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Author Topic: Rogue One: Resurrection  (Read 1963 times)
HeartbreakOne
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« Reply #60 on: December 01, 2017, 04:21:43 PM »

Stage 2: The Empire Strikes Back

Chapter 28: Echo Base

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12311644/28/Rogue-One-Resurrection (link to the published story on FanFiction.Net)
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« Reply #61 on: December 02, 2017, 06:33:41 AM »

OK Krennic's resurrection was perfectly done!  And it not only makes sense in context but it came off as completely organic and natural within the narrative!  VERY well done HB1! 

Now, ESPECIALLY after reading CH.25 do I believe that Krennic is the perfect foil and antagonist to Jyn and Cassian.  You took these established characters and made them (and their motivations) better!  I do wonder if Krennic will continue to be the "big bad" for them as you story continues  Wink

Looking forward to reading CH.26 (and subsequent chapters)!
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« Reply #62 on: December 02, 2017, 10:15:10 AM »

OK Krennic's resurrection was perfectly done!  And it not only makes sense in context but it came off as completely organic and natural within the narrative!  VERY well done HB1! 

Now, ESPECIALLY after reading CH.25 do I believe that Krennic is the perfect foil and antagonist to Jyn and Cassian.  You took these established characters and made them (and their motivations) better!  I do wonder if Krennic will continue to be the "big bad" for them as you story continues  Wink

Looking forward to reading CH.26 (and subsequent chapters)!

Thanks Dutchman! I envisioned Krennic to be Jyn & Cassian's ultimate archenemy after their encounter near the end of Rogue One movie. The rivalry just fit perfectly. This story is about Jyn & Krennic getting their revenge on each other.

Actually, Chapters 26, 27, and 28 are already posted right before your post. Enjoy Smiley
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« Reply #63 on: December 05, 2017, 10:50:01 PM »

Chapter 29: Reckless, Aggressive, & Undisciplined

)Link to chapter published on FanFiction website:) https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12311644/29/Rogue-One-Resurrection

Enjoy an intense scene! Wink
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« Reply #64 on: December 08, 2017, 07:30:08 PM »

Chapter 30: Search & Rescue

Link to chapter published on FanFiction website: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12311644/30/Rogue-One-Resurrection
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« Reply #65 on: December 09, 2017, 09:58:29 AM »

Chapter 31: The Assault Horizon

Link to chapter on FanFiction site: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12311644/31/Rogue-One-Resurrection
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« Reply #66 on: December 09, 2017, 10:01:40 PM »

Just read CH.26 & 27.  I like that Jyn made her own lightsaber, especially a purple-bladed one.  I can understand her trepidation about Cassian (being a spy).  I can only hope that she can trust her initial feelings for him.

I enjoyed the lightsaber battles between Vader and Jyn&Cassian, respectfully.  Good characterization with Vader: he's the most powerful and knows it.  But I do like the "save" by Luke  Smiley

And Krennic is still a great foil for Jyn and Cassian  Smiley
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« Reply #67 on: December 12, 2017, 05:44:53 PM »

Chapter 32: A New Terror

Link to chapter on FanFiction.Net: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12311644/32/Rogue-One-Resurrection



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« Reply #68 on: December 13, 2017, 11:55:48 PM »

Chapter 33: Flash Forward

Link to chapter on FanFiction.net: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12311644/33/Rogue-One-Resurrection
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« Reply #69 on: December 15, 2017, 02:12:49 AM »

Chapter 34: Prisoners

Link to chapter on FanFiction.net: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12311644/34/Rogue-One-Resurrection

WARNING: THIS LONG CHAPTER MAY BE VIOLENT AND GRAPHIC IF YOU VISUALIZE THE TEXT. READ AT YOUR OWN RISK.

This chapter actually hurt me to write.
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« Reply #70 on: December 29, 2017, 03:25:51 PM »

Chapter 35: Project KALLOS

Link to chapter on FanFiction.Net: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12311644/35/Rogue-One-Resurrection

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« Reply #71 on: January 01, 2018, 06:14:05 AM »

Just read Chapters 28, 29, and 30.

I enjoy the casual dialogue between Jyn and Cassian (when he isn't screwing up) and canon characters from the Saga.  I am glad that you continued the story to Empire Strikes Back.  Jyn's character trajectory is particularly interesting: she's been through more adversity than many yet she's still young and has those lingering doubts. Hopefully Cassian learns his lesson  Wink

Nice story integration: we know what happens with Luke, Han, the wampa, and the tauntaun but the addition of Jyn and Cassian makes for a fresh perspective.

Keep it up HB1!
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« Reply #72 on: January 03, 2018, 11:44:40 AM »

Chapter 36: Her Unforgotten Memory

FanFiction.Net link to chapter: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12311644/36/Rogue-One-Resurrection
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« Reply #73 on: January 12, 2018, 03:41:27 PM »

Chapter 37: Outsiders

Link to chapter on FanFiction.Net: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12311644/37/Rogue-One-Resurrection
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