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« Reply #60 on: December 05, 2017, 04:00:55 PM »

LGS, that's sooooo Real Life...  ;-)

Seriously, though: You're totally right that they're entering into an arena that is larger than they know.  One of the staples of Gray Jedi stories has always been that they're in the shadows, the background, dealing with things that would be devastating if they came to full fruition.  This would seem to be one of those things... 

Maybe.

Sorta kinda.

;-)

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« Reply #61 on: December 05, 2017, 04:02:08 PM »

So now you've moved off of almost killing Karm, to almost killing Arnor. Who's next? Ken or Illian? Cheesy (BTW, I'd love to see Illian make another appearance sometime.) Definitely some interesting ideas floating around here. Very good, and like TD said vvv

Me too. Endor was always one of my favorite planets/moons. Cheesy Wink

LOL

Actually, I was thinking about putting one of the droids into a near-death experience...
Oh.  Wait.  I already did that with Two....

Hmmm

Yup.  You're right.  Everyone's had a turn now except....

KEN!  FRONT AND CENTER!  YOU'RE UP!!!!!!!

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« Reply #62 on: December 08, 2017, 04:58:04 PM »

Chapter 11:  Dance Card

The twisting tunnel of hyperspace coursed outside the cockpit windows, its turmoil a good match for the jumble of thought twisting through my brain.  What had been meant to be a quick update with Telow’na had turned into a bit of a shock: Jennira had been captured.  Followed by another shock: She had subsequently disappeared, along with the four Knights escorting her home and the entire crew of the Rygillian freighter they had booked passage upon.  The Night Sister had been restrained and placed in a medical coma.  Tracking indicated that the ship had left on the proper course for a straight jump to M’Tzigon.  Yet somehow someone had … interdicted their flight.

Interdicted…  Telow’na had used that term conspicuously.  She hadn’t said it out loud, but the implication was clear: someone had known where they were and managed to intercept with an Imperial Interdictor Cruiser.  Who could have pulled that off remained a mystery, and I was pretty sure Telow’na didn’t have any real evidence or she would have said it plainly.  Instead she’d left it to be inferred, almost a hint.  She had a gut feeling, and couldn’t support it, but wanted to pass it along anyway.

Hint recognized, Telow’na.  Now what?

Now…  Nothing.  No recommendations.  A warning was posted back to Zearic and D’Aylanna, letting them know what had happened.  They were on Bar’Lev, following a lead.  Just like we were…

A beep on the console brought me back from my wandering thoughts.  The NaviComputer was starting the countdown to hyperspace egress.  I toggled the intercom to the passenger compartment.  “Ken, Arnor, coming up on Endor.”

I swung forward and re-oriented myself to the board.  Two was the first to join me, plugging into the modified flight engineer’s position and catching up on the ship’s systems.  Ken and Arnor were right behind him.  I vacated the pilot’s seat for Ken, moving to the tactical station.  Arnor sat in the updated gunnery couch and took direct control of the Wayfarer’s defensive turrets.  Her targets would flow from my sensors, prioritized by my systems.  I could also feed Ken tactical maneuvering data and even override his flight controls at need, as well as fire the fixed forward guns. Mutt and Vegan were in the engineering spaces, monitoring all systems and standing by in case repares needed to be made.  I checked the computer.  “One minute to emergence.”  I activated our tactical sensors and prepped the turbo-laser capacitors and the shield generators.  We were as ready as we could be, though if all three Star Destroyers were close by when we emerged…

Calm.  Breathe.  Flow…  Whatever was there, we would deal with it.  The tension was already high, no sense in adding worry to the load.

The counter hit zero and Ken dropped us out of hyper, right on the mark.  The swirling blue tunnel fell away, resolving to stars – and a beautiful view of the gas giant Endor, with its class-M moon nearby.  From a distance, the debris field from the destroyed Deathstar was a glittering ring around the moon, settled mainly into orbit.  I brought all our tactical systems online, shunted power from the hyperdrive to the defensive systems, and brought our shields up.  “Shields online.  Thirty seconds to turbo-lasers.  Scanning.”  I reported.  Ken nodded, scanning visually.  Arnor was also using her turret sensors to scan the area, looking for any sign of the Imperials.

 The tactical system scan took 127 seconds to complete, two very tense minutes while Ken brought the Wayfarer up to speed and sent us streaking toward the planet.  “No sign of those destroyers…  There are heavy ion trails originating from the standard jump-in point, but they veer off, loop around and end on a reciprocal bearing.  However, there is a conspicuous ion trail that breaks off and heads for the planet.  That should be Cha’s frigate heading for the planet.”

“Where did the Imperials go?” Arnor asked.  “Why hop in here with Cha and then just leave?”

I felt my face form a scowl.  “Maybe we’re making too many assumptions.  Who says Cha was working with the Imperials?” I let my face relax into a smile.  “Besides, Telow’na said that she had indications that the Alliance was about to pull the trigger on something called “Operation Ring Buster” and hit Kuat.  That might have had something to do with it.”

“Kuat?  That’s … ambitious.” Arnor replied, still studying her own sensors.  “Still, if it clears away the heavies, I’m all for it.”

Ken was bending over from his station, looking at main tactical sensor screens.  “Father, any indication of what exactly Cha is flying?” Ken asked.  “This ion trail looks...odd.”

“No…  Two, can you take a crack at it?”  I shunted the data over to the Engineer station.

Two twitted a quick reply and started chewing on the sensor data.  It didn’t take long for him to spit out an answer.   I bent over the console where his profile displayed.  “Republic Frigate, modified from the Consular class cruisers, Clone-War era, but probably modified.”  I read.  “Nice work, Two!”

Two tweeted back.  “Really?  ‘dim-witted biological’?  You couldn’t just say ‘Thank you’ and be done with it?”

The answering tweets sounded a lot like laughter and I hid my grin behind a stern face.  “Careful, buddy.  I have your core programming access keys and know how to use them!”

The response was sarcastic but also apologetic, and I let my grin show now.  The by-play had broken the tension in the cockpit and I was grateful for his humor.  Still, Endor was a big place and we didn’t have time for orbital sweeps.  “Ken, shape for a standard equatorial orbit while I … look around.”

Ken acknowledged the command and shaped our course toward a high equatorial orbit, well clear of the debris field that was beginning to circle the moon like a small steroid field or ring system.  I shut it out, closing my eyes and opening myself to the force and the song, reaching…

A chorus of chiming notes exploded around me, thousands of voices joined in song…  A battle song…  It was beautiful and deadly, all at once.  I homed in on it, listening to it, feeling the echo of response from the crystals I carried.  Even the Ancient One stirred slightly, its own ever-resent chiming altering slightly, subtly, a shift that it radiated out to the small chorus that I suddenly realized surrounded it in the Song like group of electrons orbiting a nucleus…

I shook it off.  No time…  I zeroed in on the intense song and focused on the same area in the force…   Yes!  A strong, dark presence, echoing with the rhythm of evil…  And a second presence, intense, strong and …

…confusing.  The second beacon was bright and strong and lacked the hammering rhythm of a Sith or someone who had embraced the evil pathways.  But it didn’t shine with the bright light of one who was following the Way, either.  And it was singing… sort of…  Simple songs, melodies used more like tools, not woven in the fabric of the greater song the way a true master would.  More like a healer or Knight using a simple tune to aid in focus or intensity.

And there was fear. Great fear.  Terror … and death…  and the twisted braid of my family’s song wrapping itself into the very heart of it…


With a shudder I pulled myself back into the hear-and-now.  It took me a moment to orient the “where” from the force vision to the tactical overlay of Endor, but once I did a quick scan confirmed the presence of several small ships in the vicinity.  “Ken, new coordinates coming your way.  Approach behind the horizon and keep us out of line-of-site, but get as close as you can.  And move quickly.”

“Yessir!”  Ken replied, pitching us down for a least-time de-orbit.  I turned to Arnor.  “How do you feel, my love?”

“Serviceable.” She replied.  I could feel some pain from the remnants of her injuries in the force and her song, but both were very minor and far less than we’d had to deal with in the past.  “Why?  What’s the play?”

“Cha is here, with his troops, and he’s already engaging Julwynn and her Warren-Clan.  And for our sins, we get to join in the fun and mop up.”  I turned to Two.  “Two, is the DCC serviced?  I think we’re going to need the support.”

There was no sarcasm in his trilling response this time.   Just affirmation … and eagerness.

“Good.  Hand off to Mutt as soon as you can and get prepped.  Full combat load.  Ken, move smartly once we’re down.  We’ll be landing in three minutes.  I want to be on the move in five.”

Arnor and I unbuckled and headed aft to don our own tactical gear taking a moment for a quick hug before we put our ‘game faces’ on once again.

Fear…

Terror…

Death…


I felt the Ancient One humming.  Again, that odd shift…and the shards responding…re-aligning…

As always, you have my back old friend.  Thank you.  It’s time to dance … and this time we’re going to call the tune.
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« Reply #63 on: December 11, 2017, 01:31:03 AM »

Yes Karm!  LOVE the lead-in!  I have to take advantage of that  Wink

I love the intensity of our intrepid heroes coming out of lightspeed; the tension is palpable.  The imagery with Endor's moon is something I had wondered about: with so much debris from DS2, there should be an artificial ring.  Nice detail, that  Grin

And I love the nod to canon: the Rebel attack on Kuat. 

One significant development that I feel is ALWAYS right on the mark is the rapport and comraderie of Karm's biological and artificial family.  And now, so are we  Grin

Until next installment friends  Smiley
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« Reply #64 on: December 11, 2017, 03:25:21 AM »

Based on the interlude I think they are about to come face to face with how little they know about what is truly going on...I think its about to go off!
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« Reply #65 on: December 11, 2017, 03:41:25 PM »

Based on the interlude I think they are about to come face to face with how little they know about what is truly going on...I think its about to go off!

There are several "reveals" coming for the characters.  And the readers.  Stick around, y'all are going to want to be at the dance! 
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« Reply #66 on: December 12, 2017, 01:36:54 AM »

Chapter 12: Dance with the Devil

I felt the tremor of the Wayfarer touching down as I pulled the last lead from the DCC’s maintenance ports.  Two tweeted his thanks and impatience as he stepped over to the cargo lift.  “I know, I want to go too but we have to wait for Ken.”

More tweets.  “No, I don’t think you and I can handle it alone.” 

Two responded with another string of beeps and tweets.  “Oh?  All by yourself, eh?  I might be tempted to take you up on that, if only to see your epic failure.”

The response this time was laced with rude grunts.  “No, I don’t just want to share the glory.  We’re going to need each other.  Mutual support will be critical.”

More grunts and whistles.  “Yes, I’m saying it out loud: We need you.” 

The droid twittered one last time and returned to his diagnostics while I grinned and resumed my own pat-down.  Arnor, Ken and I had the “deluxe” Mak’Tor Knight combat gear tonight: dark gray smart-weave fatigues with a load-bearing harness and belt strewn with gadgets and gizmos, extra power-packs for our sabers and side-arms, and the holsters which contained the official Mak’Tor militia side-arms – Blas Tech BL-44 heavy blasters.  Unlike our militia, however, Knights carried light sabers as our primary weapons instead of the blaster rifles common to our militia infantry.  I drew my pistol and checked the power pack, which was still at 98%, and re-holstered it.  My saber hung in its customary spot as well, and I knew it as fully charged, as was my second hilt.

I patted it, checking it by feel as I worked my way down.  I rarely carried two blades, but today I felt the need for it.  Something in the song seemed to call for it, and the Ancient One was reinforcing the feeling.   It would be a two-handed fight.

So be it.

The combat uniform was completed by a combat “smock”, an overlay of black and dark gray that had a blaster-dissipating mesh woven into it and a song-steel wrist shield.  I wore the shield on my left arm, protecting the fore-arm and wrist and providing me with a few physical blocks against blaster fire or saber blade at need.  I also carried two stiletto blades, one per boot, and a combat knife, all also crafted from the extremely rare song-steel.  Arnor’s kit was even more paranoid, with two wrist shields and a half-dozen throwing blades in addition to her combat knife and hold-out blades.  Ken had mirrored my kit almost exactly, but favored a vibro-blade instead of song-steel.  Many of our fellow knights would probably call it overkill.

I preferred the word “prepared”.

First Arnor, then Ken entered the hold.   A quick check of our comm link-up confirmed we were connected and we dropped out of the hold in the gray of the local twilight.   Mutt and Vegan were running the ship and lifted off as soon as we were on the ground.  They would position themselves to cut off any escapes and provide air support or evacuation as necessary.

The feeling of abandonment was profound.

I could sense Arnor and Ken’s vigilance as they formed with Two to form a circle around me.  They were open to the force, reaching out around us.  Two was covering the EM bands with his sensors, ‘eyes open’ to all around.  That left me to monitor the song.  I took a deep breath, anticipating an assault as I opened up to the song…

The hammering, incessant pulse of the Sith hammered through the song, flooding everything.  But it was not just rhythm.  This was subtle, with a supporting melody and harmony.  Evil, yes, but also beautiful in its own way, more than just raw power.  Power under control and focused.

And very, very deadly…

It was a battle song.  The battle song of a Dark Singer, focused, powerful and very strong.  And yet…

There was another song, weaker, attempting to counter.  Attempting … and failing.  A novice, matching simple, rote motifs against the woven construction of a master singer.  But there was also a … clumsiness on the Master’s side.  As each of the weaker songs was deployed there was on odd delay before it was expertly countered.  Almost like communications lag…

I blinked.  “Communications lag…”  I looked at Arnor and Ken.  “There’s a Dark Singer at work here.  Two, actually, but only one is a Master.  I think that singer is … working remote.  Through some kind of connection…”

Before I could continue I felt the Ancient One stir.  Almost like it was poking me…

Control.   You must be in control…

I blinked.  Control.  Of course…  But there was something else, something more.  Something elusive.  The crystal shards, still in a pouch in my belt, seemed to stir as well.

Control?  Of myself?  Or the battle space…

I shook my head, clearing the thoughts.  I already had a plan for that, but time was short.  The song was urgent: we had to move, now.  “The battle is already underway.  Wedge formation, Ken on point, Two in over-watch.  They should be just over the ridge.”

I split off on the right flank of our formation, Arnor on the left.  Ken took the center and moved ahead slightly.  He was inexperienced but his youth made him very fast and I was confident the strongest forces would be on the flanks.  We were coming in at right-angles to the fight, the weaker singer on our left in front of Arnor and the stronger singer in front of me.  Ken and Two would be free to swing behind and support whoever needed help the most, once we engaged.

The ridge was high and we were several hundred meters below the crest.  I tapped into the force to augment my strength as we bounded up the slope.  Two used jump juice to keep up with our ground-clearing bounds.  I began my own battle song, weaving it around Arnor and Ken like armor.  I felt Arnor join me, the familiar fugue of my wife and lover and fellow warrior, joined in turn by the more free-ranging counterpoint of our son.   As we crested the ridge, I played my hole card: I reached into the pouch and threw the crystal shards into the air, using the force to disperse them across the battle-field we were about to enter. 

!!!Control!!!

I felt the Ancient One lock into my battle-song as I ignited my blade … and then the song spread and multiplied, blanketing the field.  I felt a small surge of triumph as I felt the echoes of my song reverberate across the field, as well as the shock as it slammed into the dark song, largely negating it, but then I had no time for analysis.

Battle was upon us: the deadly dance began.

I heard my own voice bellow a battle cry, an echo of my song, as I ignited my blades.  My second blade was gripped in a reverse grip, allowing me to parry and block with my off-hand. But even as I engaged I felt shock slam through my system as I finally comprehended what I was seeing:  Sith Massassi warriors. 

Lots of them.

The battle was larger than we had realized, spread across a small vale among the giant trees of Endor.  The left-hand group was a large group of sith shadow warriors from a dozen races armed with heavy blasters, side-arms and armor.  Their leader appeared to be a Sith warrior wielding two red sabers, but he was on the far side of the formation dueling hammer-and-tongs with a pair of individuals.  One, a woman, was employing what appeared to be a light-whip while the second supported her with an energy baton and blaster pistol.  The line of meeting between the two main bodies of troops stretched in a line from the battling trio on a ragged front that ended just where Ken crested the ridge.  And on the right…

A site not seen in thousands of years: A small horde of Massassi warriors, armed with red saber-pikes, led by a pair of red-skinned humanoids wearing Sith armor and wielding red light sabers.  It was from these two that the powerful Dark Song emanated.  I spun into the mass of Massassi, spinning and turning like a golden whirl-wind, riding the waves of my battle-song through the horde…

Control…  Reach out, young one.  Control…

I felt the subtle poke again, even as battle swirled around me.  I don’t understand…   Two of the largest Massassi suddenly confronted me, hammering down on my extended block.  I caught one of the angry blades on my own saber’s golden blade but the second slid toward my exposed hand – and neatly sliced the hilt in half.

The hammer-blow of the two pikes on my arm drove me to my knees, but the song-steel held.  A back-hand slash separated one attacker’s torso from his hips and the reverse cut transsected the other’s torso, ending the immediate threat, and I rose with an extravagant blade flourish before dropping back into my combat stance.

The Massassi immediately around me gave ground, opening a circle around me.  I let a deadly grin spread to my face.  “Had enough?”

The edge of the circle parted to admit one of the Sith Lords.  “Hardly, Jedi.  You should not have interfered.”

“Interfered with what?  This little gathering?”  I mentally touched the other threads of the song in the back of my mind, feeling the strain from Arnor and Ken as they were also engaged, but for the moment everyone was still alive and generally intact.

Generally.  My left arm was on fire from the abuse, song-steel or no, and I was suddenly aware of just how much energy I had expended and channelled.  The longer this guy would talk, the better…  “I mean, I like a good party, but I think you over did it with the costumes…”

The Sith grinned.  “You are the Gray who has been interfering with the Sisters.  Excellent.  Mendax will be pleased at your death.” 

I realized that stalling wasn’t in the cards and readied myself for his attack. 

CONTROL!

Not a poke this time, but a slap on the back of the head…    I felt the frustration in the song, something I hadn’t felt from The Ancient One in many years, not since I’d first learned that it was more than just a crystal…

Learned that it could communicate.  That it was a form of holocron, carried the experiences and wisdom of those who had touched it before.  Xlyvan.  Dorian.  Odjina.  That it was more than just a crystal.  That it was a gateway…

A GATEWAY!

CONTROL!


I shifted into Soresu and absorbed the Sith’s attack, my mind working furiously.  The crystal was a gateway!  When I retrained the shards to be a chorus, it had been facilitated by the Ancient One!  Not just the song, but the crystal itself!  I reached out in the song, looking …

There!  The Sith’s saber crystal was there, in the song!  As were dozens of others.  I shifted my battle song, incorporating the motif for taking control into it, and felt the new song ripple out, augmented by the Ancient One.  I locked blades with the Sith, nose-to-nose with his sneer, and a small smile came to my own lips as his blade suddenly went from blood-red to snow-white, sputtered, and went out.  “You lose.”  I didn’t give him time to recover – I flipped my wrists and drew the blade down, severing his weapon arm at the shoulder before reversing and removing his head.

I stepped back from the toppling corpse and fell back into my ready stance as the Massassi circle around me collapsed.  I blinked as I realized that every single red blade on the field was … gone.   I caught sight of the second Sith Lord shouting orders, pulling back from the fight.  Several of the Massassi with him were hauling large crates, likely filled with the crystals we were here to recover.  However, I had no opportunity to pursue as several of the Massassi near me suddenly let out a roar and charged.  Their pole-arms might be lacking blades but they still made respectable spears and staves and each of the warriors was nearly 3 meters tall and twice as heavy as I was.  I spun back into Soresu, drawing power from the force and falling back into my battle song, trying desperately to break out of the ring and go after the Sith Lord, but it was to no avail.  By the time I cut my way through the wall of Sith Warriors I was exhausted and had picked up several minor wounds from close calls and the simple math of trying to fight to many opponents.  By the time the last warrior fell the Sith Lord and his remaining troops were airborne and I was exhausted.  “Mutt, one of the enemy ships is lifting.  Can you intercept?”

The tweeting response told me that they were trying.  I left it in his hands and turned back to the fight.

Chaos reigned.

Ken, Two and Arnor had linked up and appeared to be fighting with the singer and her companion.  For the first time I noticed a habitat behind them: they were literally fighting on it’s doorstep.   Arnor and Ken had cut a wide swath through the field, and I realized in looking that Ken was the reason I wasn’t dead.  He’d taken down enough Massassi in his charge to make my battle win-able.  Now, though, Cha’s mercenaries were crowding in around my wife and son.

Time to return the favor.

The Ancient One was again silent, but I had learned from it.  As I loped across the field I dropped back into song, selecting a motif of sleep and rest and mixed it with fear and defeat, then wove it into my battle song.  With concentration I could leave just the right gaps in the song to prevent it from impacting Arnor and Ken…

“Ughh….”  Something slammed into me from the side, driving me down and into the dirt.  My saber skittered away and my concentration was broken completely.  The complex song I was weaving died and I fell back, feeling the standard song of battle spin back up as I did an awkward shoulder-roll and used the force to slam my attacker away from me. To complex, Karm.  Keep it simple, stupid…

I rose, feeling the fatigue now, the drain of energy from channeling so much force energy in so little a time.  Whatever had flooded through me to disable the vitreous blades the Massassi and Sith had carried had been powerful.  Not as damaging as what had flooded me on Sullust, but nearly as powerful for all that. 

It hurt.  A lot.

But there was no time for that now.  My opponent rose, and I recognized him.  “Lord Cha.  We meet again.”

He grinned back at me.  “Master Karmack.  Your song will not help you today.”  He laughed, full and deep, and launched a force lightning attack…

Pain…

I felt a nudge in the force, a feeling that was becoming familiar.  No word this time, just the clear impression of channeling water down a canal or series of cut channels.  With an effort I sang a motif that would be used to channel healing force energy and linked it to the Ancient One…

FIRE – CHANNEL – ENERGY – CHANNEL – RELEASE

I felt the fire in my body from Cha’s force lightning drop and fade.  There was still pain, but it was suddenly bearable… and all around the field lighting erupted, hammering out and slamming into Cha’s troops and a few Massassi warriors still struggling on the field.  Cha blinked, his mouth dropping open, as he realized that his force lighting attack had been absorbed and channeled to a dozen different places on the field.  I used the moment of his distraction to call my saber back to my hand, igniting it as I rose.  “Good shot.  My turn…”

Cha, no longer laughing, fell back as I advanced.  He reached down on his belt and withdrew a saber hilt, igniting it.  The blade pulsed a steady, deep blue.  This was not his saber, but one he’d taken from another Jedi, probably someone he’d killed.  I felt my battle song spinning around me, filling the space with deadly energy as I advanced.  Pain forgotten.  Mercy forgotten.  Just deadly purpose.

We engaged.

I could sense the mercenaries now streaming away, falling back to their own ship.  They, too, had several crates of crystals in their possession and it was time for them to make good their escape.  Arnor and Ken were still busy with whomever these two … armies … had come to kill.  I could sense from the song that both were also in pain as well, but I pushed it all back.

Survive.  Fight.  Win. 

My focus narrowed to simple survival.  We were engaged.  We would not disengage until one or both of us were beaten.  It was as simple as that.  Fatigue and strain allowed for no other thought.  Our blades were a blur, blue and yellow swirling and clashing in a flurry of strikes.  Cha was highly skilled and well trained.  And he was not as weary.

I made the first mistake, a small opening, but an opening.  Cha saw it and lunged, nearly driving his blade through my torso.  Off-balance, I fell back … and feinted.  I purposefully swung my blade right, as if I were still struggling to regain balance, and gave him an opening on my left side.  It was a gamble.  If he took the low shot I was risking losing my left leg just below the knee.  But his own blade was high, his own balance not as sure as he would want…

He struck, aiming to sever my left arm and perhaps continue the stroke through to my torso.  It was a solid blow, and it struck exactly where he aimed - square on the damaged but still intact song-steel gauntlet.  I blocked the blade – hard – driving it down and away with the gauntlet.  The heat of the contact nearly burned through, and it did burn my arm badly, but the gauntlet held and the blade deflected.  My own counter-strike was on-target and bisected the hilt neatly, disarming my opponent, but Cha was fast and still fairly fresh.  He somersaulted away and landed several meters up-hill, next to some of his men.  “Saber-resistant material.  Nicely played, Karmack!  Until next time, then.” He laughed and sprinted up-hill, covered by a hail of fire from his men.

Two returned fire, hammering the hillside but in the rapid-fire exchange there as little actual damage done.  In that moment I didn’t care.  I clawed the gauntlet off my arm, hissing as the agony of the burn finally registered.

A hand touched my shoulder, and soothing energy flooded through my arm.  Cool...  Heal…

I turned and looked up at green eyes, framed with flame-red hair.  Julwynn Hri, night sister of the Spider Clan, and a singer.  Next to her a human male, pale gray eyes, graggy face.  Mandalorian armor and odd headgear.  Just behind them, Arnor and Ken, both with their attention focused outward…  Julwynn spoke, her voice a soothing low alto, very unlike Arnor's soprano. “Master Karmack.  Are you alright?”

Confusion muted me, but I managed to nod.

She let out a sigh of relief.  “Thank the Maker.  And thank you.  You’ve saved most of my Clan, and my mate.”  She glanced at the man next to her, who I also noticed had his attention focused outward.  Her eyes came back to mine.  “How can we ever repay you?”

It was too much.  The pain, the fatigue…  Shock overcame me and I felt myself sink down to the ground.

...gray…
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« Reply #67 on: December 12, 2017, 01:59:05 AM »

Awesome!  Karmack pulled out some neat tricks there disabling the sabres - master of Song and Crystals it seems, but at a high cost in terms of energy, I think he was lucky Cha left and Arnor/Ken/Julwyyn showed up when they did...Anyway certainly not the ending that Karmack suspected, or the opponents!  Keeping it very interesting an unpredictable that's for sure with the Massai.
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« Reply #68 on: December 12, 2017, 02:56:04 AM »

The whole time we have been thinking Julwynn is a bad guy, when (while we still don't know for sure), she may end up being the good guy. I'm thinking she knows about Mendax, and though she may have once worked for him, she does not any longer, and he is trying to kill her because of it. Anyways, great chapter. Very enjoyable to read.
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« Reply #69 on: December 12, 2017, 03:17:39 AM »

...Whew!  What.  A.  Read!

This chapter was fantastic!  I LOVE the tactical Mak'Tor kit!  I think Zearic could use some of those items...

The Massassi WORKING for Cha was an awesome surprise!  And here I thought that it was bad enough with the Sisters, the Sith-Shadows, Cha, AND Mendax!  Speaking of...

Julwynn's HELPING Karm?!  That's an incredible development!  Hmm...wonder what Jennira would say...

I love what you've done with the Ancient One, ESPECIALLY against the vitreous weapons.  Gave those Sith QUITE the shock  Cheesy

Again, I had to slow down my reading...but that was phenomenal Karm!  CanNOT wait for the next chapter!

Until next installment friends  Smiley
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« Reply #70 on: December 12, 2017, 05:34:23 AM »

Thanks guys!  I had a little to much fun with the tactical kit.  :-)  I decided to add the lightsaber resistant material for the wrist shield and I found song-steel...  Well, you KNOW I had to use that!  LOL

Stay tuned.  The next chapter should be ... enlightening.
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« Reply #71 on: December 14, 2017, 10:18:23 PM »

Chapter 13: Revelations

I blinked, looking around me.  The room appeared to be one of the meditation rooms in the Sanctuary on M’Tzigon, Only it wasn’t.  The windows should have been flooded with light from the deep blue sky.  Instead they were gray.  Everything beyond the room was a simple gray mist.  But the dry, alpine climate on M’Tzigon meant that the sky was almost always clear, and never simply gray…  I shook my head, resisting the urge to run, too move.  Breathe.  Look.  Listen.  Think.  Then act with reasoned intent.

The air was light and sweet, but without the thin, dry feel of the altitude of the Sanctuary.  It smelled of cinnamon and spices.  I was sitting, legs crossed, on a meditation mat before a low table made of red-streaked granite.  The stone matched the walls.  Again, not an exact match for M’Tzigon.  There was a cushion on the table, cradling…

The Ancient One!

The crystal pulsed pale yellow on the pad.  How had it gotten there?  I reached for my belt, feeling for my saber hilt…

The hilt was gone.  All of my utilities were gone, my weapons, everything.  I wore the simple robe of an acolyte, light gray and tied with a wide cloth belt.  Bright yellow, a color reserved for those who could hear the song.  The man seated across from me was similarly attired.  And he was ancient.  “Ka’Ah’Re of Clan Mack, Master of Song of the Mak’Tor, Maenowan Master Knight of the Mak’Tor.  Holder of the Ancient One.  Greetings.”  The old man dipped his head.

I returned the bow, keeping a respectful eye on the old man.  “I am called Karmack, sir, but you have me at a disadvantage?”

The old man smiled.  “I am – or was, anyway – Master of Song Klu Xandin.  I’ve been wondering how long it would take for you to find your way in here.”

I blinked, stunned.  Master Klu Xandin?!?  Like most of the Mak’Tor’s early records the specifics of Xandin’s career had been lost when Kimar had purged them from the ranks of the “official” Jedi but the legends stated that Xandin had been one of the first to recognize the Song and being to isolate the Motif’s from the greater melodies and harmonies within it. He had taught the first of the Mak’Tor singers to truly sing, but his holocron had been lost…

I started.  No, not lost.  Hidden!  The Ancient One was his Holocron!  “How…   Sir, how did you do it?”

Xandin laughed.  “The Ancient One isn’t a proper holocron.  It’s more like a … recording device.  Only a very few of those who have carried it since my day have reached this point.   Dorian was one.  He’s around here somewhere.  And Odjina, though he never unlocked the deeper secrets.  He ran out of time.  That was a dark day indeed, though glorious as well.”

I nodded.  I was familiar with the Tragedy of Odjina and his sacrifice, both the official and family legends.  “But why now?  What unlocked it to me?  I’ve been probing and prodding the Ancient One for years, and nothing like this was even hinted at!”

Xandin closed his eyes and seemed to concentrate for a moment.  Then his face relaxed and his eyes twinkled when they re-opened.  “Ahh.  You’ve discovered the connection motif!  That’s probably it.”

“You mean that the crystal can, um, well, bind is the best term I can think of … that using the connection motif the Ancient One can bind other crystals to itself and form a chorus?  Is that what you mean?”

Xandin grinned.  “Yes.  That’s not its’ only trick, but it’s a doozie.  I’d say you also discovered just how much energy it takes, as well.   It’s a powerful tool, but use it with care!”  Xandin leaned forward.  “In order to bind the crystals, the Ancient One will draw power from the Force, and it channels that power through you.  The more crystals, the more powerful those crystals are, the more energy is required.  It is possible to … burn out from the passage.”  He leaned back again, regarding me with concern now.  “I suspect you’re going to become intimately familiar with the side-effects of this when you come out of this vision.”

I nodded.  I could feel the fatigue even now, bordering on burning pain, coursing through my entire body.  If it feels this bad when I’m unconscious…  “Um, any advice?”

“Yes.  Be VERY careful when you use the Connection.  It’s not something you can control.  The Ancient One will attempt to bind EVERY crystal it can reach, until it either runs out of suitable crystals … or you can no longer provide it with the force energy it needs.”

“Understood.”  I rose and bowed, my legs shaky, even in the vision.  “Thank you, Master.”

Xandir rose as well, returning the bow.  “No, thank you, Karmack.  You’ve done us proud.  I and the others look forward to future conversations.”

I felt my eyebrows rise slightly at that.  “How many others?  How do I get back?”

Xandir’s smile turned mischievous.  “In due time.  The door is open now.  It is no longer hidden.”

I opened my mouth to ask for more clarification, but Xandir raised his hand and a white flash filled my vision.  I felt a push, almost like a light force push…

… a sensation of falling …

I caught myself on my hands, hissing in pain as my damaged left arm took part of the load.  With a groan I recovered to my hands and knees.  Pain coursed through me, every nerve on fire from the abuse and overload…

A touch on my shoulder and cool energy again flowed through me, a healing motif similar to the one I knew yet different…

After a few seconds I was able to left myself back to a kneeling position.  The singer, Julwynn, was still in contact with my shoulder.  Her eyes were closed in intense concentration.  The man was watching her protectively, concern in his own eyes, a concern which matched what I saw in my wife’s eyes as she stared at me.  “Karm, what’s wrong?”

Still on my knees, I sat back into a meditation position.  “Drained…”  The healing energy was still flowing into me, but I could tell it was starting to take a toll on the night sister as well.  Whatever she was, she was NOT primarily a healer.  I reached up and pushed her hand off my shoulder, breaking the contact.  “Thank you…”

Julwynn started at the contact, but stepped back rather than attempting to restore the link.  “No, thank you, Master Karmack.  You saved all our lives.

The man standing behind her grunted.  “Ach!  Thank ye, Lass, for dat vote of confidence!”

She turned to him with a small smile.  “You were magnificent, Bal, but we were being overwhelmed.  The only reason we were still alive at all was because Namman showed up with his goons at the same time.  But eventually one or the other would have won out and we … I … would have been taken.”  She shuddered.  “I’m not sure which would have been worse…”

Arnor’s arms were around me now, and she gently lifted me to a standing position.  My legs were rubber, barely able to hold me up, but my attention was on Julwynn.  “Namman?  Namman Cha?  What’s your connection to him?”

Julwynn’s eyes fell.  “He is … was … my employer.  He recruited Jennira and I for a project years ago to use Jennira’s force strength and my songs to re-align kyber crystals for the Death Star’s laser.  We did that for two years, but then Jennira … changed.  She bonded the cruelest and worst of the Sith Shadows to herself and became very abusive.  She built a light-saber for herself and had me program that crystal to keep everyone away from us in the city…”

“Yeah, we had a … run-in with it.”  I said.  Julwynn gave me a questioning look.  “It was broadcasting … well, fear.  Fear and the urge to kill.  So I killed it.”

Julwynn flinched.  “Ouch.  I bet that hurt.”  She looked at Arnor, then back at me.  “We programmed that crystal together.  It has some serious punch.  Shattering it with a saber would have released enough energy to do major damage.”  She looked at me again.  “When did this happen?”
I shrugged.  “A few days ago.”
“Days?!?”  her eyes grew wide.  “What exactly are you???  You carved through dozens of Massassi warriors, did something to every pontite crystal in line-of-site, threw out a battle song that I’ve never heard before and which has improvisation in it, and then you took on Cha…”  She stepped forward, her hand reaching for my forehead.

Before I could flinch away, Arnor’s saber was alive and a bare millimeter from her wrist.  “That’s enough.  Talk only, if you please.”

Julwynn’s hand jerked back.  “Oh, of course.  Sorry.  Habits die hard…  My warren-clan find it easier for me to delve complex tails than to tell them.  It becomes a habit…”

“A habit you’ll be breakin’ lass.” Rumbled her companion.  “And right noo, I’m thinkin’.”

I looked at him again.  Bal Kohl was older than Julwynn and …  I realized I couldn’t feel him in the force.  It was like looking at a droid…   No, worse.  I could feel his armor.  Components for his weapons.  Fibers from his clothing. But not him… “That she will, Mr. Kohl.  Please continue to remind her.”

The mercenary nodded.  His gray eyes were utterly neutral, but his weapons were holstered and his shoulders relaxed.  It was enough. More about you later, I think…

Arnor turned back to Julwynn.  “So you had a former association with Cha.  Who were the others?  Where did the Massassi come from?  That race was supposed to be extinct.”

Julwynn looked distressed now.  “I don’t know for sure.  I only know a name: Darth Mendax.  Someone of great power.  And someone able to supply Jennira with an alternative way to access Song.  She’s always been a far more powerful force-user than I was but she's a very weak singer.  I had the song, so we had to work together.  Now?  Now…”  Tears welled up.  “She’s after power.  And someone else is feeding that greed to use her abilities.”

“Why all the pontite?   What did Cha or this Mendax want with it?”  Ken joined the conversation.

Julwynn turned to look at the young man.  “I was hiding it.  Cha want’s to build another super-laser.  Mount it in another Death Star or battle station or Super Star Destroyer or something.  He wants to kill people.”  Julwynn looked at Kohl and took his hand.  “I’ve had enough of killing…”

“And what about Medax?” I asked.

She looked at me, still holding Kohl’s hand.  “Mendax isn’t after a laser.  He has Jennira helping him design a psionic amplifier.  He plans to use it and Jennira’s new song abilities to cast his Qâzoi Kyantuska across the Empire.”

I felt a shock-wave roll through me, even as the urgency of the song suddenly expanded into my awareness.  There was nothing placid about the background music now.  It was pressing, tense, anxious…  “Where, Julwynn?  You know, don’t you?   Both sides made off with large quantities of the pontite you’ve been hiding from your sister.  Where did they take it?”

Julwynn’s lips pressed thin.  I could feel the conflict raging within her, but then Kohl placed his large hand protectively on her back and she sighed, taking another step toward good and away from evil.  “They both need specialized machines to form their weapons.  The shops on Kuat were capable of it, but they were damaged in a rebel raid.  Similar machinery on Sullust was dismantled by the Cobolt Front before the Death Star strike.  They were hoping to prevent the super-laser from being completed, but they were too late.  The only other place where the right machinery is already in place and ready for automated production is Geonosis.”

Julwynn turned and cried into Kohl’s shoulder.  Betrayal, even when you’re doing the right thing, is never easy.  I looked at Kohl.  “Truth?”

“Truth.” He rumbled back, and his steady gray eyes were also soft.  “You’ll be goin’ after them I suppose?”

“Yes.”  I replied.  Rubber legs, left arm still on fire from the burned-up armor, nerves burning with overload and fatigue, and strange visions mattered not.  “We have a job to do.”   
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« Reply #72 on: December 14, 2017, 11:28:38 PM »

Ah now it comes together...basically the remnants of Palpatine's cronies fighting over the carcass of the Empire...without Vader to keep their ambitions in check....
Crystal control will be useful....until some one gets wise to it and pulls a vibro sword...
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« Reply #73 on: December 15, 2017, 04:13:34 AM »

Ah now it comes together...basically the remnants of Palpatine's cronies fighting over the carcass of the Empire...without Vader to keep their ambitions in check....
Crystal control will be useful....until some one gets wise to it and pulls a vibro sword...
Yup, basically.  :-)  Its a window of opportunity, and you've nailed the underlying plot - without the top dogs to keep everyone in line, there's a scramble for power.  Cha is more conventional, and this Mendax is ... scary.
More coming, but the game is afoot!  :-)
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« Reply #74 on: December 15, 2017, 01:19:25 PM »

That was awesome Karm!  I love the development that the Ancient One acts as a kind of holocron and that the Sages of the past have their collective knowledge/personalities there. 

Beautiful character development: Julwynn's regret, Jennira's lust for power, Karm's burgeoning Sage status. And I LOVE Armor's quick-draw "back-off-b****" lightsaber scene  Cheesy

I think Cha and Karm are running head-long to an explosive confrontation...

Until next installment friends  Smiley
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