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Author Topic: Adventures the Malycrons Part 1 "jungle of fear"  (Read 1262 times)
Palan
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« on: September 02, 2011, 04:05:58 PM »

            The thick jungle terrain was swiftly knocked aside as Palando Malkron's rented air speeder glided through malastares deepest jungle.  Palando recently awarded the rank of knight sat in the luxorious pilot seat, Resting for the approaching investigation. That was palando's job. To help inforce the republic's inner laws by, find and search missions and some times investiging potential threats. Although being a jedi investigater had its downsides. Like inspecting spice raids. Thats what brought palando to Malastare. A collasal spice war deep in an abandoned pod-racer track outpost.The jedi council believe there to be more behind the matter.
                                               The speeder swooped down in a nearby clearing.  He popped open the canopy and stepped out into the clearing. He Made sure his lightsaber was secure on his belt and trudged off towards the Outpost. The air smelled of blast carbine, Smoldering spice, and dead dug. He felt a disruptive disturbance in the force, He stretched out his senses and before he heard the bolt fire his lightning fast reflexes had his lightsaber in hand and blocking three blast from coming within contact of vital points of his body. Dugs probably coming back to scavenge therespice or fallen comrades from the site. With one fling of his hand and with the guidance of the force his lightsaber spun and taking down three of his alien assaulters. The other three he pushed against a thick tree. His goal here was'nt, to attack but to retrieve information. Powering off the cobalt blade he put it gingerly back in its place. He decided searching here would surmount to nothing maybe the surrounding area will give him more of a start.
                                                                               The low arch that covered the abandoned path was weathered and destroyed.  Palando's boots crunched as it landed on the thick moss that covered the track. Once he entered the other side of the outpost he saw very few. As he scanned the area, he was beginning to lose hope until he saw thew brocken dow rusting podracer resting on some debrees. Inbetween he saw some bleeping light. Then heard a low whistle, he slowly approached not sencing any force around he thought it might be a bomb. Out of the rubble came a little indigo astromech droid. It was horribly damaged but still runnung that was the best luck he had all day. It may have recorded the battle or belonged to one of the gangs. He hefted the droid on his shoulder and began to walk back towards his speeder. After placing it safely in a cargo slot he powered it down saving any info before it crashed. Before getting ready himself he heard a low chuckle. the hairs on his nack prickled. " Going somewhere, young fool ? ". After the shrill voice pierced his eardrum it was ivaded by the loud ignition of a lightsaber.
                                                                                  " The dark union, doesnt like this tampering of evidence. " said the dark acolyte standing before Palando. Palando stepped away from the speeder and toward the beast at bay.
" There is no tampering of evidence here. Run along." Palando said calmly. He was'nt afraid, he was one of the best lightsaber duelist in his training.
" I now see that foolishness is allowed in the order. " The dark apparition removed his dark outer robe revealing a bald, pale, and evil man staring at him. 'Rayth Allycore' Palando thought. three years ago a jedi knight made a huge uproar and was banished into exile so angry with the councils desicion he seduced three padwans into following him and they formed a secret orginization. Palando doesnt know that though.
"So Rayth, youve decided to reveal yourself atlast." Palando shrugged off his cloak and taking up his lightsaber, unleashing the cyan blade.
"Nobod'll know though because you'll be dead, " Rayth moved into the Makashi opening stance.
"So be it." Palando said moving into the Shien stance the fight began.
                                                                 Rayth lunged first in the usual fencing style of form II that Palando was familiar with. Although, Palando preferred form V Because it fit his bulky size, Which also helped his Wookie master. Palando had another advantage with the jungle terrain because of his trainig sessions on Kashyyyk. Palando parried the orange blade, and brought a heavy over head slash down. blocked that and flipped back a bit to get some room. Palando anticipated this and lunged forward to continue the fight. Rayth blocked a few heay bulked attacks his opponent put against him. Palando then put a high kick in the chest of Rayth. Rayth faltered abit and Palando tried to use it against him, Rayth moved into the defensive form III, and put a boney elbow in palando's ribs.
                                                                 From a distance they looked  like a golden and silver serpent fighting for dominance. The two Force weilders tyring and there form now sloppy. Drenched in sweat palando shoved a strong arm in front of himself and pushed Rayth far against a tree. With the brief moment Palando basked himself in the force and leaped at his attacker with one final blow before he fell back from dehydration and tiredness. Rayth in fury from being thrown into a tree, let violent indigo energy leap  from his hand and into the unkowing palando. The last thing Palando saw and heard was a yell of vitory from the demonic opressor, and the loud screech of a jetpack falling from the air.
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« Reply #1 on: September 02, 2011, 04:18:08 PM »

           The thick jungle terrain was swiftly knocked aside as Palando Malkron's rented air speeder glided through malastares deepest jungle.  Palando recently awarded the rank of knight sat in the luxorious pilot seat, Resting for the approaching investigation. That was palando's job. To help inforce the republic's inner laws by, find and search missions and some times investiging potential threats. Although being a jedi investigater had its downsides. Like inspecting spice raids. Thats what brought palando to Malastare. A collasal spice war deep in an abandoned pod-racer track outpost.The jedi council believe there to be more behind the matter.
                                               The speeder swooped down in a nearby clearing.  He popped open the canopy and stepped out into the clearing. He Made sure his lightsaber was secure on his belt and trudged off towards the Outpost. The air smelled of blast carbine, Smoldering spice, and dead dug. He felt a disruptive disturbance in the force, He stretched out his senses and before he heard the bolt fire his lightning fast reflexes had his lightsaber in hand and blocking three blast from coming within contact of vital points of his body. Dugs probably coming back to scavenge therespice or fallen comrades from the site. With one fling of his hand and with the guidance of the force his lightsaber spun and taking down three of his alien assaulters. The other three he pushed against a thick tree. His goal here was'nt, to attack but to retrieve information. Powering off the cobalt blade he put it gingerly back in its place. He decided searching here would surmount to nothing maybe the surrounding area will give him more of a start.
                                                                               The low arch that covered the abandoned path was weathered and destroyed.  Palando's boots crunched as it landed on the thick moss that covered the track. Once he entered the other side of the outpost he saw very few. As he scanned the area, he was beginning to lose hope until he saw thew brocken dow rusting podracer resting on some debrees. Inbetween he saw some bleeping light. Then heard a low whistle, he slowly approached not sencing any force around he thought it might be a bomb. Out of the rubble came a little indigo astromech droid. It was horribly damaged but still runnung that was the best luck he had all day. It may have recorded the battle or belonged to one of the gangs. He hefted the droid on his shoulder and began to walk back towards his speeder. After placing it safely in a cargo slot he powered it down saving any info before it crashed. Before getting ready himself he heard a low chuckle. the hairs on his nack prickled. " Going somewhere, young fool ? ". After the shrill voice pierced his eardrum it was ivaded by the loud ignition of a lightsaber.
                                                                                  " The dark union, doesnt like this tampering of evidence. " said the dark acolyte standing before Palando. Palando stepped away from the speeder and toward the beast at bay.
" There is no tampering of evidence here. Run along." Palando said calmly. He was'nt afraid, he was one of the best lightsaber duelist in his training.
" I now see that foolishness is allowed in the order. " The dark apparition removed his dark outer robe revealing a bald, pale, and evil man staring at him. 'Rayth Allycore' Palando thought. three years ago a jedi knight made a huge uproar and was banished into exile so angry with the councils desicion he seduced three padwans into following him and they formed a secret orginization. Palando doesnt know that though.
"So Rayth, youve decided to reveal yourself atlast." Palando shrugged off his cloak and taking up his lightsaber, unleashing the cyan blade.
"Nobod'll know though because you'll be dead, " Rayth moved into the Makashi opening stance.
"So be it." Palando said moving into the Shien stance the fight began.
                                                                 Rayth lunged first in the usual fencing style of form II that Palando was familiar with. Although, Palando preferred form V Because it fit his bulky size, Which also helped his Wookie master. Palando had another advantage with the jungle terrain because of his trainig sessions on Kashyyyk. Palando parried the orange blade, and brought a heavy over head slash down. blocked that and flipped back a bit to get some room. Palando anticipated this and lunged forward to continue the fight. Rayth blocked a few heay bulked attacks his opponent put against him. Palando then put a high kick in the chest of Rayth. Rayth faltered abit and Palando tried to use it against him, Rayth moved into the defensive form III, and put a boney elbow in palando's ribs.
                                                                 From a distance they looked  like a golden and silver serpent fighting for dominance. The two Force weilders tyring and there form now sloppy. Drenched in sweat palando shoved a strong arm in front of himself and pushed Rayth far against a tree. With the brief moment Palando basked himself in the force and leaped at his attacker with one final blow before he fell back from dehydration and tiredness. Rayth in fury from being thrown into a tree, let violent indigo energy leap  from his hand and into the unkowing palando. The last thing Palando saw and heard was a yell of vitory from the demonic opressor, and the loud screech of a jetpack falling from the air.


Thats was good Palan, thanks for posting.

Just a few misspelled words, but we all do it.

I'd like to read more
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Palan
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« Reply #2 on: September 02, 2011, 04:19:52 PM »

Yeah wrote it bout' a year ago and had to correct alot of stuff. still in high school though got work on alot a stuff.
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« Reply #3 on: September 02, 2011, 04:26:16 PM »

Yeah wrote it bout' a year ago and had to correct alot of stuff. still in high school though got work on alot a stuff.

Just keep at it man. Grin
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