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« Reply #75 on: October 27, 2017, 02:53:03 AM »

Sevra

“Protect me! Protect me!” The Quarren screamed as the arcs of lightning neared.  How pathetic, he couldn’t even protect himself from a little force lightning.

It seemed to Sevra there were only two people in the arena not panicking, one was the man unleashing a torrent of death below, the other was her.  In fact she felt strangely at home, as though the breath of death coursing across the spectators was a familiar summer breeze.

The night sister’s full attention was on blocking the lightning, standing in front of Sevra and the Quarren. Sevra shrugged and plunged claw into the night sisters spine grasped it and pulled.  She didn’t know why she did these things sometimes, it was like some strange ghost moved her limbs for her.

Sliding it out she swung round to the astounded Quarren who just stared at her with his beady aquatic eyes, he made to say something but the bloody claw was deep into his skull before he could. 

She couldn’t even remember lifting her arm.

She stared down at the blood gurgling corpses. Seems he didn’t have some kind of hidden power after all.  Perhaps he was what the Mandolorians and the Twi’lek whispered, just an insane cultist with more money than sense.

She watched as the beast of the arena carved a bloody path toward a Hutt.  He was impressive, so familiar, she felt an impulse to reach out to him blow through her, but she left it. 

She stood for a while longer, as order returned and what passed for security tried to usher the few survivors out of the charnel house, wondering what to do next.
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The Mansion had always been empty, but now without its usual denizens it felt even more so.  The only other life form, a small swirl in the force in the back rooms, the prize that had most delighted the Quarren on their last raid. 

He knew the Jedi were transporting relics, but to find a child the Jedi had collected for training was a real boon.  The mother had seemed strangely familiar to Sevra and had screamed strange things at her when she had found her,
“What, sis…what’s happening, I don’t under…” Sevra had knocked her out to shut her up, the Night Sister had taken her and the child she was hiding.

She wandered the halls looking at the Quarrens prized collections.  The warm embracing feeling she got when she touched some of the objects was so intoxicating, she truly understood why he had had her kill so many of these Jedi to get them. 

She had obeyed him for a reason she didn’t know, she had killed him for reasons she didn’t understand.  She was aware of herself and her actions, but the force behind them was lost to her.  The call to kill was so strong at times, and the Quarren had directed her to the Jedi to satiate that, eight so far, their lightsabres arranged in a neat little display case in the main audience chamber. 

She felt disconnected, like she was watching some kind of play through the eyes of a character called Sevra, her actions guided by some overarching story that she was just watching play out.

She would sometimes see things, usually faces or clothes, blue and white ones mostly, in the crowd as she had escorted the Quarren about, that reminded her of things, of something…a word, a name…”What is your name”…the question repeated on her, she woke each day with it unresolved on her mind.

The answer was just on the tip of her tongue, and she just couldn’t seem to find it, as though it had been very deliberately buried in her mind. 

The closest she would come to remembering was when she was filled with the force, fighting or inspecting some of the strange devices the Quarren had collected.  Perhaps somewhere in that hoard was the answer...”What is your name?”

In her aimless or invisibly guided wandering, she had come just outside the nursery where the nanny droid attended to the sleeping girl.

 The mother had been apoplectic when she came to on the way back, the Night sister had to put her under again. 

When they returned she had been taken somewhere in the under levels.  What had become of her since Sevra didn’t know, she had been sent on another raid, and when she got back the mothers raging cyclone in the force was just gone, they had left for the arena only an hour later.   

She looked over the small sleeping child, her claw digging grooves into the wood of the crib.
“What is your name?” she asked aloud, a part of her hoping the child would answer.

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The dungeons beneath the main mansion were a complex labyrinth of tunnels built over centuries.  Colours and styles changed hall to hall, but the dank dripping along the walls was a constant feature.

She had awoken from a typically fitful sleep and been drawn down here, her body as usual moving her without her conscious input.  There was a whisper in the winds of the force down here, something sorrowful. 

Like an insect to a light she wandered in crooked paths toward the sound. 

She had been dreaming about her last fight with, against two Jedi, a Duros and a Kel Dor, the Mandolorians had as usual used a gravity generator to drop it out of hyper space, used ion cannons to disable then boarded.  The Mandolorians didn’t even bother to try and enter first after their previous losses, they just handed Sevra a few smoke and gas grenades, she would chuck them in then charge.  The Kel Dor she had killed first, quickly and easily, but the Duros…the Duros had held her back with the force, for a few moments, then as she bashed her way with the force through to it he had tried to affect her mind. 

“Why are you doing this,” he had asked,
She had simply ducked under his yellow blade ripped his chest open….but now she wished she had talked to him…perhaps the Jedi held the answers she sought.

Aware of her external surroundings again she was in a large room with chains hanging from the ceiling, old dried blood spattered on the floor, wheeled cabinets with strange painful looking implements littered about, and toward the back a faint blue glow coming from a large rectangular box.

The whispers seemed to intensify as she neared it, still to indistinct to interpret.

She peered into its transparent top, beneath was the cut and bloodied body, held in stasis, of the mother she had captured.  Her face was bruised and bloody, there were holes from brutal needles in her arms, drawn measurement lines on her breast and large lacerations as though someone had tried to implant something very sharp there.

She felt a whirlwind of rage within her….but she was looking on at this rage from somewhere outside…the feelings trembling her body, the anger and grief that through the force was causing the building to quake, the chains to rattle and the cabinets to implode, were being felt and caused by someone else…that invisible person who occupied her body in a silent way she couldn’t comprehend.

She was crying.  She wept for a woman she didn’t recognize, for a past she couldn’t remember…And to those invisibly motivated tears she added her own. 

She knew then she had lost something, something had been taken from her. 
The woman lying before her had known what that was.
Somewhere amongst the winds of the aether someone else must know.

The Aether…she checked her thoughts….what was the aether?
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« Reply #76 on: October 27, 2017, 11:22:46 AM »

Sevra's duality comes full circle now: the body she occupies dong things on instinct while primal emotions leech through her "conscious" as it were.  Now that is just terrifying.  Speaking of...
Again, the Aethen Force Users remind me of Shakespeare's Tempest: able to control, DOMINATE, the atmosphere around them.  Seems that their relationship to the Force is more primordial.  Perhaps testament to what Jedi (people) could do...if they didn't "unlearn" things as they age.
It's incredible: three disparate authors (you, TR, Karm) yet ALL outstanding, unique, and interesting stories; it just amazes me that you've congregated here in one place.  Funny thing is: none of this reads like "fan fiction"  Wink  LSG, the skill of weaving these separate threads and then having them come together is a HUGE payoff!  And it's working  Cheesy

Until next installment friends  Smiley
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« Reply #77 on: October 27, 2017, 07:34:02 PM »

I have to echo Dutchman.  The power these guys possess is terrifying.  And Sevra's duality is very interesting.  The Night Sister apparently wasn't as successful in eradicating Sevra's personality as she thought.  I am hoping that she rescued her sister.

At any rate, I am certainly hoping there is one more chapter or epilogue?  :-)

And thanks Dutch for the compliment!  I don't know if my work is at the level you credit, but I have GREATLY enjoyed the works you, LSG and Teagan have put forth.  They are excellent stories with great character and movement yet extremely disparate in style and approach.  As Dutch said, they don't read like the typical fan-fic pieces.  I am honored to be among this group.  :-) 

Looking forward to great things ahead.  :-)
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« Reply #78 on: October 27, 2017, 08:51:05 PM »

I thought I commented on these last ones, but I guess not. And now I don't really need to. TD and Karm have both said it all. I love how TD always leaves out himself when talking about the different stories. He should know by know that his story is just a great as yours LSG and Karm. But back to this story, it is amazing what you have done. How you have tied everything together, yet kept the same style of it as a look through different people's eyes. Having as many characters as you do, it has to be hard keeping track of what goes where, but you are doing an excellent job at it. Can't wait for more.
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« Reply #79 on: October 29, 2017, 09:43:58 PM »

Thanks again All.  I think Jarys last Chapter got shifted to the page before so make sure to check that out if you missed it.
After this there are another 9 Chapters to go (maybe with an interlude), so they are mostly being brought together soon.

Re Karmack....

I have to echo Dutchman.  The power these guys possess is terrifying.  And Sevra's duality is very interesting.  The Night Sister apparently wasn't as successful in eradicating Sevra's personality as she thought.  I am hoping that she rescued her sister.

To be clear, the body Sevra found at the end of the last chapter was Cilina's...so not much rescuing to be done I'm afraid....?

Lyr'Ca'Njo

Lyr shuffled nervously on his feet.  He had felt uncomfortable enough the last time he was here.   

But where else could he go, with Myzm dead he had to get out there, he didn’t want to be around as the other Hutts carved up the mansions furnishings, and worse looked into, Myzms finances.

“Your previous employer”

“The filth”

“Yes the filth, disgusting creature, I hated him myself….”

Her already merciless complexion took on a predatory hue, Lyr felt very much like a nerf dropped in a rancors cage. 
He swallowed hard, it would take all his deceptive skills to pull this one off.  He had come to the Quarrens mansion to see if he could collect on at least some of the outstanding amounts and pocket them himself, he hadn’t realised the Quarren had been killed by the Mad Beast of the Arena as well, and his psychotic vixen now ruled.

“That is that filthy creature had agreed to pay us a very large sum of credits, which as his, uh…beneficiary, we humbly request you perhaps, consider honouring that particular agreement….maybe,”

She stared at him with eyes that burnt like yellow suns

“Who are you more afraid of in this moment,” she asked, “Me or your master,”

He choked back the answer but it came without his conscious will, “You,”

“not your master?”

“ah well my master…is…is,” the truth was like water behind a failing dam, about to burst, it was a new terrifying experience to be so honest,

“dead…very very dead” he was sweating, it kept coming, “I was just trying to get what credits I could out of you, I thought I could…ma…ma…”

“manipulate” she coached

“manipulate you,”

“How brave…”, she twirled a light sabre in her claw

“I propose a different transaction, you need a master, I need a manager of the filthy things affairs, how does 5% sound,”

“Sounds like more than I’m worth,” the damn truth really hurt!

With a devils grin she smiled, “Done then!”
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The extent of the Quarrens holding was far larger than he would’ve imagined, and far more profitable.  Whilst a number of debtors refused to pay, most just kept the dividends flowing.  One absentee owner was little different to the next 

He had even managed to bring across upwards of 40 million credits from the feeding frenzy over the corpse of Myzms operations and settle accounts with Hunik, few things were more dangerous than a Mandolorian who felt you had cheated them.

Yet now that he thought about it…all the people he dealt with were dangerous

For everyone in the Outer rim, and Hutt Space there was no goal greater than surviving another day, credits in hand if you could, and no law other than the barrel of a blaster.  This was the world he had been born into…and could never escape.

He looked around the hideous black and red décor of his new office…the Quarren and Myzm had both lived in this world, both had been cut down with as little mercy or consideration as they had treated their slaves and enemies.  Who’s standing now was rarely who stood tomorrow…you took what pleasure you could while you could take it, paying in credits if you could, or pain and blood if you didn’t.

His new desk was a rich dark wood with a glossy semi reflective varnish, he looked at his reflection in it.  He was just another scammer, another killer, he paid for his lusts with credits only because he wasn’t as good with a blaster...he’d killed, beaten and tortured people…but it was easier to cheat and lie to them.  He used Rshi for his entertainment, and half a score more before her...used up then dumped when he could buy something better. 

All these things the face looking back at him had done…and yet…he didn’t feel any remorse, or guilt.  Perhaps he felt bad that he didn’t feel bad about it and should.

He got up and walked away from the desk, catching his reflection in the glass cabinets dotted about he imagined some dark figure behind him, knife in hand plunging it into his back…one day that was how it would end.

He sneered at himself…might as well enjoy himself while he could.
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Ylorens was full of the cream of Nar Shadda society, that is the most ruthless and cunning crime bosses in Hutt space.  Sevra had accepted an invitation to a dinner at the overly opulent restaurant, carefully arranged by Lyr to get them back in the game of wheeling and dealing.  The artefacts stolen from the Jedi were hot, as hot as could be, he needed to sell them and fast before the Jedi came looking.

He was feeling good everything was going well so far…even Rshi had been unusually….he wouldn’t use the word enthusiastic…amiable toward his desires of late.  It certainly wasn’t the décor of the new accommodation, so it must’ve been the strangest thing yet about the new arrangement…the child. 

The child had been captured during their last raid, he shuddered to think what the Quarren had been planning to do to it, but the incident at the Arena meant he never got a chance.  Lyr didn’t know what had happened to the mother though…He had set Rshi to look after the child and it seemed to make her…could a slave be happy with their work? 

It didn’t really matter he supposed.

They were at an overly catered table, their host an opulently dressed Nikto who had been top of the list of the Quarrens personal contacts in the ‘collectors’ community, and most likely one he could offload them on.

“It is really a small piece, of little worth to anyone but myself….”

He was discussing with Lyr an old wooden statuette, Sevra was not really interested in anything except the lightly charred nerf steak she was holding in her real fingers. 

“Indeed, but it is the only one of his kind, and the fact you collect these…” he left the implication hanging

“I think 40 is a reasonable price for us both,” the Nikto replied

Lyr nodded, 40,000 was a fair offer for a little bit of wood, “Lady Sevra,” he had to have some formal name for her after all…

She suddenly stared at him with an intensity that made him jump in his seat, he felt like he would melt beneath her gaze and not in a good way before she turned to the Nikto,

“What does it do?”  she asked

“What does what do,” the Nikto seemed confused

“You know what I’m talking about, tell me,”

He started to shuffle in his seat….”It’s just a collection of ancient Dejarik pieces…it doesn’t…urrck…” 

He started making gurgling sounds

Her voice was impassive…distant…

“You’re going to take me to the other pieces you have, NOW”

He nodded blankly grasping at his throat…only the fact murders were fairly common in the restaurant with so many crime lords meant no one else really cared.

It was the strangest trip Lyr had ever been on, in the Niktos luxury speeder to his lavish apartment, the Nikto looked drunk and slurry under Sevras power, while she went from intense to bored.  They finally arrived and the Nikto lead them to his collection room, much like the Quarrens filled with various antiques, in the centre 6 little figures made of wood stood in a circle meant for 12.

“They connect…the dark side…connects them,” he slurred

“Yes…” Sevra went up to them, here head moving rapidly side to side as though analysing some unseen lines…”A Map,” she said finally…”A Map to Dormund Kaas and the Sith empire…each figures is one of the highest Lords under Vitiate,” She shrieked with diabolical laughter that made the apartment tremble. 

She turned on the Nikto, “You fool…this is worthless, trinkets for Sith Nobles long dead…” she slammed her claw on the table shattering one statue, “what did you think, it held some secret, some mystical power, show you the future make you a Sith”

“I…wanted to collect them…” he said gurgling slightly, without any warning her claw slashed into his stomach, black blood oozed out

“What for? They don’ tell you what your name is!” She smashed another one

Lyr was getting very worried now

She dug her claws into the Niktos head, blood started flowing out, she looked around the room, “Useless, all useless, none of them tell me what the name is!” with a sickening crack his skull shattered

Lyr didn’t know what distributed him more, how unstable she was, or that she wasn’t the craziest person he had ever worked for.

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« Reply #80 on: October 30, 2017, 02:24:38 PM »

LSG, thanks for the clarification.  I went back and read it again.  Bummer.  I was thinking she was still alive and being adjusted as Sevra was.  :-/

9 more chapters?  Wow.... 
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« Reply #81 on: October 30, 2017, 02:52:35 PM »

I've got to hand it to Lyr: he may be an unscrupulous, selfish, opportunistic, sleemo but he isn't stupid  Wink. Excellent characterization, he recognizes the depravation of his profession but sees the landscape for what it is.  And Sevra? That woman scares me!  Doesn't help that she is--literally--of two minds.  And with that last scene?  She seems more...an agent of entropy than any Sith I've seen  Cheesy

Ah, Cilina's child; now that's one character that is truly an unfortunate innocent (although much the same could be said about the Aethans that were absconded as well).  Definitely interested in what happens next with the child^^

Until next installment friends  Smiley
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« Reply #82 on: October 30, 2017, 02:56:39 PM »

Oh.   And this last chapter?  Wow....  Sevra is ... disturbed.  Seriously.  And she's obviously looking for something.  Her own name?  Someone elses?  The Night Sister is gone... Maybe with the final pieces of her own sanity?

Wow.  Just wow.  Nicely written and I am just falling further into the story.  :-)   I thought I saw a resolution coming very soon, but you were just putting the pieces into place.  Now the Adventure begins!
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« Reply #83 on: October 30, 2017, 09:40:43 PM »

Oh.   And this last chapter?  Wow....  Sevra is ... disturbed.  Seriously.  And she's obviously looking for something.  Her own name?  Someone elses?  The Night Sister is gone... Maybe with the final pieces of her own sanity?

Wow.  Just wow.  Nicely written and I am just falling further into the story.  :-)   I thought I saw a resolution coming very soon, but you were just putting the pieces into place.  Now the Adventure begins!

Thanks again guys, I wanted to really play on the tortured nature of Sevra, what happens when you try and brainwash someone and it doesn't fully work...they end up ripping out your spine....

One of the issues I think I've got with the story is the sheer size has gotten away from me...some of the foreshadowing is a bit lost because of it and I can't expect you to remember all those little bits like I do (you know given I am the author I have an advantage)
...but if you reacquaint yourselves quickly with Shilea's 3rd chapter you'll see where that thread started...but yeah so many intervening chapters loses it a bit.

Anyway that is something I can try and improve on in any future stories.
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« Reply #84 on: October 31, 2017, 01:51:08 AM »

Its very hard to keep track of everything, especially from the perspective of what the READER knows.  I have a long story (totally different universe) that is novel length that I've started and restarted and written and re-written to many times.  I've totally lost track of the bits and pieces.  I'm in the process of working through it with someone else trying to fix it. 

Don't despair!  We may remember more than you think!
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« Reply #85 on: October 31, 2017, 09:44:34 PM »

Soryu

The quiet beeping of the life support machines pervaded the small ward, it gentle tone and the soft white lights belied the sadness here.  There were six bodies in two rows of three, all in coma’s of unknown province.  It had started with young Sofa, an earnest and gentle woman who would make great master one day, his friend Rys Hora, a crack pilot, a librarian, maintenance technician, a doctor, and lastly a knight, found a few hours after thirty or so Jedi left on missions for the archives project.  Elyssia Kor was forty years old, an experience knight, and of no real relation to any of the others.

There was something about this rash of comas…Soryu just felt he had to do something about it…like he was…not responsible…but he felt he had done something that had…and this was strange…permitted or condoned it somehow.

Soryu sat on the floor amongst them all trying to find the trace that bound them…somewhere in the force, in the flow of their life energies there must be something….

He reached into the force, feeling the life around him…but it was an empty life, sustained not lived…except for…Sofa, there, there was a little spark as if something were returning. 

He tried to sense any thoughts or dreams but there were none…it were as if their very consciousness had been stripped off them…there was a linger about them…darkness….yet not darkness like the Sith.…no not darkness at all…he just couldn’t quite pin it down.

There is no emotion there is peace

He sought out the peace…yes peace they were all at peace but it was not a happy one…it was the peace of the void.  He focused more on Sofa…a little spark…he drew in the life of the force, let it flow through him, channelling it into her.  A small spark responded…a distant cry.

He kept focusing on her, he wished he knew more of the Grey Jedi’s techniques, perhaps one of their singers could elicit something from the sparks that flew from Sofas mind, find some rhythm beneath it…but Kimar had long since put an end to what little co-operation there was between the two traditions…Soryu feared Kimar might one day make things worse if he gained too much power over the council.
He returned every day for the better part of two months, each time Sofa became more and more responsive, Doctor Kougal detected more brain activity on the scans.

Then finally it happened…as Soryu meditated, the sparks coalesced into a single light, it was as if a sun were being reborn…he heard a gasp…Sofa was awake.  He rushed to find Kougal.
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“How are you feeling?” he asked

“Sore…restless…tired,” she replied with a sad smile,

Whilst awake now, she had been in a coma for nearly six months all up, and so was still in the hospital to recover fully…fortunately Kougals muscle stimulation meant she hadn’t lost much mass, but she did look gaunt, her eyes sunken and her long dark hair unkempt.

“Now you know what’s coming?” he tried to be informal,

“I guess….”

“So…”

“I really don’t know…all I remember was I was meditating…I think there was a sound…maybe a knock on the door…then it’s a jumble…I know its cliché…but it was like my life flashed before my eyes…then I woke up here…” 

Soryu thought about it….it seemed counter intuitive when he had sensed an absence of self, or memoires in her and the others.

“hmmm….perhaps when you are stronger you can meditate on it…I don’t want to rush you…”  he looked across the others still unconscious

“I know master,” she answered an unasked question, “I wish I could be of more help…”

He turned back to her with a warm smile,

“It’s alright we’ll figure this out, I’ll leave you to rest,”

“ugh.…I think I’ve had more rest than I’ll ever need,”

Soryu stood and chuckled, “ha…wait till you’re my age and even that will never seem enough!” 
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“Another issue I would raise is The Hetti Corp is experiencing issues with attacks on their ships transporting goods to Core worlds, I have the dossier here, they would like the Jedi to investigate and if possible put an end to these pirates,”  Supreme Chancellor Kommasa slid a thin data card across the ornate table to Kamir.

Kommasa’ office was richly furnished with art work from his native Commenor, as well as pieces of Mon Cal art, giving truth to the rumour he was involved with the Mon Cal Senator.  To request help for Hetti Corp amidst such opulence irked Soryu.

“Is it not the case Hetti Crop is in dispute with the Rim Manufacturers union regarding the outsourcing of their factories to Hutt Space….”  Jedi Master Gurrlum asked, Soryu was almost annoyed he hadn’t asked first, Kamir gave the Gado Gurrlum an ugly look at questioning the Chancellor.  But what was the point of these briefing if not to ask?

“I don’t see what relevance that has to this situation Master Jedi,” one of the bolder member of the gaggle of advisors seated to the side chirped

“Perhaps these attacks are not due pirates rather workers who dislike being replaced by slaves,”  Gurrlum continued, Soryu beamed inwardly, but at the same time he knew Gurrlum would not be invited back to another briefing with the Chancellor for speaking so openly.

Every month three Jedi masters met with the Chancellor formerly to discuss various issues, always Kimar, typically with Soryu and Master Hyden, one of Kimars supporters, only that Hyden was absent on the archives project was Gurrlum invited instead.  Soryu owed his place to being outside the factionalism, a netural player Kimar thought a concession to those who wished to open the council up. 

“That is mere conjecture,”  Kimar interceded, “We will investigate,” he picked up the data card,  Soryu did not like the ease with which Kimar had agreed…but it was better a Jedi in the field investigate such matters, if it was the unionists, the Jedi would then be able to inform the Republic of the truth of the matter.

“Any progress on your archives project,” Kommasa asked

“Things are progressing well,”  That was lie, now four teams had failed to report in as many weeks, but Kimar would never admit any weakness in the Jedi to anyone outside,

“Good, 75 million credits is a large investment from the Republic, I sincerely hope what ever you find is worth it,”

“The damage avoided,” Kimar said carefully, “can only benefit the Republic,”
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As they strode along the halls of the senate Soryu spoke up, Kimar was often difficult to catch, and didn’t like interrupting meetings with ‘administrative issues’ this was the best time.

“One of the coma patients has awoken, Sofa Neirai, the others remain unconscious,”

“Did she remember anything?’  He sounded only half interested,

“Just that her memories flashed before she went unconscious,”

“a neural virus no doubt”  he rounded on Soryu, “I’m sure there are more important matters you could be attending to,”

Soryu accepted the rebuke, he had spent a lot of time with the patients,

“I think there is something more to it, the flow of the force when I meditate near them…I’ve never sensed anything like it…I think we should convene the master to meditate with hem, together we might….”

“Honestly Soryu,” he sounded exasperated, “not every flow or eddy in the force needs a master convocation to investigate it, these things need not concern us, delving too deeply into your ‘living force’ is bound to find all kinds of odd threads on a planet with this many people,”  he gestured to the transparent wall that looked out over Coruscant,
“When you sense something darker than a Padawan cheating on a math test, or a ganger selling death sticks, that we can investigate.”

“I understand, but it doesn’t’ feel dark…its…different a new feeling,”

“New well it was probably Yoda’s foundling.” He joked “We need only concern ourselves with keeping strongly to the light and the code, and hunting down any who stray too far from it…the Republic needs us here and now, we can’t waste time pondering the intricacies of the force, the Light and the code is enough,”

Soryu nodded, there was truth in Kimars words…yet also a troubling certainty.

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« Reply #86 on: November 01, 2017, 04:15:30 PM »

Another excellent post!  And thank you for the easter egg.  *bows*

I really enjoyed this post.  Some bits of mystery begin to unravel, but as usual questions answered lead to more questions.  And I love the ending!  Truth in his statement indeed!  But not the truth they expected, I think.  :-)  As always, you leave me eagerly anticipating the next installment and greatly looking forward to seeing how this all plays out.  Keep 'em coming!  And thank you for sticking with it!  :-)
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« Reply #87 on: November 01, 2017, 07:54:37 PM »

Jumping to the correct conclusion for the WRONG reasons is an excellent device.  You can see the narrow views of the Jedi exemplified in Grand Master Kimer.  He is more politician than altruist; excellent foil for Soryu  Smiley  I like your periphery characters (Gurrlum, Kommasa); it's attention to details like these that really make your narrative substantive (and makes me want to be a better writer  Wink).

Another thing I really enjoy: the easter eggs  Smiley  Just something that really makes this community so incredible.

LSG, your writing is incredible.  Keep it up^^
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« Reply #88 on: November 01, 2017, 10:42:54 PM »

Last Chapter for Part 4....
Valens
The ship glided gently through the atmosphere out of Bonadan, he began plotting the jumps to Coruscant for the return trip to the Temple.

The more practice flying the better, the memories he had extracted from the Corellian pilot were comprehensive, but no substitute for actually flying.  He needed to work on extracting procedural as well as declarative.  He knew all the hyperspace lanes, the different types of ships, how to fix hyper drives, how to confuse orbital scanners on a smuggling run, yet still fumbled on occasion with his hands guiding the stick.

He had wanted to go with Cilina and the baby, but knew to do so would cause the Jedi to become suspicious. 

“The future” his grandfather whispered and he nodded in agreement.  That baby was the future of his people.

The Jedi had some strange rules around intimate relationships, they were hermit like, restricted in their view of the force as much as their interactions with the world.  To protect them from the ‘dark side’. 

“Nonsense,” Andis commented from somewhere…all around him

Yoda had been assisting in ‘guiding him to the path of the Light’, Sofa’s memories had assisted him in that.  His grandfather would never have tolerated such pontificating on morality and philosophy, the aether was just the aether…a word he hadn’t spoken in a while.  That saddened him.

The console beep suddenly brought him out of his reverie.  Data streamed in, Emergency alert transmission on Jedi Frequency 74-25, Hydian Way near Serenno, The Sunnia.

Fear gripped him, his stomach tightened, heat poured off him in panic

Cilina…he needed to find her he had to find her…if she were dead, if her daughter…he had to keep his people alive…he needed them…or at the very least enough of them to clone….

“Find her, Kill anyone who dares threaten our people,” Andis tone was stern

“Calm you must remain, you’re friend…find out what happened to her we will” Yoda’s voice came through, only then did he realise how exposed he was, he wasn’t closed off in the aether, Yoda had sensed his emotional state. 

“Master I…” he stammered as Yoda sat in the co-pilots set a firm but compassionate expression of his face.

“Understand I do, along our route this was, another attack on the Jedi returning to the archives, investigate we must.”  He turned to the console “A message indicating this I will to the council send, closest ship we likely are. These attacks,” his eyes hardened, “continue must not,”

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Klatooine was an ugly world. All dust and deserts.  The sun baked into his back as he lay prone looking down on the staging post to the east.

Over the last two weeks he and Yoda had found the site of the attack, the Sunnia crashed into a moon, found and interred what they could of Zuum, and using the information they recovered from the Sunnia gained a fair idea of what they were looking for.

The readouts indicated the attacking ships profile consistent with Mandolorian designs, as expected given the attack of Telos.  On their way past they had received a report from the authorities there on the attack, the Mandolorians had armour with insignia belonging to known mercenary Gisar Hunik.  The Jedi intelligence networks indicated he operated out of Hutt space with a staging post on Klatooine, granted to him by the Hutts who made frequent use of his mercenaries.

His macro binoculars scanned over the various ships and prefabricated buildings, he wondered how the Mandolorians fared in this heat with their armour on.  There were fifteen down there, a few ships, a token force - this far into Hutt space there were no real threats and it was only a jump and refuelling point. 

He could sense Yoda on the far side of the camp meditating.  They would move in at night, Yoda then Valens.  Valens would prepare a distraction with a few smoke grenades if he sensed any trouble whilst Yoda broke into their systems for information.

It would be much easier just to rend their memories from their mind of course, another technique the Jedi either didn’t know or failed to use. Valens was tempted, the Mandolorians were competent warriors, feared across the galaxy…if he pulled the memories from an experienced one….

“A Guardian turns from no knowledge or weapon that will serve the Aethans,” he had been hearing his Grandfathers voice more and more lately, he guessed it was to remind him to stay true to his people against the path of the Jedi…but that seemed too simplistic.  But maybe he was overthinking it?  He crawled back to a rocky alcove and sat to meditate on it whilst he waited for nightfall.
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He had crawled to within 300 metres of the camp, the grenades positioned at intervals to the north and south, primed to go off with a touch of the aether. He sensed Yoda moving silently through the dunes.  The scanning equipment was effective but nothing that couldn’t be avoided by a Jedi Master…or a Guardian for that matter.

He fell into the aether to sense events.  Yoda’s star moved swiftly, waves of light extended to nearby guards making them drowsy, or turning their attention to more pleasing thoughts than concentrating on watching a black desert scape.  Only five were even awake at this hour, all fairly dull, except one inside a prefab building who seemed a little too alert.

As Yoda movement stalled outside a comms room the alert one started to move outside, Valens could just make him out, he seemed to be stretching and having a brief walk around the prefab.  An old fable came to mind, “Nothing escapes the masters eye,”  He focused in the aether at the alert one, saw the lines that connected him to the others, the way it all joined together…shatter point the Jedi text books had called it, apparently it was a rare ability

“Ignorance” his grandfather sneered

The thread he walked took him perilously close to where Yoda was working, but his attention was on one of the other guard, his head tilted as he approached, the threads grew larger, stronger…and shattered.  Anyone else might’ve just thought this was a lazy guard, but not this Mandolorian, he had a suspicious, jaded aura, a true veteran…

The Veteran punched the sleeper, Yoda noticed and tried to hurry, the lock must’ve opened but it was counterproductive.  The thread linking Yoda to the other ruptured open as the hissing of the door caught the Veterans attention.

The Veteran tilted his head and started talking into his helmet comm link. Valens pulled the grenades and leapt into action.  He sped across the sands the aether speeding his leaps, and shielding his sound over the small fence and on to the top of the prefab where the most sleeping Mandolorians were, he surged aetheric disruption into the sleepers minds and moved toward

Sirens and lights exploded across the camp, Weapons clacked and the guard formed up around the Veteran, Yoda was heading toward a group of newly awakened Mando’s.  Valens leapt forward.

As he flipped over the main body of Mandolorians he unleashed a blast of aetheric energy down onto their heads, they crumpled and flattened, except for the Veteran who rolled back into a fighting stance as Valens landed.  It would be easier, not easy, to slay him with his sabre, but Valens needed more.  The Mando drew a short vibro knife and came at him, Vales dodged left, then right, ducked waiting for his chance he threw odd punches here and there. 

He sensed confusion in the Mandolorians aura that he was fighting unarmed.  It faded quickly with his next strike.  He could see the lines in the helmet, the thin patterned cracks that ranged through the arrangement of the atoms, and in their centre a point, that point he struck with an aether charged punch.  The helmet cracked apart like an egg.

Before the dumbfounded Mandolorian could strike back Valens grabbed his head and burst into his mind, and as he would pull a lightsabre to his hand, so he pulled the memories to his own mind. 

Decades of fighting, under alien skies and in the empty voids, interspersed with fractured relationships with women on Mandalore and prostitutes on a dozen worlds. Friends and acquaintances came and went, hopes and dreams unfulfilled, lessons learnt in bloody failure followed by the thrills of a strategy well executed.

It all flooded in.  He sensed movement behind him as the other Mandolorians recovered, but dismissively flicked them through the air with the aether, bones cracked as they slammed against walls and posts, broken but not dead.

The Veteran collapsed his eyes blank.
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The interrogation was swift, it was interesting to see just how powerful a Jedi Master could be,

“Attacks on Jedi who ordered,”

“The Quarren…” came the groggy response of the second in command, the Veteran was still unconscious, took a blow to the head Valens had told Yoda.

“Location of this Quarren,” Yoda was a true master at force persuasion, Valens took careful notes, his own techniques were more poised to playing emotions than the Jedi’s dulling of higher functions, a combination of the two approaches would be very potent.

“Nar Shadda, same old mansion…”

“The intent of these raids,”

“Some antiques or something, the vixen and the witch always wanted the antiques,”

Antiques, the archives project…this Quarren was stealing them…Valens wondered….

“How did you find out the Jedi course plans,” he asked mirroring Yoda’s technique,

“Didn’t just got told by the witch,”

“More about this witch and vixen tell me?” Yoda went on,

“Witch is a psycho, one arm, fights like a Jedi, tattoos, the vixen has a claw, kills Jedi like they were nothing…real weird, like she’s not really there though,”

Yoda’s eyes narrowed in thought.

They left the Mandolorians to attend to their wounded but disabled their communications and ships, Valens had appropriated a few items off of the Mandolorians, a beskar combat knife, disruptor blaster, a few hacking and infiltration tools, and the best set of armour there. 

The Veterans memories were already paying dividends.
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« Reply #89 on: November 02, 2017, 12:57:04 AM »

The more I read about the aetheric interpretation of the Force, the more amazed I become.  You've really added to the mythos of SW with your excellent brand of narrative.  What's even more incredible is that you intersperse canon throughout, creating a dynamic, yet familiar setting (Klatooine, shatter points, Mandalorians just to name a few  Smiley). 

Valens takes "combat pragmatism" to the next level with his aetheric syphoning; fantastic mechanism for the Power it delivers!  Although, I wonder just what cost these actions will incur, both to Valens as well as his victims  Wink

Until next installment friends  Smiley
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