ... that he be allowed to join Cortaan at his side. Cortaan, knowledgeable of Mathazar's skills, thought it over and finally agreed. Perhaps he would serve him very well.

-Development-

Not intending to back down on his word, Cortaan set forth in creating the means necessary to keep the local tribe safe. Using connections he had back on Kuat, he managed to strike a deal using very "persuasive" tactics to have built for him a constant production line of B1 battle droids. If his personal B1 droid was able to serve him well all of these years, then he knew a whole army would do wonders. Quickly, the droids came in, almost immediately being put the the test under Mathazar's command as the raiders who usually visited to pillage the valley for valuable goods were quickly killed before they could escape or spread word of their existence. At the same time, Cortaan was converting the ruins and building structures of his own. Everything was going according to plan.

The accident
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-Out of nowhere-

It had been approximately two years. His Legion with the local Kaleesh had grown a great deal and his droids were holding off all forms of attack with ease, his apprentice converting into a much stronger and brilliant leader. Little did he and Mathazar know, however, that during a recent raid, a transmission managed to slip out regarding their location and who they were (spy droid). The recipients of the transmission were unknown, but they did not share any information with others. Instead, they planned a surprise attack. Being brilliant and forging transmissions, the beings managed to fool Cortaan into thinking that he was needed at the Kuat Drive Yards, the location where the droid were being made, to deal with a suspicious Jedi.

As Cortaan prepared to depart, Mathazar standing by on the landing pad, a rouge rocket came out of nowhere and destroyed the ship as it was clearing the tree-tops. The fireball of Cortaan's personal star ship came crashing down only to land on Mathazar who failed to evade in time. Unbeknownst to them, their battle droids managed to fight off the proceeding ground assault without any direct command, all traces of their opponents knowledge of their whereabouts remaining secret.

The locals rushed to their aid and managed to use the recourse brought in by Cortaan to retrieve help. The duo was quickly retrieved, both individuals being horribly injured. Cortaan had heavy damage to his face, eyes, throat and chest. He was quickly operated on once at a proper care facility, his organs that were damaged beyond repair being replaced by prosthetics. When he woke ... nothing looked the same. His vision ... it was as if her were staring directly through a transparent computer screen. He was able to look around and see clearly, but it looked like a live video feed. He reached up and touched his eye, hoping he would feel some sort of pain ... but instead ... it felt hard. No longer did he see through his own eyes. As he looked around, he then noticed a circular disk protruding from his chest, a light circulating around the perimeter. He tapped it a couple times, feeling the the vibrations reached down below the skin. He again began to feel enraged as he realized that not only were eyes replaced, but his heart was too. The light on the prosthetic heart began to circulate faster to indicate and increase in blood flow like a real heart would do when under stress. Cortaan breathed heavily and suddenly tried to growl ... but ... nothing came out. Nothing at all. He attempted to speak but noticed that it was only air. His panic settled in now knowing that his voice was gone too. WHAT ELSE COULD HE HAVE POSSIBLY LOST?? He rage was set in full now, the recent memories of the transmission coming through warning of a Jedi, the immediate blast right as he was taking off. Could it have been the Jedi that discovered his location and set him up? It had to be! Surely no other being would dare attempt such an attack with the hoards of battle droids around.

His anger was about to unleash when he suddenly calmed himself and remembered Mathazar. After that moment of realization, he rose from his bed and attempted to see if his apprentice had survived. As her exited his room, sure enough ... there he was. Or ... what was left of him. Mathazar was seen floating in a bacta tank, his legs gone, his arms gone ... all that remained was his torso and head. Wires protruded from all over the end of his missing appendages. He attempted to speak with Mathazar but again remembered that he had no voice. Cortaan concentrated and attempted to speak through to him using the force. Mathazar promptly spoke up, assuring him that whoever did this to the two of them would not live their mistakes down.  Cortaan immediately began planning to have him rebuilt, along with finding a way for himself to speak.

The Jedi would never ... ever ... live this down.
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« Reply #34 on: December 23, 2015, 08:27:53 AM »

Name: Cortaan Yulan
Affiliation:  Legion of Yulan
Post-Legacy Era
Possesses prosthetic eyes, heart and voice





Nice! Very nice! Lots of detail in your backstory
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« Reply #35 on: December 28, 2015, 10:10:58 AM »

My Star Wars Character:

Name: John Eclipse (Son of the non-canon Captain Juno Eclipse, conceived from only midichlorians)
Homeworld: Kashyyyk
Lives: John Eclipse's life takes place during an alternate timeline about 30 years after the Battle of Endor (Destruction of the Second Death Star)
Gender: Male
Species: Human
Affiliation: Not a member of the New Jedi Order, but leans towards the light side.
Allegiance: To neither the dark nor the light.
Weapon of Choice: Long Hilted Green Saber
Fighting Style: Hybrid of Form VI (Niman) and Form III (Soresu)

My Interpretation of Eclipse is that The Force Unleashed II is nonexistent. When Galen Marek (Starkiller) is killed by the Emperor during his duel on the Death Star, he becomes one with The Force and he influences the midichlorians within Juno Eclipse and she bears a son. He is about 5 years of age at the time of the Battle of Endor, but he is hidden away on Kashyyyk. As he grows older, his mother eventually gifts him with a newly repaired PROXY, and a fully upgraded Rogue Shadow, he travels to Dagobah to discover the truth and trains with Master Luke Skywalker.

Let me know what you all think!

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Dominix LE V4 (Obsidian V3) - Consular Green
Arbiter (Obsidian Lite) - Consular Green
Archon V2.1 (Obsidian Lite) - Guardian Blue
Liberator V3 (Stunt) - Guardian Blue


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TheLostSmuggler
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Force Alignment: 7
Posts: 75


« Reply #36 on: December 29, 2015, 07:53:44 AM »

Well let's see...

I personally suck at naming my people, but my guys name is Naasan Rakěk. He was about 11 when his father was killed during the battle of the second Death Star. He spent his remaining years growing up on Dantooine with his mother, who unfortunately passed away when he was 21. While cleaning out some of his parents stuff, he heard a strange voice calling out to him. He found his fathers ancient weapon, and snapped it on instinctively, it's white blade glowing in the dark. He now travels the galaxy searching for answers to who his parents were and more importantly who he is.

Wears: leather belt (sometimes), black formerly imperial officer coat, regular shirts and pants
Weps:  Fathers Blaster, Lightsaber, Thermal Detonators.
Species: Human
Follows: The light side and some of the dark (like his father)
Home: Dantooine
Ship: Old rebel era X-Wing fighter (eventually gains possession of a Clone era ARC-170 and a Jedi Starfighter)

Well I hope I didn't miss anything, and let me know if there's anything non-cannon or incorrect.



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Junta Kharr
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Force Alignment: 7
Posts: 58

Jedi Knight


« Reply #37 on: December 29, 2015, 07:40:44 PM »

My character is Junta Kharr. He's a Jedi in the Old Republic setting. His master (Sa'ari) battled in the Mandalorian wars and was killed some time after the conclusion by a vengeful mando'a.

Junta strove for vengeance, but remembered his master's teachings, and instead turned the mando in to the Republic.
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richmbailey
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Posts: 478


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« Reply #38 on: December 31, 2015, 02:40:03 PM »

Just a concept. Photomanips using stock images found online. Both sabers are two of my custom hilts.

Name: Calen Kass
Species: Human
Occupation: Jedi Detective (Jedi Knight)
Base of Operations: Coruscant Underground
Era: The Old Republic



Name: Briss Jetao
Species: Mirialan
Occupation: Jedi Detective (Padawan)
Base of Operations: Coruscant Underground
Era: The Old Republic

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Dark Monarch (AS) Obsidian Sound
Bellicose (FO) Obsidian Sound
Graflex (GB) Obsidian Sound
Flamberge (BR) Stunt
Prophecy (GB) Stunt
Aeon CE V3 (AS) Stunt [Grab Bag]
Dark Shock Hybrid (BR FoC FO) 3rd party Sound
Consular (CG) Obsidian Sound

Raging Abe
Knight Apprentice
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Force Alignment: 15
Posts: 32


« Reply #39 on: January 02, 2016, 11:45:17 AM »

IMPERIAL DATA LOG 1187738

NAME:       DAVIN QUINN HIRR

NICKNAME:    CHANCE   

BIRTHPLACE:   MESIRIAN

AGE:       28

HEIGHT:      181cm   

WEIGHT:   86kg

EYE COLOUR:    GRAY

BIOGRAPHY: Born on the planet of Mesirian to an Altisian Jedi Master 24 years before the outbreak of the Clone Wars, HIRR was noted as being gifted with a strong connection with to the Force.

Given over to the care of the unorthodox Jedi Master Djinn Atlis at a young age, HIRR was raised in a Padawan Cohort on board the Altisian Jedi Praxeum Ship the chu’unthor and began his training as a Jedi.

As a Padawan HIRR showed a natural affinity with the Force and proved to be an adept and diligent student learning, in the Altisian way of teaching, from numerous Jedi Knights and Masters on board the chu’unthor.

After the construction of his Lightsaber, which produced a distinctive amber blade, HIRR again proved to be a dedicated student and in time became skilled in all the classical Lightsaber forms, but favoured no single form over any other.

Alongside his studies of the Force HIRR, unusually for a Jedi who often maintained a reliance on the Force over their physical form, also adhered to a disciplined and rigorous exercise regime including acrobatics, calisthenics and the practice of the Martial Art of Teras Kasi which led to an athletic and muscular physique.
Coupled with a steady mind, even temperament and the rapid gain of the required skills and knowledge HIRR was put forward as a candidate for the Jedi Trials which were successfully completed the Trials at the age of 16.

Upon his appointment as a Jedi Knight, HIRR chose to follow the path of a Jedi Sentinel, expanding upon his powers in the Force whilst perfecting non-force related skills such as covert operations, intelligence gathering, and starship piloting.

Upon the outbreak of the Clone Wars HIRR had grown into a skilled pilot, and a confident and well-rounded soldier, albeit with a rebellious and independent streak which was often noted to be a trait of the Altisian Jedi. Upon the outbreak of hostilities, along with several other of the Altisan Jedi, HIRR chose to join the Republic and it was documented that he fought with courage and distinction in several major engagements throughout the Clone War.

HIRR was known to have been present at the Jedi Temple on Coruscant during the execution of Order 66 where security recording showed him defending the Temple combatting the Clone troopers of the 501st Legion and it is suspected that he survived and escaped the planet to go into hiding escaping the opening stages of Jedi Purge as no record of his remains were logged during the subsequent cleanse of the Jedi Temple.

At this time his whereabouts and status are currently unknown.

--- RECORD ENDS ---
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BurceChuat
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Force Alignment: 195
Posts: 1008


From my point of view, I have the high ground!


« Reply #40 on: January 25, 2016, 10:35:14 PM »

Name: Bruck Chun
Homeworld: Corellia
Born: 3663 BBY (Old Republic era)
Species: Human
Gender: Male
Height: 1.7 meters
Hair color: Dark brown, nearly black
Eye color: Dark brown
Skin color: Tan
Affiliations: Green Jedi (formerly), Jedi Order, Galactic Republic


My character was born into an ancient Green Jedi family, but was eventually sent to learn from the "real" Jedi as his parents thought that the Green Jedi Council was becoming corrupt. While he studied under the Jedi Order's masters and was taught The Living Force aspect, he eventually formed his own viewpoints on the Force, and became an early practitioner of the Potentium viewpoint. This viewpoint towards the Force allows him to use both light and dark side powers, similar to a Gray Jedi. However, unlike Gray Jedi, he kills those he deems too dangerous to live, which seems to be getting more frequent every day...
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Owned: Sentinel LE, TRI GB, V4 sound

Siblings':
Standard Issue, AS
Dark Apprentice, HP

Wishlist: Catalyst, Guardian, Manticore, Prophecy V3

TheDrow
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Force Alignment: 15
Posts: 128


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« Reply #41 on: January 26, 2016, 03:13:10 PM »

Mason wasn't anything special. All of his people were Force and he was just...well average. But when he had heard that the Jedi, he knew this was his chance to escape the mundane and become something greater. Well, he wasn't wrong; however, it would not be greatness on the Light Side but the Dark. It was one week before his 12th birthday that the shuttles came and the last day Mason would see his family or home, until the day he would fall. Mason spent the next 6 years training in the Dark side of the Force, mastering many techniques ranging from Force Crush/Push to Mind Alteration and even dabbling into Force Lightning. Mason was exceptionally brutal in his combat seemlessly integrating Force Techniques with his Juyo/Vapaad style. He would go on to slay many Jedi Knights and Padawan, but never a Master. Until, that is, when his Dark Master confronted the Jedi Master Yuon Ki Bauld. A human from Haruun Kal that looked very familiar to Mason. The one who trained his Master and birthed his father. Mason was confused about what he was feeling. It was rage and hate but these were not new emotions, he had felt them every single day since he was taken. But it was all, 100%, towards his Master. He couldn't move or speak or breath...until the final blow. When his Master removed the arms of his Grandfather, Masons rage broke. The Force inside him lashed out and scared the ground. His Master felt his power and smiled believing he had finally broken Masons mind but in actuality, Mason had just decided to kill his Master. Mason reached out with his mind and felt his Master, laughing and enjoying the pain he was causing them both as he drove his crimson lightsaber into his former masters shoulder. "Die!" Mason screamed in his mind and used his Force Crush to squeeze his Masters brain inside his skull. "He's dead...finally! I'm free of Him! Grandfather! I...". As Mason looked to his Grandfather, the joy fell from his face as he looked down to see his old masters saber fall across his Grandfathers chest, bisecting him instantly. Mason didn't leave this place for 9 years choosing skills. Now he has returned, a Grey Jedi with a unique Hurrikane Crystal hued Violet defending the Balance of the Force.

Name: Mason
Homeworld:  Haruun Kal
Born: 3653 BBY (Old Republic era)
Species: Human
Gender: Male
Height: 5'11"
Hair color: Shaved, Long Peppered Beard
Eye color: Green
Skin color: Golden Tan
Affiliations: Grey Jedi, Republic (in times of war)
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I have walked the Dark, tasted its power, bathed in the blood of Jedi and Padawan.
Now I am feared by all who seek to unbalance the force, for I am seeking redemption for my past.

Dark Initiate V4-Violet Amethyst---Windu's Guile Crystal obtained in Pazzak game

Darth Knox
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« Reply #42 on: January 28, 2016, 09:17:53 PM »

New and improved backstory (well, tweaked a little bit) but this time with pictures!!

http://www.saberforum.com/index.php?topic=27744.0
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Darth Logos
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Peace is a Lie...


« Reply #43 on: January 29, 2016, 09:35:49 AM »

Mason wasn't anything special. All of his people were Force and he was just...well average. But when he had heard that the Jedi, he knew this was his chance to escape the mundane and become something greater. Well, he wasn't wrong; however, it would not be greatness on the Light Side but the Dark. It was one week before his 12th birthday that the shuttles came and the last day Mason would see his family or home, until the day he would fall. Mason spent the next 6 years training in the Dark side of the Force, mastering many techniques ranging from Force Crush/Push to Mind Alteration and even dabbling into Force Lightning. Mason was exceptionally brutal in his combat seemlessly integrating Force Techniques with his Juyo/Vapaad style. He would go on to slay many Jedi Knights and Padawan, but never a Master. Until, that is, when his Dark Master confronted the Jedi Master Yuon Ki Bauld. A human from Haruun Kal that looked very familiar to Mason. The one who trained his Master and birthed his father. Mason was confused about what he was feeling. It was rage and hate but these were not new emotions, he had felt them every single day since he was taken. But it was all, 100%, towards his Master. He couldn't move or speak or breath...until the final blow. When his Master removed the arms of his Grandfather, Masons rage broke. The Force inside him lashed out and scared the ground. His Master felt his power and smiled believing he had finally broken Masons mind but in actuality, Mason had just decided to kill his Master. Mason reached out with his mind and felt his Master, laughing and enjoying the pain he was causing them both as he drove his crimson lightsaber into his former masters shoulder. "Die!" Mason screamed in his mind and used his Force Crush to squeeze his Masters brain inside his skull. "He's dead...finally! I'm free of Him! Grandfather! I...". As Mason looked to his Grandfather, the joy fell from his face as he looked down to see his old masters saber fall across his Grandfathers chest, bisecting him instantly. Mason didn't leave this place for 9 years choosing skills. Now he has returned, a Grey Jedi with a unique Hurrikane Crystal hued Violet defending the Balance of the Force.

Name: Mason
Homeworld:  Haruun Kal
Born: 3653 BBY (Old Republic era)
Species: Human
Gender: Male
Height: 5'11"
Hair color: Shaved, Long Peppered Beard
Eye color: Green
Skin color: Golden Tan
Affiliations: Grey Jedi, Republic (in times of war)

Who said you could use my name?
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Scorpion* (BR)
Emerald Mantis CE* 
Chosen One* (BR)
Shock LE* (FO)
Archon V2.1* (CG)
Dark Prophecy(BR) {Thanks Qui-Lar}
Menace CE* (BH)
Flamberge CE* (BR)
Initiate LE V2 (BR)
D Initiate V3 (CG)
Manticore CE* (SY)
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Dark Arbiter* (VA)
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TheDrow
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« Reply #44 on: January 29, 2016, 09:16:58 PM »

Who said you could use my name?

The Force gave it to me. Don't like it, Force bite me.
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I have walked the Dark, tasted its power, bathed in the blood of Jedi and Padawan.
Now I am feared by all who seek to unbalance the force, for I am seeking redemption for my past.

Dark Initiate V4-Violet Amethyst---Windu's Guile Crystal obtained in Pazzak game

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