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Author Topic: My Girlfriend's a Jedi  (Read 2845 times)
wasd999
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« on: February 10, 2011, 02:25:43 AM »


"Sunika, I know you have one last mission for the jedi counsel, but at least tell me
you have thought that over?"

"Yes, and for the last time please, Jared, I'm too old for you."


Having a crush on your master, and confessing your love isn't really difficult, right?
Especially if she can read your thoughts, the flow of emmotions deep inside...

"Why can't I come with you? Am I not a master now that could offer escort?"

"Jared, I know you "like" me, but this is personal. I want this mission done by myself."

"How personal?"


"Very, now please resume to your post, if they found out you knew about this mission,
they may pull me out!"


I thought of that, but since I cared about her feelings of duty above all, I gave up...
Since she left that day, I thought of her that coulde've madden an ordinary Jawa with
a sophisticated droid in front of it. Yet, couldn't reach out to that droid because somethings
blocking it...

As I look out the city, I figured that being a jedi has its perks and dissabilities...
One, I couldn't let my emotions flood, which anyway is a good thing...
Two, can't let my imagination take over, you know, farking off...
Three, can't marry a jedi till the galaxies star expires, wow...

"Jared! Why so lonely are you sitting out here, surely you don't plan on jumping
off this balcony are you?"

"Are you kidding me? And miss my planned future? No, don't think so."

"Thats the spirit, maybe a glass of celdivan milk can cheer you up?"


Ah, that milk, its like liquor for jedis, we aren't allowed to drink any alcohol or
intoxicating drinks, but this...

Three days since I saw Sunika, I was stationed today at the comm link station
checking other jedi masters and their padawans in their missions...

Some times it gets real busy here that you need the force to pinpoint who's who
on the end of the comm link....

"This is master Sunika reporting."

Did I just heard Sunika?

"This is Sunika, over?"

"Ah, yes, yeah! I mean... this is the comm station, over."

Dung it! I messed up!

"Okay... I'm reporting to the counsel directly, get me a secure line, over."

More of a command, but a job is a job...
So there, I heard her again, last thing I knew she was investigating a ship that's
been blown apart by the republic...

I don't know any other details, but that should keep me updated with Sunika...

Ohhh... when will I ever find love in this galaxy...

How about you?

 






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« Reply #1 on: February 10, 2011, 03:51:10 AM »

Simple, short, but a good read. Almost like a prequel counterpart to the Letters Fic I've been doing. LOL Nice piece! Grin
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« Reply #2 on: February 10, 2011, 05:00:35 AM »

Read it again, its my final update to write up.  Grin

HAPPY VALENTINES!

*updated again!
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« Reply #3 on: February 10, 2011, 06:22:44 PM »

Nice ending! I like it. It's a small and self contained story, that could be expanded on, but tells you all you need to know as it is. Makes you think too! Smiley Good work!
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« Reply #4 on: February 10, 2011, 11:43:09 PM »

All I can say is, thanks!  Cheesy
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« Reply #5 on: February 11, 2011, 12:16:27 AM »

You're welcome! Grin
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