Looks good to me. =] I don't have a regular vest or those type of khakies, just straight khakies. I would probably do more of a Grey Jedi look though, I have a black hoodie I can use, black pants, black shoes, not that tall though, and that grey-ish t-shirt I always wear. What saber is that though? Looks like an Azure of some type.
Its an Azure Reaper with a LOT of mods. Different pommel and emitter and no shroud. I would post pics but I'm still waiting for a replacement pommel to get back in stock. They sent me a replacement version of the guardian pommel instead of the MHS version, so its a wider than the hilt.
I'm also technically supposed to be a Grey Jedi, but I thought making a completely grey outfit would be too bland. So I figured as long as I keep the ideals of the Grey Jedi, it doesn't matter what I look like.
If anything my dog tags at least have part of the Grey Jedi code written on it: "There is no Dark Side, nor Light Side. There is only The Force."