Darth Arkanus,
you continue to impress. your Shii-Cho looks very polished now. I gave you points for that and for the cheesy disco SWarsy music with Makashi, that'll teach youtube!
I only have once concern for you as for your free form, which may come up in dueling. You seem to be getting your self into a pattern of sorts on certain moves. You seem to thrust, then a full sweeping attack on area 2. You also seem to enjoy sweeping the legs while stepping back. I noticed that both on your 7-27 video and your 7-30 video. Just something to be aware of, as it's something we all need to focus on regardless of experience. But that's just it

watching those videos, and coming from someone who knows little within lightsabers but can see swordsmanship, you're really coming along well and starting to really only need to work on things we always need to work on. Your cuts, the sweeps, the control and the footwork are all coming along very nicely. For advice on the particulars I'd follow the TPLA Masters and I'm not going to give you any because it's anything but my place to say.
awesome job, love watching your progress. the effort you're putting in is showing in spades from my seat anyway. Keep up the good work, wicked good showing!
