Darth Rifter
Knight Commander
Force Alignment: -200
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Darth Rifter and Jedi Keldor...Darn it I forgot.
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« on: May 08, 2012, 03:50:29 AM » |
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These are the first chapter and a half of my Rifter book, and I need some feed back, plus a sneak peek to you all so you know Kerlapon's history.
Prologue: Darth Rifter Now you may be asking yourself who Darth Rifter was. Many people before you have. Few people were actually able to get to really know Rifter, and received the privilege to call him a friend. Everyone else was killed. Rifter didn’t want this life to begin with, it was forced upon him, you could say. Several events in the past, before he was born, plus a few in his childhood turned him into the man he is today. Rifter had a tough training, and suffered so much. Rifter had many attempts on his life, and had many hard choices to make. His actions almost caused the deaths of almost a million people. Normally Sith do not care about meaningless deaths, but that did not sway Rifter from saving them, it was his destiny after all, what he was born to do. He went through three masters before he became a full-fledged Sith. His most notable master was the Sith emperor, Darth Yega. Rifter grew and expanded with Yega, and his last master, Darth Cronfios. All in all Rifter’s life was full of struggle and hardships. Though, to better understand Rifter, one must look back at his home planet’s history, about two hundred years before Rifter’s birth, to the time of The Twins.
Chapter 1: 200 Years Before
A time of expansion and peace, yet nefarious elements in the Sith Empire were poised to strike at the heart of the Republic; a tactic that would launch the entire galaxy into war. The Galaxy was in serious danger of a war, and there was one such system that was about to have a massive war themselves. This system was known as the Erlapon system. It contained four planets, Kerlapon, Lerlapon, Gerlapon, and Nerlapon. Out of these four planets, Kerlapon was the only one where people lived. It had a population of about seven hundred thousand people. Out of all those people, five hundred and two were Force sensitive. They had roughly three hundred Sith, and two hundred Jedi. Though, there were two Force sensitive humans that were special. You see, these two boys were brothers, identical twin brothers. Their names were Argian and Kortunan. Argian was a powerful Sith Lord, while Kortunan was a Jedi master. Each one had a very special ability. Argian could absorb one’s Force powers, form it into a sphere of energy, and then thrust it back into their victim’s chest. The energy was so intense, that it burned through their chest, causing them to burn from the inside out, killing them slowly and painfully, such was the way of the Sith. Kortunan could block one’s Force powers from them, causing them to become helpless, while his allies attack. Argian and Kortunan where bitter rivals, they always argued. They hated each other so much, just because one served the “wrong” side of the Force. They had fought many times, but where never able to kill one another. Since they were twins, they knew each other’s own moves. One day the brothers were having a meeting with each other, trying to decide who gets which planet for an academy, since Kerlapon was running out of room for the growing amount of Force users. “Listen brother,” said Argian, anger running rampant through his voice, “The Sith deserve Nerlapon, it has the best resources for us. Plus, we are stronger, and aren’t hindered by the Great Lie you Jedi live by.” “Oh Argian, how foolish you sound,” said Kortunan. “We do not live a great lie. We follow the Force as you do, but we actually listen to what it says, instead of assuming it is telling us to kill everything. “The Jedi are right and just, and as so, we deserve the better planet. We shall have Nerlapon, and you can have Gerlapon.” “Are you serious? I can’t believe that. Accusing us of living a lie, and then suggesting we take that back water planet. I cannot believe we are related. Since there is no way we will ever agree on this, then there is only one thing to do.” Argian forced his lightsaber to him, activating it while in mid-air. His blade was black with a harsh red glow, the likes one has never seen before. “We will have a great Sith-Jedi war. That will decide who gets what planet. If you disagree, then I will still have all my Sith go out and kill every last Jedi. Either way, we are getting Nerlapon for ourselves.” Kortunan looked at his brother before him, how far he had fallen into the dark side. “Brother, it saddens me to see you like this,” Kortunan spoke with a tear in his eye. “Do you not remember our childhood, we got along so well, and then you fell into the dark side, and I lost the brother I once loved. Now here you are, with your lightsaber aglow, threatening to kill anyone, just to get a planet. I’m sorry I cannot stand for this, if it is a war you want, it is a war you will get.” With that Kortunan drew out his saber, black with a yellow glow. They stared into each other’s eyes for what seemed like an eternity. Finally Argian broke the silence. “The brother you love is gone for good. Now if you will excuse me, I have a battle to prepare for.” With that, Argian sheathed his saber and left the room. Kortunan just sat down and started meditating, preparing for what was about to come. Over the next few weeks, both sides were preparing for what possibly could be the biggest war yet. On the Jedi side, they were checking all of their ships, making sure that they worked just fine, in case of space combat. They also gave each and every blaster and lightsaber a full examination, making sure they were in perfect working order. The Sith themselves were preparing as well. Every single Sith warrior was required to fight for the dark side of the Force. Argian made sure everyone was prepared by putting them through rigorous and tough training. Both sides wanted to make sure that they would win the war, and were ready to die for the good of the Galaxy. A few days before the start of the war the two brothers met again, due to the persistence of Kortunan. “Listen Argian, I will give you one last chance to end this,” said Kortunan. “Please just stop this foolishness and just quit. Give the Jedi Nerlapon, you can have Gerlapon, it may not be the best, but it is still nice. You can prevent many useless deaths by just coming to your senses and doing what is right for the Galaxy.” “Ha-ha,” chuckled Argian cruelly. “It is so sad that you would truly believe that I would just give up so easily. I mean we have known each other for all our lives, and I know you have never seen me give up on anything. Remember that instance of Lerlapon, I wouldn’t stop until those silly aliens were dead, and how great it was to see their bodies, cut up into many pieces. Now every species in Outer Rim knows not to trespass on Lerlapon. “So, no brother, I will not give you Nerlapon, the Force wills me to have it, and I must obey what the Force wills me to do. So, goodbye, I will see you on the battle-fields in southern Kerla district next Tuesday.” With that Argian left the council room, going off to his fortress to put the finishing touches on his plans for the war. Kortunan left the council room as well, heading for his base, to make sure everyone was ready for what was about to happen. * * * The day of the war came. Both armies lined up on the battle lines, troopers in front and Force users in the back. The two brothers paced back and forth on the battle line. Both of their lightsabers ignited ready for the coming action. Suddenly, both brothers stopped in the exact same spot. They stared into each other’s eyes for what seemed like an eternity. Argian quickly turned around and did a Force jump into a nearby hovercraft. Kortunan did the same thing and sheathed his saber. Both of them nodded, and gave the same signal. With that, the war started, and shots were fired. Immediately both sides lost a few men. At the beginning of the war there were a thousand men, five hundred on each side. The brothers flew to a safe distant to watch the battle unfold. The battle was not short, and soon the sides disbanded, expanding all over the planet. The war raged rampantly and soon it was having its toll on the planet. The war lasted for two years straight. It started off hot, but within a few days, many Jedi and Sith went into hiding. Over these two years Kerlapon suffered much damage. Before the war started it was a fruitful planet. Many great species of plant grew there, and the vegetation was plentiful. There were also many species of animals, most edible. Unfortunately, over the course of the war, the animals were all killed, and the soil turned infertile, killing all plant life. The current leader of Kerlapon, Gortank I, was sick and tired of the war and finally put an end to it. He ordered anyone who sees a Jedi or Sith to capture them and turn them over. Eventually enough Force users were captured that the war ended. The brothers couldn’t believe that the Jedi and Sith gave up so easily. There were only fifty Jedi and fifty Sith left, hidden in the brother’s bases. “Men,” said Argian, “This is ridiculous. How could you allow your brethren to be captured so easily? You know what the emperor did with those men? He executed them. Now we are probably severely outnumbered to the Jedi. Listen lay low; I am going to the emperor and personally will get this matter taken care of.” Argian angrily left the base’s meeting room, his eyes blazing red with fury. He hopped on his speeder and headed for the emperor’s palace. On his way, Argian suddenly lost all power to his speeder. He quickly found a nearby village, and went to see if they had any power cells. He found one of the villagers outside, destroying the remains of his ravaged garden. He recognized Argian as the commander of the Sith and remembered the big bounty he had on his head. “Excuse me,” said Argian, “But could you take me to a vendor of speeder parts? I am afraid mine is out of power and needs a new power cell.” “Sure, I sell speeder parts,” said the villager. “Just please follow me into my back room.” Argian gave the villager a nod and followed him into the back room. “Alright, now where are the speeder power cells, sir?” “I’m sorry, Mr. Sith, but this is where I claim my bounty.” With that the villager quickly pulled out a stun blaster and shot Argian directly in the chest. Argian quickly fell to the ground and his body went limp and he fell unconscious. Meanwhile, Kortunan was having problems of his own. He too was having a meeting with his fifty remain Jedi knights. “Well boys,” said Kortunan, “We aren’t doing well on the battlefield. I am afraid you are it. Though, what the emperor did was just inhumane. We lost so many good men because of him. I know that many of you are upset and don’t want to fight anymore. “I am sure that now my brother will give us Nerlapon, and if not, then I will settle for Gerlapon.” With this statement the crowd started to get unsettled, obviously upset and angry at Kortunan’s decision to give up what they spent two years fighting for. “Now, now listen here my Jedi brothers.” Kortunan said reassuringly. “I thought about this long and hard, and to prevent any more unnecessary deaths we have to let the Sith win, this time. I went into this war thinking we would lose only a few men, but now we have lost almost all of them and the terms have changed. “Now if you excuse me I am going to stop by the emperor to give him a piece of my mind before I go see my brother about this war.” With all that said Kortunan took a deep breath and left the council room. Kortunan quickly mounted his speeder and headed straight for the emperor’s palace, unaware of the trap that was set for him. About half an hour later, Kortunan arrived at the place. He was greeted at the gate by the emperor’s guards. “Sir please come with us, the emperor would like to have a word with you,” said the armed guard. Kortunan followed wondering what the emperor had to say to him. After a few hundred feet in, the guards turned to him, and did a sweeping leg kick while stunning him, knocking him unconscious as well. The guards dragged the Jedi’s limp body and tossed him into the prison hold, right next to his brother. Before they locked the door, they stripped the Jedi of all his weapons, including his own saber, bound him in rope, and locked the door. Kortunan woke up, and allowed his eyes to adjust to his surroundings. He finally was able to observe the dreary prison cell he was in. He also noticed he was bound, so he couldn’t move. Finally Kortunan spotted his brother, tied up as well. “Well Argian, I see they got you too, huh?” said Kortunan with a fake smile. “Yeah, I got jumped by a villager after stopping for some power cells,” Argian replied reluctantly. “Yeah, well you’re lucky, I walked right into my trap.” “Well Kortunan, what do we do now? We are trapped in here, and most likely will be executed.” “The only thing we can do, meditate. I know we will die, but we should try to become one with the force.” “You’re right, it was good knowing you brother, and I will see you in the afterlife.” Both brothers slipped into a state of deep meditation. They didn’t even notice it when the guards took them out of the prison cells. The brothers finally slipped out of meditation, and took in their surroundings. They noticed they were outside, and there was a huge cheering crowd around them. They looked up from the tables they were tied to and saw the emperor in front of a podium. “My fair citizens of Kerlapon, I welcome you. I have captured the two responsible for the destruction of our planet. Now you all get to see what happens when you try to have a war. Also, to prevent this from ever happening again, I am declaring a new law, effective immediately. Any child who is born with Force powers shall have them quickly and permanently severed, as to prevent this from ever happening again. “Now, do you two have any last words for us, before we behead you with your own lightsabers?” Both Kortunan and Argian spoke their last statement in unison, “You Kerlapon, have made a mistake. To pay for what you are about to do, we set a prophecy in action. One day, there will be another pair of identical twin boys born. Once they are born, one of them has but twenty years to set this planet right, or else, all will be destroyed.” Those were the last words the brothers said, for the emperor gave the signal, and the executioners ignited the brother’s respective lightsabers and swiftly cut off their heads. The emperor gave out a cheer as the crowd did the same. “Long live Kerlapon, never again shall we have to endure this kind of tragedy,” shouted the emperor, with the crowd chanting in the background.
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