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Author Topic: I Made a Short Horror Film - Need Opinions  (Read 1791 times)
DanFelix
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« on: November 24, 2017, 10:20:36 PM »

I made my first ever short film recently and thought I'd share it on here to get some opinions and show a bunch of like-minded people who love movies too..

This project was a collaboration with my friend who makes music, hence the 'score' that plays throughout the credits, in case you wondered why that was there.

If you like it please like and subscribe as I've got more projects lined up 🙂 and let me know your thoughts!

Thank you Smiley

https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=yxuQe6bo_U8
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Prowl 1701
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« Reply #1 on: November 25, 2017, 05:38:33 AM »

I made my first ever short film recently and thought I'd share it on here to get some opinions and show a bunch of like-minded people who love movies too..

This project was a collaboration with my friend who makes music, hence the 'score' that plays throughout the credits, in case you wondered why that was there.

If you like it please like and subscribe as I've got more projects lined up  and let me know your thoughts!

Thank you Smiley

hmmmmm.... video will not show up.
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« Reply #2 on: November 25, 2017, 07:20:47 AM »

Really? Does this link work? - https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=yxuQe6bo_U8

Also, thanks for the interest! Smiley
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« Reply #3 on: November 25, 2017, 07:25:51 AM »

Really? Does this link work? - https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=yxuQe6bo_U8

Also, thanks for the interest! Smiley

I was trying to embed the video for you and for some reason it wasn't posting it.  curious.
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« Reply #4 on: November 25, 2017, 05:13:13 PM »

Here:

<a href="http://youtube.com/watch?v=yxuQe6bo_U8" target="_blank" class="aeva_link bbc_link new_win">http://youtube.com/watch?v=yxuQe6bo_U8</a>
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« Reply #5 on: November 25, 2017, 08:49:14 PM »

Not bad at all, would be really good if you can't add a couple more minutes and add a little back story.

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« Reply #6 on: November 25, 2017, 09:20:17 PM »

Interesting. I like the composition of some of the shots. I think with some tighter editing (so you don't linger on certain shots too long) and ending on a killer jump scare you will have a great little short film there.

I know some people say that jump scares are over-used and ineffective. But I think when done well they can still be really effective, so long as the build up to them is done correctly.

Here are a couple of short films that I found massively inspirational and helpful

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EhAFyaObY6U
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WQvGmMVBYMw
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« Reply #7 on: November 25, 2017, 09:41:42 PM »

Good attempt. The best part of the video was the use of cold gray color and black shades, that was all that we saw, it felt morbid.
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