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wasd999
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« on: February 02, 2011, 01:42:32 PM »


Things are not what they seem and as a jedi, one knows this too well.
The battle ensuing at a street market regarding a dangerous renegade group
of storm troopers is ensuing, with little time to regroup and call for back up
the jedi entrusted to this task is taking cover from behind a toppled speeder.
"This is the best morning I've gotten into, do you not agree commander?"
facing him is a republic commander with a scared face, "I agree, but these guys
are mandalorians gone rogue. We can't play around kid." he jeered.
Forgiving the commander as the events dictate, he counted the white shells.
"I'm going out, cover my six!" he yelled and dashed from behind the speeder
to the blazing path of blaster fire. Taking up speed with the force in a blinding
fashion, he deflected a well timed blaster fire back at its origin hitting its mark.
Swinging a down sweep to cover and up again to cut a blaster rifle in half,
then pushing the trooper to a market stall ruining it. Sensing all eyes are on him,
he felt the panic inside them and the tingling sensation of excitement from it.

"No! Not this, I shouldn't enjoy cutting people down like grass..."

A blaster fire hit him in his left arm, burning the cloak and the armor he's wearing.
He faced the trooper moving his whole body to throw the lightsaber at him.
Spinning in midair it cut through the trooper clean, and then with a force pull
he maneuvered it to return to him while blocking fire from the other remaining
shells. The republic guards now with back up surrounded the area and closed it.
"Surrender now and we'll spare you!" the commander called out, he himself got
some wounds from the fight. The jedi moved near one of the troopers and
took his mask off with the force, and saw the old, tired eyes of the clone.
"You serve a dead empire, why struggle when you can live in peace?"
The clone fell his eyes on the ground, "our purpose is lost and have no where to
go, we are a wandering soul to this galaxy." Turning back to let the guards do
their job, as young as he is, Maygi Deech had a troubling thought on the lost of
purpose in life. Imagining living without the force, the jedi council itself, and
his friends. To him, it is too precious to lose like the storm trooper the essence
of what it's like to be alive with meaning in this realm.

Walking down the hall of the jedi temple, he enters the meditation room where
Master Yoda famously hanged out as Maygi would put it. Sitting himself on a
floating platform to seek out the force, and find peace through it. He closed his
eyes and let the darkness of his mind cover him, the force flowing through his
body like blood in his veins. He settled down and fell into to a deep meditation.
A jedi master arrived to meditate as well, seeing the young man he is deeply
moved. "Not a brash one, well trained by the master. Couldn't be any prouder
would he be seeing his former padawan doing such a thing." he thought within.
As he sat to position the young man was shaking terribly, to the point of falling
from his seat. Not for the master around his head would've hit the marble floor.
"Wake up young man! Wake I say!" still shaking on his arms did he felt a
disturbance in the force, "this can't be, a force vision?"

Fire all around him, death on his feet and the blacken sky that extends
far out as his eyes could see. Lightsabers clashing can be heard from afar, and
the song of death can be heard. He looks down to his feet to see he was standing
on molten rock, he saw hands trying to grasp his feet, burnt are they and smell.
He saw two figures moving towards him, he readied his lightsaber, but it was
not there. The two came nearer and faced him, revealed themselves before him
to see their faces, his face. "Don't be tempted, hold steadfast!" the other yelled,
"give in to your desires! The dark side of the force awaits!" red and flaring eyes
the hooded one said. "No!" Maygi retaliated as the other grabbed him with his
arm, it burnt and hurt him that he cried in pain, for the pain isn't superficial,
it burned right inside his core, his very being of existence. And saw nothing
but darkness that crept upon him, engulfing him completely...

Waking up at the infirmary, Maygi instinctively searched his arm for a scar, but there
was none. A jedi healer approached him "how do you feel?" she asked with a
tender voice, "I'm fine, but a glass of water would be great," she fainted a bow
and turned to leave. He looked around the infirmary with it's splendor and beauty
surrounding the facility. Although the place is barely occupied the healers always
wanted it this way, "it assures us that no one is hurt and everything is in order."
the healer replied to his question. He then went off to change to his garment and
went his way to report to the jedi council, as a messenger droid had forwarded
a message that he was required to do so.

"This vision of yours, it reveals your fate in the future." one of the masters replied.
"Not only that, but the fate of others as well. Have you not seen anyone else in
this vision?" "No one else sir," facing the master seated at the other side of the table.
"In that case, the sounds you heard are that of clashing lightsabers?" another asked,
"It could mean war, or his struggle of both the light and dark force," another interjected.
"This could mean anything to us unless the young man tells us his view of it." the elder
master replied seated on a repulsor chair. "I want to speak with the young one privately."

They walk along the gardens of the temple and spoke with each other, as other jedis
and their loved ones sit and enjoy the view of it. "I was given the same vision when I
doubted the light of the force guiding me," the old master said, "it was my doing that
made the force warn me of my fate." "One could easily get lost with what the force is
trying to envision to us, it could be anything that the physical mind is capable of
understanding." Maygi looked at the masters eyes and saw the deep sincerity it has.
"I did have this sensation of enjoying a fight, that sometimes I would have to shake the
feeling of gladness in ones death." his tone serious on the matter, "I didn't like it."
"It is good that you are aware, the force is strong in you." the master complimented.
"Thank you master," having a feeling of happiness to be praised by a master.

"But you must be vigilant, the force is unpredictable, I must then take you under my
supervision," the master using his force read on the young man, "your mind speaks,
would you want to be under my tutelage?" he asked Maygi with intense aura from the force.
With hearing the word "want," he knew the master is testing him. This could be the
the choice between the light and dark sides of the force tearing him apart. With internal
struggle he faced his darkest fears, closing his eyes to search that dark force lurking
inside him. It came forth to him, with its eyes glowing in the darkness of his mind.
He fought it, as the force within him he felt being overpowered, but he stood fast.
With the force guiding his hand he struck the dark being to nothingness, and there
was light. He opened his eyes, blinking from the brightness of the sun he looked at
the master, studying his connection with the force and smiled.

"I have chosen my path, I am ready."

« Last Edit: February 03, 2011, 09:34:29 AM by wasd999 » Logged


sjorsjo91
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« Reply #1 on: February 02, 2011, 03:51:31 PM »

I thank you and i really love this piece. If you will ever need my character to be part in anything you write i would gladly help you out. Truly amazing.
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wasd999
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« Reply #2 on: February 02, 2011, 10:41:48 PM »

I thank you and i really love this piece. If you will ever need my character to be part in anything you write i would gladly help you out. Truly amazing.

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Appreciated, but it's not done yet. Maygi still needs to learn more.  Grin

I want this fitting to your character, MORE POWAH! Wahaha... ops!  

I now officially state this is finished work for me.  Cry
Please comment on it for my further progress of the force.
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« Reply #3 on: February 03, 2011, 08:34:29 AM »

It is your story mate you can do with it whatever you want as long as Maygi can stay in the light.
I really appreciate this thanks a lot
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« Reply #4 on: February 03, 2011, 09:34:13 AM »

It is your story mate you can do with it whatever you want as long as Maygi can stay in the light.
I really appreciate this thanks a lot

And again, thank you for taking my offer. It was a good write up for me.
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« Reply #5 on: February 03, 2011, 11:08:57 AM »

i would like to turn this into a comic one day. so you can keep on writing buddy.
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