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LordDesann
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« on: February 17, 2011, 05:51:13 AM »

«The Dark Side was given to you.....» he said. I bowed down to him, I closed my eyes, as the only thing I ever wanted was love. He ignited his lightsaber, I felt the blade close to me. Even though my armor was thick, I could smell the burning scent of a lightsaber. «My son,he said, I rescued you from the Jedi, I saved you from countless dangers during your childhood.» he continued.

My heart was beating, could he really say he loves me?? «I have done you a favor, do not make me regret saving your wretched life.» he said with an angry tone as he deactivated his lightsaber. «Rise» he yelled.
Once more, my father used me as only his personnal slave, I could sense how powerful he was, yet I may be in his blood line, but I feel so weak. I sensed only deception. I rised slowly, and suddenly he struck me with a vibroblade and I quickly dodged but yet the blade pierced some of my skin, blood dripped past my armor.

«you cant even focus, no longer, may you be of use to me.» As he pushed me away as I moaned watching the blood dripping out of my flesh, hasn't there been enough bloodshed?? As I watched my father walk away, I reached for my lightsaber, as I did so, my father stopped walking and paused.

«You dare attack your own master??» he yelled with an angry tone. Suddenly he lifted me with the force, with only a thought of doing so, my father could achieve a great power. He threw me across the room, wall-to-wall. As I hit the wall, my armor pierced my skin in several areas of my body, I moaned in agony, I never understood why this armor was given to me. Then suddenly, he lets go of his grip and releases me, he approaches me and puts his foot on my helmet.

«I should have left you on Coruscant» he said softly. As he did so, he walked away once more. Leaving me unloved and treated me like a failed experiment................
« Last Edit: February 17, 2011, 09:22:49 AM by LordDesann » Logged

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« Reply #1 on: February 17, 2011, 07:01:05 AM »

This story would develop even more as it goes on.
Would like to read more of it!
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LordDesann
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« Reply #2 on: February 17, 2011, 09:23:35 AM »

Perhaps you would be interested in continuing the story wasd999??
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LordDesann
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« Reply #3 on: February 17, 2011, 09:47:50 AM »


(This is taken place about 17 years after the sacking of Coruscant, in other words the TOR trailer where the Jedi Temple is invaded)




I lie down into my quarters, nothing seems to be happening, for days and nights I hear voices whispering into my head, I can't get them out of my mind. The door opens, the medical droid, just what I needed.

«My apologies master for the delays,» says the droid, « I was busy taking care of an unfortunate accident that your father has made.» continues the droid.

The droid had quite the personality, My father never allowed me to have friends, to socialise, my only purpose seems to be my father's personnal slave, I've traveled the galaxy, ever since the sacking of the Jedi Temple, I've hunted anyone that opposes my father. And this droid has been my companion, yet sometimes i feel that he is more than just a plain old medical droid.

« Thats fine, Just tell me what the damage is this time XE-9» I moaned.

The droid grabs some type of claw, it was used for removing my armor, the painful flesh tearing armor that has been like my own clothing for years. I dislike it. One by one, the armor fell apart, I suddenly feel like I was being deprived of my own identity, even though I don't really know what my idendity is.

XE-9 finished the examination. «You've lost at least a third of your blood, i can't get estimates master, i'm sorry.» he said upsettingly.

I sighed and layed down on my bed, XE-9 pressed a few buttons on the door panel and then a blood transfusion droid arrived in seconds. XT-13 was his name. Frankly he does not speak, he only hurts. The sharp needle was the only medicine he can give me, unlike XE-9, he didn't give me comfort. XT-13 can only whistle in different picthes that only which droids can understand.

XT-13 injected a needle on my left shouler, the transfusion began immediatly. I closed my eyes and tried not to think of the pain, but time and time again, the voices seems to be there day and night in my head.

«You look troubled master.» said XE-9. I opened my eyes, the voices left my head, I just couldn't understand why.

« Why do you ask?» I said softly. XE-9 didn't answer at first.

«I saw what happened in the interrogation room master, with your father?» he said.

As he said that, my heart started to beat faster, the only thought of the abuse that my father did was just uncontrollable, I closed my eyes tight, I just wanted everything to go away. I became angry, XE-9 kept on mumbling something but i couldn't quite understand, then the room started shaking............then the silence....
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« Reply #4 on: February 17, 2011, 06:01:51 PM »

Perhaps you would be interested in continuing the story wasd999??

I'm sorry, I chickened out of the challenge!  Grin

I would love to, but in my personal experience, I won't take someones
work and ruin it with my adulteration.

Its vulgar to myself.

How could I ruin a work of art? It is someones world, that I may have the
privileged to manipulate, but I choose not to.

It is your work my friend, it is your pride, your destiny.
 
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« Reply #5 on: February 21, 2011, 05:06:07 AM »

Perhaps you would be interested in continuing the story wasd999??

I'm sorry, I chickened out of the challenge!  Grin

I would love to, but in my personal experience, I won't take someones
work and ruin it with my adulteration.

Its vulgar to myself.

How could I ruin a work of art? It is someones world, that I may have the
privileged to manipulate, but I choose not to.

It is your work my friend, it is your pride, your destiny.
 

LOL!!
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« Reply #6 on: February 23, 2011, 05:38:59 AM »

Here is a continuation...


.........


The silence ended, it was only a matter of time that I woke up, I seemed to have fainted, I wasn't sure. I wake up and see my room completely destroyed, the desk collasped, the lights broke. And I spotted XT-13 destroyed and I a corner of the room just sitting there like a piece of junk. Then I started to feel a heavy feeling on my shoulders, I then noticed bandages covering my wounds and covering up the blood that leaked during my blood transfusion.

«Oh my! Oh my!» Said XE-9 after reactivating himself. I couldn't see him at first, the room was a mess, too much junk was laying around to spot anything else beside XT-13 rusty corpse in the corner.

« Um....where are you exactly??» I said as I looked around. I noticed a large piece of the roofing was near the entrance, it started moving,  It was definetely XE-9.

« May I have some assistance master??» politely asked XE-9 as he tries to shake all the debri above him, I gently grabbed the debris with the force and tossed it away to the other side of room........or near XT-13, that must hurt.

XE-9 got up and wiped off the dust that covered him. «I'm glad to see that the transfusion was done before I lost complete control of my mind. » I said. As I did so, XE-9 noticed the bandages.

« I can see that master, but your armor has large spots of blood, you should maybe clean it up. » He said.

I didn't respond, my father's philosophy was that blood intimidates anyone, and he always refused upon my request to clean up or repair my armor.

« Intimidation is shown by blood. » he would always say. I got up and cleared the rest of the debris with my bare hands, i grabbed a large pile of the collasped roof, as I hold the large pieces I turned to the main window, which surprisingly survived the repulse of anger that I had, I closed my eyes and pictured my father, I could see the illusion, his face, his grin, and his overconfidence, I threw the large pieces with all my anger, I screamed with hatred and the window collasped upon impact..............I kept on thinking of all the teachings and wise words he has told me.......

« The Dark Side of the Force has been given to you by me, It has saved you, It is a gift that many see as an abomination, If only they knew the true ways of the Sith.»

If so, why have I been not like him?? I've always questionned my father and his actions, why the armor?? why the pain? why the suffering and utter abuse?? discipline? I do not know anymore.......

XE-9 buts his hand on my shoulder,

« Master, your father wishes to see you. » he said quietly. I grabbed his hand and push it away, denying any affection, like always....like forever...
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