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Lord_S_Gray
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« Reply #60 on: December 12, 2017, 11:01:17 PM »

Tulan is lucky Zearic is so accommodating, if he had tried that with any of my characters he would've met a very quick and very painful demise...Anyway good turn in the story to these bored overly wealthy nutters. How long can he hold his breath...well in KOTOR2 there was this one force technique Kreia taught Meetra Surik....
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« Reply #61 on: December 13, 2017, 03:43:50 AM »

LOL  I am wondering if he might have one of those little do-hickies that Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan had in Ep1...  ;-)
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« Reply #62 on: December 14, 2017, 07:07:30 PM »

Chapter 12: Lagniappe

Quiet.

Perfect.  I settled in, focusing on a meditative technique that D’Aylanna had taught me.  And I withdrew into myself.

Gaetana’s orange saber blade was impenetrable.  And all of the power attacks that I’d come to rely upon were useless, worse than useless.  And even as she pressed her attack against me, her smile never faltered.  And I knew that I was doomed… I saw her effortlessly parry every attack, cutting through my forearm and calf when she tired of playing with me.

As she walks towards me, a thought forms.  Taking one more step to deliver a killing blow, I raise up my hand, the hand with my cortosis glove.  Only…this time it’s different.  She’s different.  This time, she sees the cortosis glove.  And smiling, she halts her stroke and instead, stabs out at me, impaling me, burning in my chest… wait, what…?

Distantly, I’m aware that my chest feels a burning sensation… I try to regain center, focus.  Again, I withdraw into myself, this time further.

The man in black was too fast.  Every stroke he parried, every attack he countered.  I thought that D’Aylanna and I would be enough…but I was even wrong about that.  And when I saw her body, crumpled at the foot of the pine tree, pure rage overcame me.  But even that was not enough.  First my saber, next my hand, then my…side.  And…again, pain.

Looking up, I see the man in black above me.  Only…this time, it’s different. He’s different.  This time, I see the saberpike raised…and then the man in black inhales quickly, swinging with all of his power.  The red blade descends…I can actually feel the heat on my head…and my arm… wait, what…?

Suddenly, realization floods into my consciousness.  I can feel hands on my head and on my arm.  Even blurry as they are through the water, I can see that they belong to my wife and daughter.  My chest is burning, lungs wanting to reflexively inhale.  I kick off of the bottom of the pond, my head breaking the surface of the water.  Sucking in deep breaths of air, I take a moment to clear the water from my eyes and look around…to see a scene that I did not expect.

“Well done, Shakal.” D’Aylanna’s smiling face is the first thing I see. Thank the Maker… And Jorya’s hands rub my back and shoulder.  My chest begins to rise and fall with regularity, more or less.

“Oh, Dad…” my daughter’s smile warms me.  Looking past her, I see Sendal grinning broadly (yet slightly disconcerting) as she meets my eyes and then looks down upon Tulan.  The Herglic was doubled over, coughing; his blowhole wheezing as he inhales deeply, only to be interrupted by another coughing fit.

“…You…how…well…” Tulan’s voice rasps as he attempts to get a word in edgewise between coughs.  Finally, with a deep inhalation from his blowhole, he quiets down.  His completely black eyes stare at me as if seeing something…unbelievable.  “…How is a ‘uman able to hold his breath for so long?”

My face impassive, I looked at Tulan.  “I’ve won the contest.  Now, I want for you to take us to Doctor Aphra.”

Walking to D’Aylanna, Sendal casually handed her back the wedding band she’d been holding as collateral.  “Yes, Tulan.  The human won.  And triple.”  Her long neck bowed slightly to Jorya.  “Come.  I will take you to the manse where Tulan can…recover.  And you can see Doctor Aphra”

Again dripping wet, I made my way over to my wife.  “Ereneda, how long was I under?” I quietly asked, following the odd pair as they directed Jorya, D’Aylanna, and myself further in the maze of ferrocrete paths.

D’Aylanna spoke out of the corner of her mouth.  “Almost forty minutes.  You must have been in torpor.  Any memories?”  I nodded.  “Yes, that’s indicative of a deep trance such as yours.”  She turned her eyes up to mine, love and worry shining through.  “Shakal, you must be careful.  You went so deep that Jorya and I had trouble reviving you.”

“Sorry.  But…at least we’ve gained the access that we needed.”

And as if mirroring my words, we stopped in front of a pair of metallic electronically sealed doors.  Tulan waved his hand in front of a sensor node causing the doors to slowly part.  As we entered, the relative darkness of the manse was significant enough that we had to allow our eyes to adjust, the lack of light enough to night-blind D’Aylanna.  Although, no one would suspect it given her sense of acuity thanks to her other heightened senses.  And, of course, the Force.

Following Tulan and Sendal further into the enormous building, my suspicions began to strengthen again.  I could tell that both D’Aylanna and Jorya felt the same, ready to grab and ignite their lightsabers in an instant.  I fully opened myself to the Force, projecting outward.  And there, just on the periphery, I felt them: multiple life forms.  Soon, with my senses alert, I followed Tulan and Sendal into an enormous, brightly lit grand room.

From the dimensions of it, the room must have taken up the entire top of the manse.  Lining the walls were various exhibits: paintings, archaic weapons, incredibly lifelike wax statues, a perpetual motion device, even an ancient water clock.  And lounging about the room was an assortment of peoples from all corners of the galaxy: human, Gran, Duros, Rodian, Lorrdian, even an H’nemthe.  One and all they exuded contemptuous pretentiousness.

And as I looked around, I noticed that the current occupants of the room did not match the number of life forms that I’d felt through the Force.  Perhaps they are hiding…?  But even as the thought came, I knew it to be wrong… But I was interrupted before I could complete my line of reasoning.

“…And whom, pray tell, are these…persons?” the Gran practically spat, adjusting his trifocals as if to verify that his three eyes were actually seeing…whatever he thought he was.  I was immediately reminded of the kommisars of Dalos IV: greedy, ostentatious, and venal.  Needless to say, my hackles were up.

Tulan announced, “Thur’st’en, these are punters…who have already proven themselves at the ‘test.”  Sendal nodded vigorously.

Surreptitiously, D’Aylanna touched my elbow, almost imperceptibly indicating with her chin for me to look over in the far corner.  Immobile in a chair, leaning over as if in contemplation, sat a slender human woman.  She had long brown hair, an attractive if weathered look about her.  And she had dozens of tubes feeding into her extremities, her chest, and her head.  What the hell…?

The Gran—Thur’st’en—followed my gaze, as I’d been staring.  “Ahh, yes.  Our most prized possession.  Behold!  The Steppes very own Doctor Chelli Aphra!  The only in-subordinate subordinate—” he laughed at his own witticism, a throaty guffaw, “—of Vader whom he attempted to kill…but instead lived to tell the tale!”  The only part of Aphra that moved was her eyes.  If looks could kill…I thought.  Silently, I gave both D’Aylanna and Jorya knowing looks.  They knew what to do; we’d had years to develop an unspoken rapport bordering sometimes on precognition.  Outwardly, we all looked nonchalant and unperturbed.

Thur’st’en’s grandstanding wasn’t finished, apparently.  “And now…Tulan tells me that we have a human that can hold his breath even longer than himself!”  The change was subtle but the room felt as if it had grown colder, a pall of menace infecting the atmosphere.  “Lairds, ladies.  I think that we’ve had the considerable luck to find our newest addition!”  I don’t like this.  Clandestinely, I readied my lightsaber.  Meanwhile, clamor around the room echoed as the assorted sentients clapped and cheered.  And when the Gran faced me, I immediately noticed the blaster in his hand.  Indeed, looking out of the corner of my eye, I saw that each and everyone of them had a blaster pointed at me.

Thur’st’en had a malevolent look on his face.  “For the Togruta and the Hapan: contact the Hutts, Myzm the Third I should think.  They could always use more chattel.”  He must have seen the scowl that appeared on my face.  “Oh don’t worry human.  You’ll be safe, here.”  He gesticulated around the room, pointedly pausing at each statue.  “After all, they are!”

Incredibly lifelike wax statues…

It was Jorya who reacted first, with her superior eyesight.  “…By the Maker… The statues…they…they’re people.” Her voice was soft, appalled.

“Welllll…” the Gran’s voice was mirthful yet derisive, “…I wouldn’t consider them ‘people’ really.  But they’re certainly trophies!”  The collected assemblage laughed.  “Unique, one and all, they are part of our ‘game.’  You see: we ‘ransom’ them…to each other!  And to the winner: the spoils!”  Walking over to Aphra, the Gran poked her.  She neither flinched nor reacted in the least.  “Not as crude as, say, carbonite but certainly just as good at preservation!  Once the good doctor here is saturated with the protein catalyst, we’ll add the final reagent.  And: viola!  Our very own Doctor Chelli Aphra!  Never to be duplicated!”  Thur’st’en pointed at Sendal.  “Correct me if I’m wrong, but it’s your turn for ‘Acquisitions’ is it not?”

The Kaminoan nodded, a wicked grin splitting her face.  “Yes, especially as I’ve brought this new one.”  She gestured disgustedly at the Herglic.  “Tulan almost let them get away, the fool.”

“Not so!  I assessed them with the ‘test!” the fat Herglic balled up his fist, pointing his thumb at himself.  “I demand my ‘alf-share!”

“I’ve heard enough.” D’Aylanna’s voice was soft, the quiet of death, silencing all of the talking within the room.  “Now.”

As one, Jorya, D’Aylanna, and I ignited our lightsabers, and attacked.  We’d all heard enough.  We gave no quarter even as cries of “mercy” pierced the air.  These were not innocents.  They were a malignant cancer.  As such, they were eradicated.

Closing down my lightsaber, I looked around the room, limbs littering the floor.  And one part of me had a macabre thought that someone—most likely the former occupants—would consider the tableau…“art.”  Grimly, I looked to my wife and daughter.  Jorya’s face looked…angry.  D’Aylanna?  She had the imperious look appropriate for her royal status.  And having passed judgment, she’d found them all…wanting.

Making our way through the grisly scene, we approached Doctor Aphra.  Her face impassive, D’Aylanna held her hands up to either side of the woman’s face, lightly touching her.  “Doctor Aphra, we’ve come to help you.  If you allow me in, I can know better how to do so.”  The woman’s eyes softened and D’Aylanna began to Delve her.  Silently, a few moments passed as my wife stared into Aphra’s eyes.  Quietly, she released her head.  “Thank you, doctor.”

Moving about the tubes deliberately, D’Aylanna began pressing various buttons.  Finally as she stepped behind some biomechanical machinery, I heard the equipment come to life and the tubes began to withdraw.  Apparently before doing so, the machine must have administered a coagulating agent because the wounds barely bled.  Almost at once, Jorya grabbed Aphra’s arm, healing flows from the Force coursing from her and into the doctor.  Before long, she was able to slowly move her head, shortly followed by her arms and then her legs.  We had introduced ourselves during the interim.

“Thank you,” she slurred, drool dripping down her chin as the anesthetic slowly wore off.

“Actually, doctor, we could use your help.”  I added my own Healing to Jorya’s, despite my meager skill at it.  D’Aylanna slowly moved about the room, scrutinizing everything.

“Anything…I can do…I’ll do it.” Aphra’s voice was stronger now, easier to understand.

“Can you tell me about the Crystal of Rur?  Whom did you sell it to, what they wanted with it, can you put us into contact with them?”  The doctor’s head was bowed but she stared her brown eyes into my hazel.

“The Rur crystal.”  She said in between breaths.  “FicTeneBris Corporation.  No idea what they wanted it for.  And they contacted me through intermediaries.  Sorry.”  Her face mirrored her regret.

Damn.  Then a thought hit me.  “Doctor…have you come across any other kyber crystals?”  I held my breath.

Doctor Aphra’s face broke out into a wide grin.  “Oh, Zearic, I can do better than that…”  She paused but whether or not if it was to catch a breath or for dramatic effect I did not know.

“I know where the Emperor’s kyber crystal processing stations are.”
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« Reply #63 on: December 14, 2017, 08:44:25 PM »

Forty minutes under the water? Wow, that is a long time. But I'm wondering who this "man in black" is, and why this time it is different, and what is different. We know about the whole Gaetana thing, and we know how that ended up, but I have no idea what this other vision means.

And then the group turning people into statues. Rude. Just rude. I don't like killing, but those guys (and gals) deserved what they got. Other than those two things, I really liked this chapter. I just wish I knew what everything meant. Too bad Doc Aphra wasn't as big of a help as they were hoping.
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« Reply #64 on: December 14, 2017, 10:29:04 PM »

Message from Karmack:  Nicely done, Zearic!"

And nicely done, Dutchman!  40 minutes? Wow...  That's quite a trance.  You'll have to teach me that one.  I don't have a song for anything like THAT!  ;-)
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« Reply #65 on: December 14, 2017, 10:39:49 PM »

Message from Karmack:  Nicely done, Zearic!"

And nicely done, Dutchman!  40 minutes? Wow...  That's quite a trance.  You'll have to teach me that one.  I don't have a song for anything like THAT!  ;-)
whispers"D'Aylanna's teachings"  Wink

Forty minutes under the water? Wow, that is a long time. But I'm wondering who this "man in black" is, and why this time it is different, and what is different. We know about the whole Gaetana thing, and we know how that ended up, but I have no idea what this other vision means.

And then the group turning people into statues. Rude. Just rude. I don't like killing, but those guys (and gals) deserved what they got. Other than those two things, I really liked this chapter. I just wish I knew what everything meant. Too bad Doc Aphra wasn't as big of a help as they were hoping.
I have a forthcoming Interlude that will help   Wink   Grin
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« Reply #66 on: December 14, 2017, 11:16:50 PM »

Slaughterific!  visions are interesting though...like he's seeing alternate pasts a view into what could've been which is very odd...no doubt with a specific future reason though...
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« Reply #67 on: December 14, 2017, 11:27:39 PM »

I have a forthcoming Interlude that will help   Wink   Grin

Cool, I can't wait to read it.

Slaughterific!  visions are interesting though...like he's seeing alternate pasts a view into what could've been which is very odd...no doubt with a specific future reason though...

That's what I was thinking. Alternate dimensions or parallel universes or something along those lines maybe.
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« Reply #68 on: December 21, 2017, 03:20:39 PM »

Just to preface this chapter, I have an image that is a perfect analog for the tactical armor that Zearic wears:

Only difference: gray robes  Cheesy
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Chapter 13: Visions

“Geonosis?”  I couldn’t believe my ears.  “Are you certain?”

Aphra’s brown eyes looked at me from underneath her brow.  “Absolutely.  The crystal manufactories have been there ever since the Emperor and Vader began building the first Death Star.”  Her head lowered, Jorya still administering healing via the Force.  “And when the Second Death Star was being built, crystal production had already begun.  That’s one of the reasons that the superlaser was already operational despite the superstructure being incomplete.”

“Yes, that follows.”  D’Aylanna’s voice was introspective as she approached us.  Turning to me, she lowered her voice.  “Shakal, look at these.”  And when she opened her hand, I saw several light-blue kyber crystals.  “I found them amongst the other paraphernalia.  Do you recognize them?”  As the light caught the facets of the crystals, the light blue seemed to have an almost preternatural glow about them.

Shaking my head, I slowly responded.  “No.  I’ve never seen kyber crystals that are that…color.”  I pulled one of them out of my wife’s small hand and held it up to the light, scrutinizing it.  Again, it seemed to have an inner glow about it, pulsing in time with…something.

“Father?  What is that?”  Jorya’s voice held inquisitiveness but also…was it, fear?  She approached me, her blue eyes large.

“A kyber crystal that your Mother found amongst the collection.”  Looking into her face, I was suddenly aware that my daughter also had a look of…recognition.  “Why Jorya?”  Turning the crystal in my fingers, I added, “Have you seen these before?”

As she slowly shook her head, she never took her eyes from the crystal.  “No.  That is, I have never seen them.  But…”  Jorya seemed almost reticent to continue, but when she did, words poured out of her mouth, faster and faster.  “…Well, I have seen them in a…vision.  When I Delved the Night Sister.  I still don’t know why I saw them when I probed her but… Well, they’re called ‘Permafrost crystals.’  Jennira…showed them to me.  I don’t know why she would do that or what the significance is…”  She slowly paused.  “But in my vision, the crystals would…strobe.”

Looking at my daughter curiously, my brow furrowed.  “What do you mean?  It’s pulsating now.”  I even held up the crystal to prove my point.  Turning my eyes from the crystal to Jorya, I stopped.  She looked incredulously at me.

“…Father.  That crystal looks…opaque to me.”  Jorya’s eyes looked dubious.

“As it does to me, Shakal.”  D’Aylanna’s voice agreed from behind my shoulder.

I looked straight at the crystal.  Even as I stared, the…permafrost(?) crystal’s light throbbed within.  “…Neither of you can see that?  Seriously?”  My eyes never left it.  The light within the crystal was now strobing.  Now I looked from Jorya to D’Aylanna.  “Nothing?”

“Not in the least.”  D’Aylanna’s voice was quiet, flat.

“No, Father.  Nothing.”  Jorya sounded almost apologetic.

After considering a moment, I decided to pocket the crystal.  Perhaps Kage Oyuna can help me… Later…

Mentally shrugging, I went back over to Doctor Aphra.  “Doctor, you were saying about Geonosis?”  Seeing them out of the corner of my eye, D’Aylanna and Jorya had put their heads together, their voice quiet and almost conspiring.  

Rubbing her hands through her hair, she inhaled slowly before talking again.  “Yeah.  Geonosis was the Empire’s primary site for both Death Stars.  Well…even before the first Death Star was complete, Grand Moff Tarkin—under the implicit direction of the Emperor—deemed that Geonosis should be...‘sterilized.’”  She shuddered as if reliving a memory.  “I…that is, Lord Vader had…‘hired’ me to investigate the planet afterwards.”  Her voice lowered.  “The Empire was…quite thorough.”   I could imagine.

Looking at each of the women in turn, I was deadly serious.  “Let’s go.”  I collected my robes that I’d shrugged off.  But when I straightened, I noticed D’Aylanna’s body went rigid midstep.

Jorya noticed almost immediately after I had.  “Mother?  Mom?!”  She was about to shake her when I firmly but gently grabbed my daughter’s arms.

“No Jorya, don’t.”  I knew what this portended.  It had been awhile since my wife had had a vision.  “Your Mother’s alright.  Just give her a moment.”

True to my words, D’Aylanna’s body relaxed as she inhaled a deep breath.  “Shakal.  We must needs travel to Geonosis with haste.  Master Karmack needs our help.”  Her dark eyes looked…haunted.

Ereneda, what did you see?” I asked, noticing that Jorya’s face must have mirrored my own: love and concern filled her blue eyes.  Standing next to my wife, I put my arm around her small waist.

“…Nothing explicit.  Menace.  A dark tide awash with hate and…intent.  To subjugate?” D’Aylanna’s Basic was impeccable but she still thought in Hapan so often her choice of words were not as…exact as she wished.  Still: her Basic was much better than my Hapan.  However…

I looked at Jorya.  “Dear One, you speak Hapan better than I.  D’Aylanna, tell Jorya please.”  My wife nodded, relating her vision.

Jorya looked awestruck.  And fearful.  “Oh Mother… Father, she said that there is a…presence awaiting us at Geonosis.  All of us; Master Karmak, Lady Arnor, and Ken as well.  Someone is orchestrating events in the hopes of…dominating.  A new empire.  And…a new dark lord.”

Silence hung in the air.  I finally spoke, “Let’s get the hell out of here.”

            <<<<< >>>>>

We’d offered Doctor Aphra a place on our ship but she declined, grateful for the rescue.  She told us that she would collect what she needed and then leave the Cosmatanic Steppes.  But before she did, she hugged each of us in turn, D’Aylanna the longest, thanking her profusely.

“If you ever need anything, I’ll do whatever I can to help.” She had told my wife.

Now, with the blue-shift of the light from the hyperspace tunnel bathing the canopy in the cockpit, D’Aylanna joined Jorya and I in the small lounge area of Fenris’ Dirge.

Ereneda, are you saying that we’re expected then?” I asked as she took a seat next to me.

Nodding her head, D’Aylanna’s voice was soft, strong, resolute.  “Yes.  But…we still have a chance.  But…we must be…unorthodox in our tactics.”

I briefly laughed.  “Ereneda.  Our ‘normal’ is unorthodox.”  I became serious one again.  “Still, please tell us your thoughts…”

            <<<<< >>>>>

As D’Aylanna entered the jump coordinates into the computer, I prepared.  Sitting on the deck in our room alone, I focused on the blue kyber crystal that lay before me.  And as the pulsations slowly continued, I finally understood why: it was in time with my own beating heart.

I knew something about how Singers often felt an…affinity towards their crystals.  The stronger the Singer, the more intense the bond.  And while I could not Sing like the Mak’Tor, I was definitely…aware of the Song.  But this…this was different.  

When I was first apprenticed to Master Kazic, he once told me of Jedi that had such empathy with their crystals.  I smiled in remembrance, his gruff lilting voice instructing me on the ways of lightsaber construction.  Most students would usually be able to do so on their third or fourth attempts.  It took me over twenty.  Kazic would often say that the Maker must have made me first since I would need all of the time in the universe to finally get it right.  Yet…he never once got agitated or angry with me.  The man’s patience was truly a virtue.  But he would often relate of a symbiosis between kyber and Jedi that transcended the usual, creating a bond between weapon and wielder.  Again, I smiled wistfully, thanking him who helped save me.

Just as with D’Aylanna.  Like Kazic, she had a seemingly inexhaustible supply of forbearance for me.  And it was under her tutelage that I’d finally been able to learn.  I would prevail at this, just as before.

And now: I focused, this time embraced in the Force.  The crystal began to rise, the light within strobing now with a bright yet relaxing radiance.  Concentrating, I then took both ends of my disassembled lightsaber and carefully but securely constructed the emitter, hilt, and pommel housing the new crystal.  Finally, I reached out with my hand, touching the weapon for the first time.  The comfortable banding around the hilt felt familiar yet it was the new crystal with which I felt an attachment.  Igniting the lightsaber, the rich sapphire blade was beautiful, again subtly pulsating in time with my own heart.

But I still needed to prepare.  Walking towards one of the lockers in my room, I keyed the mechanism.  Inside was a gift that D’Aylanna had given me for our wedding years ago.

Constructed of Charubah steel, indigenous only to Hapes, D’Aylanna had had commissioned a suit of combat armor for me.  The plating was not only incredibly lightweight but it never hindered movement.  The style hearkened back to the time of the Old Republic, back when the Sith were legion and the Jedi were true warriors and not just emotionless bureaucrats.  But what truly made this armor unique was that somehow D’Aylanna had incorporated a weave of beskar within the plating.  It was as good as Song-steel, if not necessarily cortosis.  Still: unlike cortosis, it would not eventually shatter.

Within the vambraces, I had two stiletto vibroblades, one in each forearm.  And the same within the greaves: one in each boot.  The tactical hooded surcoat was a Mak’Tor gift that Karm and Arnor had presented to D’Aylanna and I during our time on M’Tzigon: a dark gray blaster-dissipating mesh woven throughout the cloak.  It was a remarkable gift, one that they’d given to myself, D’Aylanna, and Jorya.  Smiling, I remember Karm saying that he called it being “prepared.”

Attaching my newly constructed lightsaber opposite my shoto on my belt, the armor felt like a second skin.  D’Aylanna’s vision foremost in my mind, I was grateful that I had donned it.  Before walking out of the room, I paused, looking at the pack that I'd had at Bar'leth.  Making a decision that I hadn't knew that I was vacillating on, I put my hand in the pack, withdrawing the black stone dagger and put it in the holster at the back of my belt.  Walking out of our shared quarters, I joined my wife in the lounge area.  She already had her own armor on, lithe and formfitting.  I knew that Jorya would also have her own personal armor, courtesy of D’Aylanna’s position within the Hapes Consortium.

Shakal, I’ve made the course corrections.  It should allow us to excise almost twelve parsecs from our route, including Arkanis.  With luck, we’ll be able to be of assistance to Master Karmack…” My wife’s eyes lost focus as she once again scrutinized her visions.

As I’d said: D’Aylanna was a master at Force Precognition.  If she said that Karmak and Arnor were there at Geonosis then I knew that they were.

But I also knew that her visions were never wrong.  Ever.  And looking at her, I knew that she was trying to remain calm.  To anyone else, she had the outward appearance of serenity and composed assuredness.  But I knew her better.

D’Aylanna Vih’Torr, Master Gray of the Vhal’Dan, was terrified.  And we were heading within the dark tide itself.
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« Reply #69 on: December 21, 2017, 03:57:51 PM »

Nice chapter!  I love the armor!  :-) 

*mumbles something about wishing I'd thought of that...*

And I am just a little worried now...  Karmack is in deeper bantha poodoo than I think I realized... 

In all seriousness, nice chapter.  I love the flow and I am intrigued by the crystal.  These permafrost crystals come from Vyth, so that tie-in will no doubt be interesting in the future.  Smiley 
Looking forward to the next installment!
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« Reply #70 on: December 21, 2017, 09:50:51 PM »

Looks like Geonosis is where it is going to go off!!

Still with D'Aylanna's vision combine with the power Mendax seems to have...very convenient...plus there is still that ship that followed them for Bartleth...

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« Reply #71 on: December 30, 2017, 06:31:23 AM »

Special thanks to Karm for trusting me with his characters and Medwyn for his insights concerning Water Forms  Smiley
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Chapter 14: Contrapasso (part 1) (This takes place directly after Wind Chimes, Chapter 15: The Butcher's Bill)

Exiting Fenris’ Dirge, I was first to see that Arnor was not with Karm or Ken.  As I took the taller man’s hand in my grip, I asked, “It’s good to see you, my friend but is Arnor alright?  Ken.” I nodded and gave a brief smile to the shorter teidowan then turned my attention back to Karm.

“She’s alive.  She’s recovering.”  I could see by the tight set of his eyes that there was more to it than that but I respected his prerogative in what he wanted to tell.  Nodding in understanding, I looked at our surroundings while I waited for Jorya and D’Aylanna to disembark.

Before we’d made planetfall, Karm had transmitted coordinates on where to rendezvous.  It was one of the major hive-spires, adjacent to the Petranaki Arena.  The redish landscape and orange sky was a direct contrast to the Steppes.  Combined with the gravity of the situation, it was disconcerting to say the least.

Feeling Jorya’s hand on my pauldron, when I saw D’Aylanna walk down the ramp, I knew that we were ready.  Grasping both my lightsabers, I was about to talk when my wife spoke first.

Shakal, you and Master Karmak needs must go together.”  Her dark eyes were watery and full of worry.

“I was going to say that Ken and I would set the pontite.” Karm’s steady voice intoned.  Even as he spoke, D’Aylanna was shaking her head.

“Forgive me, Master Karmak.  I’ve had a vision.  You and my husband must go together; otherwise, without the other you both will succumb to the dark tide.”  D’Aylanna’s blue lips thinned in apprehension.  “I will take Jorya and Ken to set the pontite along geodesic positions.”  Suddenly, her hand shot up, resting upon Karm’s tall shoulder, her voice full of compassion.  “Karm…trust the Singer.”

With only the barest of hesitation, Karm nodded, giving no hint of astonishment.  “Thank you, D’Aylanna.”  He faced Ken.  “Watch their backs, son,” he said as he smiled.  And turning, Karm gathered me with a hand on my shoulder.   “Let’s go, Zearic.”

As I fell into step next to him, I said, “Lead the way, Karm.”  He nodded without a word, instead grabbing his own lightsaber.  Together, we ran into the hive-spire, heading further inward.

Instead of waiting for our eyes to adjust, we ignited our lightsabers, Karm’s golden blade casting a warm glow which, combined with my own silver and sapphire, helped to dispel the oppressive darkness.  Following the tunnels, I had already opened myself to the Force, projecting ever outwards, looking for life signs.  As I did so, I could hear Karm gently Singing what I recognized as a battle-Song.  Up ahead… I thought.  And before we knew it, they were upon us.

Springing from the shadows, six figures with red lightsabers attacked.  They were almost all different species—Zabrak, Trandoshan, Lorridian, Duros, and human—but they were of single intent: to kill.  There was also another similarity: they were all Singers.  Karm engaged the nearest three, his saberwork immediately recognizable as superior to the Dark-Siders.  Gritting my teeth, I simultaneously went through my Mental Water Forms as I met my three opponents, my blades against theirs.

As my Force-assisted muscles propelled my body quick as thought, part of my mind made notice of each of our blades: one and all, they were pulsating.  With Karm and the Dark-Siders, there was a…cadence that was reflected in both voice and blade.  With my own, my sapphire lightsaber beat with my own heart.

The shock on each Dark-Sider’s face was evident: they didn’t know that they faced a Singer, much less one of Karm’s caliber.  And it was then that I had my second epiphany: Karm’s battle-Song mirrored my own attacks, almost exact.  My Nexu Master had taught me the Water Form: the style was one of flow and control and, like waves washing ashore, the moves followed the rhythm of advance and retreat.  So too was Karm’s Song: the changes in the Song directly changed our environment; notes—form—were only temporary in the flow.  Whether the Song—the form—was gentle or hard depended on the situation, changing from one state to another as a matter of the moment.  Both Song and Form were melodies in one harmonious tune, the whole greater than the sum of its parts.  I smiled, feeling kinship once again as we fought as though of one mind.  Within moments, four of our opponents lay dead, the fifth failing in his defense against my shoto.  And as I feinted low, the opening that it created was immediately exploited, my blue blade sweeping upwards, cutting the Lorridian’s face completely from his head.

Glancing past Karm and his opponent, I noticed that a small army of Sith-Shadows were attempting to flank us.  Before they could blindside him, I made a quick jump to engage them.  Even as their numbers continued to grow, I was untouchable; with my lightsabers an extension of my arm, of my will, I furiously cut them down.  And while a few blaster shots did make it past my blades, the dissipating weave of my cloak and armor protected me.  Soon, I noticed that there were less and less Sith-Shadows—and blaster fire—to contend with: feeling his presence from behind, Karm’s golden blade was scything through the Sith-Shadows upon my flank, returning the favor.  Soon, we met towards the middle of the large antechamber, not one Sith-Shadow remaining alive.

“Thank you.” We both said in unison.  Smiling, Karm closed down his saber, kneeling by the Dark Singers’ bodies.  And from each fallen Dark Singer, I saw him open the housing that held the pontite crystal, removing them from the lightsaber.  “These Vitreous weapons each have a potent primed crystal that I can take advantage of.”  He turned his eyes towards me.  “But how is it that their Singing didn’t affect you?  I could almost feel their Songs being absorbed around you.”

“I don’t kno—” I suddenly stopped, immediately thinking about the black stone dagger.  “…I think that it might have something to do with…this.”  I reached behind my cloak, pulling out the dagger.  Karm’s intense gaze scrutinized the seemingly innocuous weapon.

“Incredible.”  With that, he had the last crystal from the Dark-Sider’s weapon in hand.  He looked as if he were about to say something else when suddenly we both felt a disturbance in the Force coming from somewhere in front of us.

“Zearic…I need a short distraction.”  He looked up, the hint of a smile on his face.  “Would you mind terribly?”

“Not at all.”  I could feel the oppressiveness radiating out in waves of darkness from before me.  “Just don’t forget D’Aylanna’s warning.” I said, only half-joking, running forward.

I noticed that from the distance we’d traveled, we were no longer in the hive-spire.  As I continued down the halls, the rock crags were soon replaced by foundry machinery and automated assemblies.  Soon, the tunnel opened into an enormous mechanized cavern, a break in the ceiling leading to the surface far overhead.  And in front of me, a presence that I’d felt before…

With a lightsaber in her hand, the pulsing red blade slowly strobing in time with her Singing, Jennira stood a lone sentinel against me.  Her face drawn back in a feral sneer, the witch made a flourish with her lightsaber, advancing upon me.  “I’ve dreamed of this day.  But before you die, I want for you to know that I will have my revenge upon your daughter.”  I was already angry, but it was tempered with righteous justice.  As my blue blade met her red, she ignited a second blade on her saberstaff, intent on bisecting me.  Thankfully, I deflected her blade with my shoto, slowly circling.  The Night Sister’s face furrowed in confusion.  “…How is it you are resisting my Song?”  And as she mentioned,  I noticed that her Singing was diminished.  Her Song still affected me but almost as if having been strained through a…filter, as if muted.  Regardless, I was grateful for the effect.  Jennira was not only powerful in the Force but clearly also a practiced saber practitioner.

Each attack that she pressed, I was able to parry but she was good enough to not allow for any riposte.  And from time to time, she would try to distract me, either with a Force Push or some telekinetic missiles.  Each attack I was able to thwart, to her growing agitation.  “You will pay for the deaths of my brood-chattel.  You will beg for death at my hands!  You will come to realize that the only release left you in this world is a quick death that I will never grant you!”  Emphasizing her words, her swings became more power-prone, less precise.  Smiling inwardly, I…flowed into my next Form.  Using the momentum from Jennira’s last lethal swing, I surged straight into her, grabbed her saberstaff and threw her across the room where she hit the far wall, hard.

Shaking her head as she rose to her knee, I wondered why she still had a small smile upon her lips.  “Surrender.  Or die.”  My voice was cold but I could feel the heat of my anger below the surface.  Yet with my sapphire blade at her throat, the witch only smiled further.

“Neither.”  Her eyes flicked behind me for the briefest of moments.  “Now you die.”

Before I knew it, I was attempting to pick myself off from the floor.  I felt as if I’d been run over by a speeder.  Trying to clear my field of vision, I shakily stood.  What the hell…?  Turning, I saw a figure clad completely in black.  Almost two meters tall, he was slender, a mask hiding his face, the rest of his body in black durasteel armor.  And before I’d regained my faculties, I was again blown across the room, through the far wall.  Only my armor protected me from dire injuries, although I felt the soreness that promised future pain.  As I came to rest, I heard Jennira’s voice behind me.

“Meet my Master, Darth Mendax.”  She laughed, a melodious and pleasant sound.  “And your death.”  As if to illustrate her words, I was bodily thrust from the floor to the ceiling, a crushing force that even my armor couldn’t fully mitigate.  After a moment, I fell and hit the floor, hard.  Spitting blood, I tried to focus on this Mendax and his Singing.

And for the first time, I noticed that he held a staff affixed with a large, glowing green crystal, its light a sickly hue.  “The Rur crystal…” I inadvertently said aloud.

“Yes.” Mendax’s voice sounded mechanical, inhuman.  “I’m impressed.  Most people know nothing of Rur, much less its provenance.”  And then he again began to Sing, pain erupting all over my body.  I felt as if my nerve endings were being burned by the coldest ice, that my tissues were being ripped from my bones, and my blood was being boiled.  By the Maker… If Jennira’s Singing within the crevasses of the Canticum Lowlands had been bad, this was worse.  “You see Zearic, the Rur crystal confers the ability to Sing.  Not that the fools who had it before would know.”  Mendax laughed.  “They were actually using it as their computer core!”  

I was doubled over in pain as both Mendax and Jennira approached me.  My lightsabers…where? I thought.  Spying them out of the corner of my eye, I was about to call them to me when a surging wave of pain inundated me.  Compared to what the Night Sister had done to me, this was by far the worst.  And even as I screamed, Mendax’s Singing was interrupted when he spoke, almost conversationally.

“You see, the Rur crystal also allows me to utilize people as if they were themselves kyber crystals.  Like Jennira and her brood-chattel.  And in conjunction with the pontite that Jennira and her sister Julwynn have provided me, an entire planet is mine to enthrall.”  Both Mendax and the Night Sister stood above me as I writhed in agony.  “And now, Zearic, before you die, know that I will make suffer your wife and your daughter, that they will plead for death, a death that I will deny them.  And they will experience torments unending…and they will have you to thank.”  Again, Mendax laughed.

Involuntarily, I closed my eyes against the agony that I anticipated to come…

And suddenly, I began to feel a comfortable warmth, healing coursing throughout my body, muscle, tendons, and ligaments mending themselves as my body felt…rejuvenated.  Looking up at Mendax and Jennira, I could see that they were both confused.  And on the periphery of my vision, I noticed that the Rur crystal’s glow no longer cast the eerie, ill green light about.  From the core of the crystal, a pure golden radiance began to shine.  I couldn’t help but smile.

“…By the Emperor’s ghost…” Mendax’s voice held disbelief, his Singing no longer effective.  Besides him, the Night Sister looked about in fear.

“M…master?  What’s happened?” Her black eyes looked haunted.  

And that’s when I heard Karm’s Singing.  And I wasn’t alone in doing so.  Jennira’s mouth dropped in utter astonishment.  And as I stood, I saw Mendax retreating towards the far tunnel.  Calling my lightsabers to my hand I ignited them, the sapphire and silver blades casting shadows across the witch’s fallen face.  Karm stood beside me, his baritone voice resplendent, his golden blade glowing like a newborn star.

“Great timing.  Thanks.” I spoke quietly.

“Don’t mention it.” He said easily.  Louder, “Jennira, surrender.”

“A Night Sister would rather die than be taken by the likes of you fools.” She said haughtily as she adopted an aggressive stance with her saberstaff.

Karm’s eyes bored into Jennira’s.  “Julwynn would object to that.”  He continued as the witch’s face changed from arrogance to shock.  “You see, she didn’t surrender; she came to us willingly.”  Karm’s smile took on an almost vicious slant.  “I guess that you don’t know your sister half as well as you’d thought.”

Jennira’s entire body twitched, her face assumed a broken look.  “No.” She said quietly.  Then, as if a conflagration had ignited, the Night Sister shrieked, a howling keen that almost deafened us.

NO!!!” And Jennira began to Sing, a torrent that threatened to subsume Karm and I, her saberstaff blades a continuous blazing crimson beating in cadence with her Song.

Screaming in order to be heard, Karm put his head next to mine, “She’s trying to wrest control of the crystals from me!”  Looking at Rur, the crystal had resumed a green glow, albeit faint.  “She’s using her own life-energies as well as the Force!”  Force winds born of Jennira’s Singing buffeted us, threatening to break us against the wall.  Both Karm and I went down to one knee.  “Zearic…I’m holding control of the crystals but barely.” I could hardly hear Karm despite the fact that he had to scream at the top of his lungs.

I fought against the storm, squinting my eyes, hoping that a plan would take root.  Think dammit!  We couldn’t move; using the Force, I thrust my lightsaber at the Night Sister, throwing the blue blade at her.  Right before it impaled her, my saber rebounded as if it had hit an invisible wall.  I knew that Karm couldn’t release his own lightsaber and risk losing the Ancient One.  And, in the back of my mind, I had a singular thought.  The dagger… Grabbing the hilt, I reversed my grip and held it by the blade.  And with a powerful flick of my arm, I sent the dagger end-over-end at Jennira.  She must have expected her Force Storm to protect her as it had against my lightsaber; her face didn’t change from its furious scream.

Suddenly, the air around us was silent, both Karm and I stepping forward against the gale that no longer battered against us.  Jennira’s eyes looked shocked for a moment…but then the life left them as she collapsed to the ground.  The black stone dagger had buried itself to the hilt in her forehead.

Calling my lightsaber to my hand, I had to physically retrieve my dagger from the Night Sister’s body.  Meanwhile, Karm was busy removing the Rur crystal from Mendax’s staff.  Once detached, he placed it in a deep pocket of his combat smock.  “Karm…where to now?  I can’t sense Mendax…”

As if anticipating my question, he was already walking towards the far tunnel.  “This way.”  Again, Karm’s baritone voice Sang.  Clearly, it was a healing Song, as it helped to assuage the agony that I’d suffered under Mendax’s Singing.  I thanked him again as we ran down the tunnel, greasy and rusted pipes lining the entire passageway, small billowing clouds of vapor condensing around the ceiling.  His head turned sideways, a grin on his face.  “No problem.  Maybe I can teach you next to gargle.”  

I gave a short, appreciative laugh.  “Why not?”  With the Force flowing from me, I could feel three life signs in front of us, unmoving as if they were expecting us…

As the industrialized tunnel opened to the next antechamber, the walls changed back to the megalithic structures of the hive-spires.  And once within I pulled up in shock.  Mendax was standing there unconcerned but I looked past him at the other two people in the room.  One was Mellichae, his cybernetic arm whole and grasping his pulsating saber.  But his left arm was locked around the neck of the third person: Jorya.  She was bloodied and bruised, one eye almost completely swollen shut, her lower armor all but missing, the femur of her right leg jutting out through a savage, ragged gash.  She had a pair of binders around her wrists.  No…!  Dear One!

“Karmak, Zearic.  You will both drop your swords and hand to me the Rur crystal.” Mendax pivoted his head and then addressed Karm directly, “If there is even a hint of Singing or using the Force, I will have Mellichae run the Togruta through.”

I stood there, hesitant.  I didn’t know what to do… To his credit, Karm did not Sing…and neither did he relinquish the Rur crystal.  “I cannot do that, Mendax.”

I knew that he was right.  “Karm…” My voice was borderline pleading; I knew that we could NOT give Mendax the crystal…but I feared for my daughter…

“So be it… Mellichae, kill that tralk.” Mendax’s voice was flat, impassive.

Smiling and quicker than the eye could see, the Zabrak held out his left arm, gripping Jorya by the neck, his right arm holding his raised lightsaber, the red blade poised to cut her down.  And laughing a gravelly, incredibly deep laugh, his right arm fell.
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« Reply #72 on: December 30, 2017, 06:43:19 AM »

Contrapasso (part 2)

“Jorya!!” I took a step forward, readying a Force Pull, knowing that anything I did would be futile.

There was a flash of blue and both the Zabrak and Jorya flew from their places; Jorya to the floor and Mellichae up to the ceiling.  He then dropped back to the floor like a clipped mynock, hitting some stacked crates.  Nearby, his severed cybernetic arm reflexively gripped the still-ignited lightsaber, until the biomechanical servos recognized that they were no longer receiving electrical signals from the synapses and released the lightsaber, closing down the weapon.

With a curse Mendax ran, escaping through an opposite tunnel.  Stunned, I turned back to see Ken holding his ice-blue lightsaber at the ready, standing just behind of where Mellichae and Jorya had been.  Running to my daughter, I helped her up to her feet.  “Karmak, can you please help her?”

Standing by Jorya, smiling a proud smile for Ken, Karm quietly began Singing a healing Song.  Adding my own meager healing flows, I heartily thanked the teidowan, “Ken, you have my eternal gratitude!  But…what happened?  Where is D’Aylanna?”

Still standing where he’d telekinetically thrown the Zabrak from, he answered with a small grin on his face, “We were ambushed by Sith-Shadows before we could set all of the pontite so Master D’Aylanna told Knight Jorya and I to finish with the crystals while she ‘took care’ of them.  But when I was setting the last one, Jorya was attacked by a couple of Dark Singers.  I countered with a battle-Song and we fought back-to-back…but then that Zabrak attacked us.”  Ken bowed his head, shame radiating off of him.  “I…he got me with a Force Push… Jorya, she…she tried to stop him but… And he…took her.”

“Ken.”  I spoke severely in order to get his attention.  Looking up, his blue eyes tentatively but resolutely looking into my hazel, I sternly continued, “Ken.  You saved her.  I cannot thank you enough.”  Slowly, his confidence returned.  I smiled at him, “I owe you.”  Looking from Ken to Karm Singing and then to Jorya, I saw that she looked better, if still a bit bruised.  But the bone of her leg was no longer fractured and she was able to tentatively put her weight upon it.

“…Well, th…I mean, you’re welcome, maenowan.” Ken looked somewhat bashful, deliberately changing the subject.  “Say…do you think that I…killed him?”

Both Jorya and I chuckled while Karm stopped Singing, speaking to his son fondly, “Well, Ken—”

Suddenly, a red blade arced through the air, cutting off Ken’s arm near the shoulder.  The teidowan’s face contorted in both shock and pain; Karm’s yell echoed throughout the chamber.  “No!”

Mellichae’s face appeared above and behind Ken’s shoulder, his rough, deep voice rasping, “No, you didn’t kill ‘him,’ but you did get ‘his’ attention!”  And with that, he plunged his blade through Ken’s back, the red tip exploding through his chest.

“Ken!  No!!  NO!!!”  And after a second of silence, Karm began to Sing.

When Mendax and even Jennira had Sang, they were drawing strength from the river that was the Force.

Karm was the river.  No, he was an ocean.

As Karm Sang, the Rur crystal began to glow, becoming a radiance that began to outshine a thousand suns.  The surrounding walls, floors, and ceiling began to vibrate intensely as the pontite crystals began to propagate the Song, an earthquake shaking the hive-spire.  Waves of pure energy washed over all present, healing Ken, Jorya, and myself while hammering against Mellichae, propelling him against the wall, knocking him insensate.  All of my pain, all of my injuries were entirely healed; Jorya’s broken leg, lacerations, and bruises completely restored.

And still Karm Sang.

And even as I watched, Ken’s chest reformed itself to its natural state, the skin, muscle, and organs regenerating completely as if nothing had occurred.  And, slowly, his arm began to grow back, first from the shoulder…and then his bicep and tricep…and then his elbow.  And all the while, Karm began to shine as brilliantly as the Rur crystal, his sonorous baritone reverberating throughout the chamber, as strong and as bright as a star during noon, growing ever greater, wonderful, and more powerful.

The abruptness of the silence was deafening.  Karm’s Singing went from a rising crescendo to absolute stillness.  He looked at Ken, the look on his face one of absolute joy…until his eyes rolled up into his head.  And before I could react, the taller man collapsed, his lightsaber rebounding on the floor, coming to rest in the shadows.  Jorya and I ran up to Karm, examining him as we both opened ourselves to healing flows of the Force.  His pulse was slow but stable.  But try as we might, neither of us could revive Karm.

He was in a deep coma.

“Dad…Ken?” Jorya reminded me tentatively, looking at the teidowan.  I approached Ken’s body and knelt down, rolling him over.  The sight that met me was…wonderful.  Of the chest wound, there was no sign of it.  And Ken’s arm had…grown back.  Well, much of it; his arm ended in a stump just past his elbow.  Still, considering the injuries he’d sustained… Ken’s chest rose and fell with the regularity of peaceful sleep, his pulse strong and steady.

Thank the Maker… I thought, smiling.  And Karm…

Looking around, my eyes fixed upon the Rur crystal.  Or rather, the thousands of shard pieces.  It must have shattered as a result of…whatever Karm did.  And lying prone and motionless—but alive—was Mellichae.  Gabbing my lightsaber I ignited it.  I would correct a mistake that I’d made, one that I regretted profusely.  Slowly, I walked over towards him…

“How different you’ve become, Zearic.” The voice behind me had the mechanical quality of a droid.  Turning, I faced Mendax as he approached, dust and small rocks covering his armor, his saber hilt in hand.  I grabbed my shoto and ignited it as well.  Mendax slowed to a halt, his body language seemingly unconcerned.  

Whispering to Jorya, I hastily spoke, “Get Ken and Karm out of here and back to Fenris’ Dirge, fast as you can.  Find your Mother.  Now, apprentice.”  The last I said more harshly than I intended but I wanted them all out of danger.  Hurriedly, Jorya got the Mak’Tor Jedi out of harm’s way using the Force.

Facing the black and gray mask, I squared up against the taller man.  “How would you know, Mendax?” I adopted a ready stance in Juyo, again preparing my Water Forms.

“I know…because…I know you.”  And he ignited his saber.

An orange blade sprang into existence.

Stunned, I almost lowered my defenses.  “…Gaetana?  How…you…you’re dead…”  Even as I asked the question, she attacked.  Automatically, I flowed into my defense, intercepting her brutal attacks, her blade probing, searching, trying to force any advantage.  She found none.  I knew that I’d bettered my saberwork exponentially since I’d last seen her; she followed a quick strike with a savage cut that I barely had time to parry.  But before I could take advantage, her blade was moving again.

But if I had improved, so too had Gaetana.  Even as a Jar’Kai practitioner, I was pressed in matching her single bladed combat.  Still, I focused on my Water Forms, the ebb and flow as we circled each other, attacking, defending, always moving.  Even as she struck my shoulder, my pauldron absorbed the worst of the blow, the Charubah plate holding.  Better still, it had helped to create an opening.  Before she could recover, my shoto cut through the armor at her leg, piercing the black plate.  Using my momentum, I brought the blue blade of my main saber in a swift overhead cut connecting with her helmet.

Instantly, my lightsaber deactivated.

I could hear Gaetana’s laughter as I desperately tried to recover, my shoto at a disadvantage compared to her full-length blade.  Her helmet is made of cortosis?! I thought.  I also noticed that the cut on her leg didn’t impede her in the least.  Knowing that my main lightsaber would not work for several minutes, I tried to delay.

Before I could react, Gaetana’s fingers splayed apart, dropping her lightsaber and simultaneously projecting a torrent of Force Lightning at me.  Normally, I would be able to block it with my blade, but my shoto was too short to effectively intercept it.  Even as the lightning coursed through my face, Gaetana pulled with her other hand upon a large stack of compartmented storage boxes.  Before I could completely clear the falling metal containers, several pinned my legs against the floor, my shoto knocked from my hand and buried beneath some other cases.  As soon as I couldn’t move my legs, Gaetana’s full lightning barrage hit me, overwhelming my armor, surging into my body.  Between lightning strikes, I attempted to grab at the black dagger in my belt holster.  

It was empty.

I must have lost it when the compartments had fallen upon me.  Looking around, I spied it several meters away from me, but then another onslaught of lightning ripped through my body.  As my muscles seized, micro-tears forming, I could not focus upon anything except the pain.  Without stopping, Gaetana kept up her lightning assault even as my screams stopped, not from a loss of consciousness but from lack of breath.

Barely holding onto cognizance, my eyes lost focus as I attempted to follow Gaetana as she walked towards me.  Clearly, she’d learned a valuable lesson from our first encounter: she stopped short several meters.  “I have waited years for this.”

Slurring my speech, my jowl muscles locked forcing a rictus grin upon my face, I spoke, “You are the only one to blame, Gaetana.”  I hoped that she understood my words.  “But why now when you had escaped, ‘Mendax?’”  

“That damned earthquake nearly brought the hive-spire down upon me.  But it did block my route of escape.”  She paused briefly.  “But now since your Singer is no longer a concern, I need not fear reprisals from a superior opponent.”  I could feel her rage even now despite the mask, her voice quivered with anger.  “You were right: Gaetana died that day on Byss.  Lord Vader himself saved me…but not without…consequences.  And from that day forth, there was only Darth Mendax.”  She let loose a potent onslaught of Force Lightning, not once letting up while she spoke this time.  “And it is Darth Mendax that kills you now, Zearic.”  And to emphasize her point, her Lightning only intensified.  My existence was agony, pain without measure.  Curling into a fetal position, or as close as my armor would allow, I waited…hoped…solicited that death would take me…

Incredibly, I had not shut my eyes.  I saw Mendax suddenly fly bodily away, crashing into the far wall, stone and detritus falling around her as she collapsed to the ground, her helmet flying off.  Pivoting my head, deliberately, carefully, I saw D’Aylanna swiftly approaching, her lightsaber on her belt.  “Shakal…shh, husband, mine.  I am here.”  Her quiet words were softly emphasized by the gentle stroking of her hands upon my face.  But I saw her face grow serious again and she stood.  “So.  You are ‘Mendax.’  Gaetana.”  

Standing, Mendax towered over my wife.  Dusting herself off as she walked forward, Mendax stepped into the light.  The once beautiful face was terrible to behold: her skin was gray, what little hair she had was white and unkempt.  Her left eye was a mechanical replacement, not even cybernetic.  And her face belonged to that of a decrepit, old woman.  “Yes, D’Aylanna.  I am Mendax.  And your doom.”

Quicker than my eyes could see, she raised both of her hands, Force Lightning cascading from her fingers towards my wife, the blue electrical cloud lethally surging at D’Aylanna.  Unconcerned, my wife raised both of her hands, accumulating Gaetana’s—Mendax’s—Lightning and absorbing it with tutaminis.  Mendax’s face fell, her disbelieving look painted across her features.

“…How…?” Mendax’s mechanized voice was alarmed.

Igniting her saber, purple blade casting righteous light upon Mendax’s face, D’Aylanna attacked.  I had practiced with my wife for years, especially after Gaetana had first wounded me.  But never had I seen her this…savage.  Her purple blade struck so fast, it created a virtual haze obfuscating her person, always attacking, searching, and striking home.  As the minutes passed, D’Aylanna had scored several cuts against Mendax, most on her legs.  As before, they seemed negligible.

But even as D’Aylanna’s mastery was evident, so too was Mendax’s.  She countered my wife’s offensive with a series of brutal saber strikes, one cut almost decapitating D’Aylanna.  Thankfully, she parried in the last moment.  And almost simultaneously, both women flew back from one another, both having delivered a powerful Force Push upon the other.  D’Aylanna backflipped, gracefully landing on one knee while Mendax plowed through another stack of metal containers, skidding to a halt along the floor.  Even in pain, I could tell from the look on Mendax’s face that she was afraid, as scared as she had been of Karm.  She looked around the room, her eyes belonging to prey cornered by an apex predator.  But D’Aylanna did not relent; she was upon Mendax again, working her lightsaber blade, purple against orange.  It was truly a meeting of masters.

Both women locked their sabers together, Mendax’s much taller stature seemingly smaller despite my wife’s diminutive frame.  Suddenly, D’Aylanna launched upwards, head-butting Mendax, blood flowing from her broken nose.  Moreover, it stunned her.  With a scything swing, D’Aylanna separated Mendax’s right arm from her body.  And in the next orbit, she bisected her left leg just below the hip.  Before Mendax had even fallen, D’Aylanna’s Force Push sent her crashing against and through the far wall, causing the far room to cave in.  Even as D’Aylanna ran forward, she must have known that there was nothing that she could do.  As she stared, the far side of the hive-spire collapsed, weakened from the earthquake that Karm had caused earlier.  Turning, my wife ran towards me, never once looking back.

“My Shakal…” The love and concern in her voice warmed my heart as she collected me in her arms, healing flows from the Force embracing me.  “…Are you OK?”  Her voice cracked as a single tear flowed down from her dark eye, across her cheek and upon her blue lips.

I did not even attempt to rise, not that I could.  “I will be, Ereneda, I will be…”  Gently she rocked me until Jorya returned, our daughter both relieved and dismayed by what she saw had happened to me…

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Mellichae woke to the sound of screams, his ice-blue eyes quickly surveying his surroundings.  The rocky antechamber had strewn about it several large metal containers, two of them crushing the big man’s legs and effectively pinning him against the ground.  Knowing that he was hidden from view by one of the larger containers, he had the perfect vantage to see the big man writhing in pain as Force Lightning engulfed him, his Master pitiless in judgment.  His Master.  He couldn’t be sure…but something felt…different.  As if his mind were no longer…constrained.  Could it be…?  Could Lord Mendax’s tether have been…broken?  He knew that Jennira was dead; he no longer felt her within.  But his Master as well…?

A flash caught his eye, the Lightning from his Master reflecting off of a silver surface in the shadows.  Crawling over, it looked like…a lightsaber.  Wait…it was that Singer’s!  With as much facility as he could, he opened the weapon, specifically the housing for the crystal.  And there, he saw, was a true treasure: a golden kyber crystal unlike any he’d ever seen.  Greedily, he grabbed it when something else glinted within the shadows.  It was a shard of the Rur crystal, he was sure.  Momentarily, his breath stopped.  Singing ever so quietly, he saw the glow within the crystal shard as it propagated.  Mellichae hurriedly pocketed it, closing the lightsaber and placing it on the ground near where he’d found it.  Again, carefully looking around the corner of the container, he could see his Master in furious combat with a petite Hapan woman.  Incredibly, the woman was superior to his Master.  Not waiting to learn anymore, Mellichae carefully worked his way further in the hive-spire where his ship was docked.

Boarding on shaky legs, the large Zabrak hurriedly went through preflight and rocketed off the planet surface.  Achieving escape velocity, his ship entered into the Geonosian stratosphere and, finally, outer space.  

As the Sith Infiltrator made the jump to lightspeed in a flurry of pseudomotion, three things went through Mellichae’s mind.  First, he no longer was a thrall, not to Jennira and not to Mendax.  Next, he would get revenge upon those Gray Jedi.  And finally, he now had not one but two potent crystals beyond compare to do with as he chose.

Mellichae smiled, his memory lingering on killing…well, almost…that Jedi welp.  The next time that they met things would be much different.  And he thought of the name that the big man had said.  A name that both filled him with hatred as well as dread.  One that Mellichae would use in his personal litany to forever remind him of the price of his failures.  And the realization of his vengeance.

“Karmak.”
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« Reply #73 on: December 31, 2017, 07:04:18 PM »

*blink*

Wow....

*blink*  *blink*

Dutchman, that was AWESOME!  :-)  There's waaaaay to much to analyze...  But ... just wow.  Yeah.  Wow.

I think you may have made Karmack a little more potent than I ever intended him to be, but whoa baby...  And YOU LET THAT FILTHY RAT MELLICHAE GET AWAY WITH THE ANCIENT ONE!!!!!!! 
*sigh*

You know what this means, right?  Yeah, thought so.  Now Karmack is going to have to go get it back....

Actually, that might be fun...  LOL

In all seriousness, nicely written.  The action is tight, the conflicts are potent and for the most part decisive with just enough mystery involved to make for some fun.  I actually like very much the way Mellichae got lost in the shuffle there at the end, and his exploitation of that fact.  Freed of his enthrallment, his first reasoned response is to snatch up the best bits for himself and bug out.  Very ... sithy.  :-)  And he is a singer...

It will be interesting, I'm going to have to put a lot of thought into this one but the Ancient One doesn't just talk to anyone.  But Mellichae is a singer, so it may not be able to ignore him.   Assuming its the crystal itself that is controlling that aspect of its 'personality'... 

Oh yeah, lots of potential there.

I will be honest, when Ken went down I was shocked.  I kinda anticipated the loss of the arm but the killing stroke was not something I was mentally prepared for.  Karm's response is perfect: dig deep and do something above-and-beyond.  But he's going to pay a steep price for it, and I'm thinking that Ken and Jorya are both in for some PTSD after their own wounds.  Arnor is in rough shape as well...

The "epilogue" on this one will be interesting to write, but this chapter is a great finale and your execution is awesome!  I don't think I could have done this as well.  Your vision for the finale was far superior to anything I had come up with yet.  Thank you.  Smiley

Now we just have to finish...  :-)
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« Reply #74 on: January 01, 2018, 12:41:20 PM »

Thanks Karm!  I couldn't have done this without your trust with your characters. 

IMO Karm is the most powerful Singer, then when you include the Ancient One, Rur, ALL of the pontite...yeah, Karm is capable of A LOT   Wink. Glad that I could surprise you with what happened to Ken.  And like you said: he and Jorya are in for some rough times (poor kids...).

Another point I really wanted to illustrate was how badass D'Aylanna is.  I'd like to think I succeeded  Grin

Now I can't wait for the Epilogues!
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