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« Reply #180 on: March 05, 2018, 11:39:40 PM »

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Chapter 43
Kiraea
Jedi bitch….her head hurt but she quickly recovered.  

She was pressed into the main intersection of the air conditioning system of the Coruscant Grand Opera, her skills in infiltration and mind control had been put to the test already tonight…but now she needed to move quickly the Aethan raised as a Jedi that Valens put so much store in, Milaea, was onto her.  

She sent a quiet thin line of warning to the others, Adaea and Maeson were overseeing the activation of the pawns whilst Selaena and Lyaea had finished stoking the riots - handing out what few thermal detonators they had time to purchase to the thankful denizens of the under levels- and were preparing the extraction.  

They had spent the last few days criss-crossing Coruscant planting the seeds of control in people’s minds, priming them for a tick of the clock when their most base desires would be magnified and unleashed, it was so easy to push non-Aethan minds from annoyance and frustration into indiscriminate slaughter, they had done nothing more than take away their ridiculous moral restraint and suggested a time, place and appropriate instruments with which to enact their innate violence….but now Milaea was onto them.

She let her annoyance at being caught open the gates to her burning hatred, in the cramped confines she let the blue flames flicker to life and with the precision she had learned cracking safes and security systems she directed the streams down the memorized network of air ducts straight into the oblivious audience of some 5000 of Coruscant’s richest and gaudiest.

This was the third part of her plan…Jarys and Valens had set the under levels alight, the others had set the mid to high tiers alight…now she would hit at the true Elite…the Senate might not care for the riots…but they would hammer the politically Jedi once their own rich friends were in the line of fire…speaking of…

Even here deep in the plant rooms she started to hear the screams, and feel the life’s winking out.  She kept the blue glowing flow going a moment longer…but she couldn’t go all the way as she had planned with Milaea on to her.  She used her aetherically enhanced dexterity to slide back to the maintenance hatch and out.  

She raced through the plant halls toward her hover car, an emergency exit burst open behind her, aliens of all kinds in expensive charred clothes were trying to bat out the blue flames, to corridors smoke alarms activated and water and suppressants sprayed down…

They had no clue that aetheric fire was immune to such things…it was powered by hate, anger, fear…all the things she had felt when her people were massacred and enslaved before her…not simple chemistry.  

They flailed and tumbled into the shallow pools of water, but it did no good, the smoke kept rising and the flesh kept charring.

Another door opened before her and she pushed through the gaggle of screaming crying beasts, she could sense her flyer and telekinetically started the engines up.  

Bursting through the emergency exit she leapt straight into the open hatch, punching the accelerator as soon as she landed.  She could not fail her people.  So far the distraction was working, the Jedi were scattered across the planet trying to deal with their pawns…but…

She turned hard to the right…she was here!

Milaea was chasing her, she noted the white and red Corusci speeder in her rear view monitor.  This was unexpected…nonetheless Valens and Jarys still had other tasks in the Temple, if it were left to Kiraea to deal with Milaea so be it.  Yes she was strong, but surely she was no Guardian.

She set the ship on auto pilot headed straight for the Works where she had set the ground work for her plan days before, she was to infiltrate and disable the safeties on several of the geothermal power generators, igniting the industrial sector in blaze of destruction as the lava spewed out, the final crisis to send the Jedi in a spin.  But if she could take Milaea here that wouldn’t be necessary – just fireworks to celebrate their reunion.

Unfortunately she could feel her younger sister’s deadly intent…this called for some tough love. She slipped out of her seat and opened the side door ignoring the warning light, summoning a rifle Selaena had gifted her.  Peeking out against the wind she opened fire.  

The shots sped back, ominous red energy surrounding black cores, Milaeas speeder accelerated toward them, the bolts deflected off to the side without much effort.  Kiraea suspected as much.  She read the patterns of traffic and started grabbing at the hover cars beside the Corusci and bashed them with the aether into her path.  Again she expertly pivoted out of the way mere seconds before being hit.  She was so proud of Milaea!  

As she had to take her alive…that put Kiraea at a significant disadvantage….but if Milaea couldn’t take a beating what good was she.

She leapt onto the back of the speeder and steadied herself with the aether. “Now let’s see how much of a Jedi you are”…She unleashed.

Searing arm sized chunks of concentrated aetheric fire jetted from her palms, not at Milaea, but at buildings and speeders all about.  Explosions rocked the Corusci back and forth, the traffic lines began to crumple as the auto pilots on most cars struggled to deal with the surge in hazards.  Windows shattered and beings flew from the towers to escape the hate filled flames.  

Yet Milaea just kept at her, drawing ever nearer, seemingly ignoring the deaths of so called innocents, she sent another bolt into a large carrier filled with petrified Aqualish, it blew apart in the centre raining little people into the depths.  

A Jedi ought to help these aliens as Kiraea understood it…or at least do more than this to stop her.  

“Come On!” she shouted into the howling air, blasting a balcony party of at least 30 beings into superheated oblivion.  

As if in answer the Corusci door opened and a lithe form flipped to the top of the speeder, a mane of golden red hair contrasting with the amethyst sabres glow.  It was a stunning sight that almost distracted Kiraea from the shikkars Milaea had quietly sent her way.  

With a snide smirk she crushed the glass into glistening green fragments as her speeder shuddered, Milaea was both using the aether to slow Kiraea’s speeder and hasten her own.  They were barely 6 metres apart now still headed to the works.  Good let her waste her concentration matching the machines speeds.

“Nice try, but I’ve seen those trinkets before,” Kiraea yelled across the rushing winds,

“I know what you’re planning, but why?”  She yelled back,

Kiraea smiled, “Haven’t you ever just wanted to see a world burn?”  she fired three blasts at the girl,

The first exploded against her sabre, the others she deflected with the aether, it was enough distraction for Kiraea to fire more shots with her hold out pistols that she floated by her side.  As the fiery explosions died down the blasters were suddenly burst apart by their own defected bolts.

“Nice Try,” Milaea called, “But I’ve seen those tricks before,”

Smart mouthed little tralk – Kiraea liked her

She let her annoyance power her, grasping two nearby hover cars and sending them flying at her while launching another wave of flames.  The girl elegantly dealt with the attacks, a neat deflection, and then diversion of one car back at Kiraea, she crumpled it with her mind cutting its velocity and sending it plummeting a screaming Bith inside.

“Not very Jedi like,”  She called,

Milaea shrugged then surged forward, a massive aetheric blast pushed at Kiraea almost knocking her off, but it was enough distraction to allow Milaea to leap the gap and land before her, amethyst bade sweeping for her legs.  She leapt quickly and moved to pull her Beskar short sword from her thigh sheath – but Milaea pinned it in place in the air and their velocity sent them straight past it.

Fine the hard way.  She turned her anger into a shield of Lighting around her as she dodged the girls precise arcs and battering pushes.  In return she shot precise arcs of lighting and blasts of flame, grasping at what nearby cars she could flinging them at the girl.   She was trying to press on her mind as well, Submit, surrender, retreat….it was strong but not especially subtle.  

More and more Kiraea was on the defensive, she was fast but this girl was faster and had a far deadlier weapon, her lightning was just curving over the girl not scorching, and every hover car she tossed her way the girl leapt aside or pivoted to avoid, indifferent to the fact they ended up smashing into the sides of the buildings.  In their wake blue and yellow fire rose from the cratered and smashed sides of skyscrapers.

The buildings were getting lower and the traffic sparser as they approached the Works, and Kiraea getting ever closer to being sliced to pieces.
She needed to get off this thing.  Ducking beneath a high slash then countering a hard hitting knee with her forearm she surged a blast of lightning into the speeder.  

Small explosions rocked its direction as the electronics exploded, the girl became wrong footed Kiraea took advantage with a rapid fist to her chest as the speeder began to descend.  She made a wide arc with the sabre to buy herself space but another jolt let Kiraea drive her elbow into the girls shoulder with a sickening pop.  

The aether burst with fury an overwhelming blast flung her off into the empty skies.
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Milaea
She landed heavily on an old industrial roof cluttered with catwalks, ventilation ducts and solar collectors that ranged from 50 to 300 years old by the looks of them.  

The speeder had smashed down onto a building across a narrow but very deep gap, sparks and smoke issued from the crater.  

She could sense the other woman somewhere…largely unharmed, but tiring.

She took the brief respite to flood the force into her as she popped her shoulder back in…no longer restrained by her own fear she found she could heal almost any minor injury like that completely in moments…perhaps even major ones, though she had no desire to find out.

She scanned the area with the force and her senses….the wanton destruction this woman…and whoever was helping her…were willing to inflict was terrifying…what could make someone so…indifferent to the suffering of others…

But then she recalled what had happened with the Gray…what had happened on a dozen missions…it wasn’t so hard to imagine - slipping unthinkingly into that state of mind…that saw other beings a mere obstacles to your goals…even for a Jedi that is what ended up happening…these smugglers or pirates were opposing the Republic and it was just easier to kill them than try and rehabilitate, to address the complex social, cultural and economic issues that had led to this situation.  

But that was a topic to investigate another time…
She rolled to avoid the brutally charged knee of the woman as it smashed a lighting accented crater into the concrete beside her.  

Rising into mid guard she deflected two more of the fiery bolts this woman was expert in.  She had such a raging aura about her…so familiar…she leapt forward with lightning clad fists…as she ducked the blows she smelt her…she could viscerally smell her…she hadn’t noticed with the wind racing any traces of pheromones away on the speeder.

She turned into a low cut, she didn’t want to hurt the woman if she could avoid it, but she had to stop her.  That smell…familiar...it activated something in her…memories…of her past life, so like…Valens…and the Sith of Cygrat…of course she was one of them…they were all of her People.  She was embarrassed it had taken her this long to figure it out…No she had known she just hadn’t wanted to admit it.

Her opponents advantage was the variety of techniques she used, Milaea could sense she was weaker in every other measure as she dodged another ream of fire.  The Jedi always avoided methods like this…it led to the darkside…yet how could a technique in and of itself be evil…Sith and Jedi both used lightsabres…

She twisted away from another lighting sheathed kick and returned a quick heel strike to the back of the woman’s balancing leg.  

She gazed at her own amethyst blade…she didn’t need this...this wasn’t the way to fight…someone who smelled as she did…it was unfair to fight one of her People like that.  

That part of her that was still a Jedi warned her not to, but she switched the blade off.   That same part screamed as she copied the woman’s technique and let her raw power form in electrical blue, then purple arcs across her body.  

For the first time she had intentionally conjured force lighting.

The woman staggered a little but a surge of the force soon restore her muscles.  The expression on her smooth face was almost…respectful, admiring.  

“You are one of us after all,” her voice was soft and genuine affection suffused the force.  She spread her arms as if to hug her, “We can spar later Milaea, come here sister!”  

Milaea kept her fists in a high guard, her fighting stance firm as she became accustomed to the flicker of energy about her.  Her words were…honest…but to join her…to stake her claim to her cause…after what this woman had intended to do….she couldn’t.

“I don’t want to join you…but I don’t want to fight you,”  

She shook her head, “You’re confused my love, I understand Valens told us you were brought up by the Jedi…but you know why that had to happen…” her eyes flashed with burning rage,

“Because they destroyed your family and destroyed our home, we had to compromise to protect you, now you can stand on your own, come back home, help us rebuild,”

“You can’t hold the Jedi, or the people or Coruscant responsible for what happened, I’m not coming with you…but knowing that won’t stop you will it,”

She laughed, “No…no it won’t,”  

She lunged forward, her fist smashed into Milaea’s forearm block with a crackling brutal impact that shook her whole body.  She responded in kind with a low kick to her side.  The air cracked and sparked with their shields, the arcs danced in time with their fists, feet and bodies as they clashed.  

Blow by blow they wore each other down, each hit charged with enough force energy to break a ferrocrete pillar…yet they each withstood the hits, their inhuman genes and unnatural force energies allowed them to take and deal dozens of blows any one of which would kill a wookie outright.

She began trying all kinds of tricks, force illusions, perceptual distortions, mental images of Sofa or Soryu being tortured, force synthesized sounds behind her…everyone allowed her to notch another blow on Milaea…but only ever once, no trick or combination worked twice.  

This was not a woman used to losing, she could sense the frustration building, and see it visibly as she fired off more and more streams of force fire.  

Her skin was raw and bruised, her body aching from the fight, yet she knew as much as she was wearing out, her opponent was twice that.  The fight shifted when she landed a blow to the woman’s ribs, she stumbled back instead of countering as she had been.  She caught the bleated kick back, twisted it in her arm and flung her into a spin, she landed heavily but was physically swaying.  Another hit to her shoulder put her down again, a short kick into her shin had her on her knees.

Her shield of lightning flickered and failed, her dark brown hair matted with sweat, face gaunt, illuminated in the night only by Milaea’s purple arcs of energy.  

“Enough Yorna….lets go home….”  
Milaea wasn’t sure if she was trying on a trick or simply confused with exhaustion.

The building shook as yellow light burgeoned from an explosion deeper in the Works casting their figures into black silhouettes,
Milaea kept her eyes on the woman’s face as some lucidity returned,
“Plan B bitch,” she said,

“What have you done,” Milaea pressed on her weary mind drawing out the information she needed

“Ehh…we didn’t have enough explosives…that’s why I needed to be there…the safeties are sabotaged but…ahh…if you’re quick…” she looked back toward the main city,

Another explosion…

This time not in the physical world but in the force…an earthquake of…
Black...
Ugly…
Hideous emotions almost swept her off her feet, sudden but…then subsiding…in the aftermath was…

The balance…the underlying flow of the force she had been so accustomed to feeling on Coruscant was changed…slightly ever so slightly tuned toward the darkness…some balance had been…not lost…taken.

The riots…the madness…it would all intensify…her enhanced mind performed eldritch calculations of how a shift in the aether would effect physical reality…it would triple instantly and take twice as long to subside..

Wait…had she just thought the word Aether….

“You’re strong my love…but we’re still a lot smarter than you…” she said in a ragged voice

Milaea’s stomach sank…this had all been a distraction…destroying the works, unleashing hordes of mind controlled killers…destabilization that would leave a terrible Legacy in the Force…all simply ways to get the Jedi out of the temple…just so they could get to her…if she had just gone to them willingly….  

She re-ignited her amethyst blade and placed it at her throat.

“What is your name,” something about those words chilled her…a phantom of another time…another life

“Kiraea…daughter of Yilaea and Karan, student of Karintha, sister of Yorna…their stories….”  she paused with the strain of speaking and a sadness echoed in the force,  

“I carry with me…” There was a sense of pride and loss in her words that Milaea tried desperately not feel sympathy for…

Yet she failed…

For in Kiraea’s eyes she saw the pain that drove her to inflict it indifferently on others…and the tremendous love for her own…for Milaea herself…her incomprehension that her little sister Milaea could consider this fight as anything more than a sisterly tumble…she was in just as much need of healing as anyone she had harmed.

“Well Kiraea…daughter of Yilaea and Karan, Student of Karintha, sister of Yorna…if I weren’t a Jedi…and you weren’t one of my People…I would execute you…” she switched the blade off and headed back towards the burning Works

“Which of those reasons is stronger Milaea?”  Kiraea called after her, stumbling and unable to stand.

“I’m not sure” she whispered.
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« Reply #181 on: March 06, 2018, 01:19:28 AM »

Brilliance, fueled by the madness of indifference, played expertly across an entire city-planet, with looming implications the Jedi have never even fathomed.  Milaea, seeing the pattern of the movement, the only one who seems able to look beyond her nose, takes a step toward the Order, helping, calling out the patterns, yet still she is limited by her upbringing, and sees only as far as that.  Then a moment of insight and a choice made, run to the architect, stop her from unleashing fiery hell upon the planet, ignorant to the ways in which that will change little, and play partly into the hands of the aggressors.  A chase and battle, worthy of epic song, if any there ever were, with Milaea learning more and more of how to fight as the being she is, as she simultaneously takes steps away from the Jedi she was raised to be.  Single minded focus, disregarding the deaths meant to distract her, she becomes a part of it, bearing down upon her target, only to best her, then let her live to loyalties split between her teachings and her genetics, still no closer to knowing what her choice will be...
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« Reply #182 on: March 06, 2018, 07:00:22 AM »

Success!!! I caught up. Cheesy Wonderful chapters. No possible way I could remember everything that needed commenting on, but from these last two chapters have enough to start with. I loved that Milaea was able to see the pattern in the attacks that seemed so random. And that she actually decided to act for the good of the planet. Yes she is struggling with which path to chose, but at the same time, she is forced because of it to chose the only path that is right. Her fight with Kiraea is scary. These are two titans fighting against each other, not knowing which one actually has the advantage. One has more techniques at her disposal, while the other is significantly more powerful. And even by the end, once she accepts that she is an Aethan (even using the word Aether once), she still is undecided about which pathway to chose. Like Karm said in an earlier reply, Milaea may yet chose a path not expected. One that is neither the Jedi, nor the Aethans, but her own path. I am excited to see whether she does or not.

A few random things that I remember liking from past chapters.

Mentions to Ahch-To and Porgs
Reference to the "Collected Poems of Illyiss"
Soryu's wisdom
Valens' and Jarys' comradory
Lyaea's and Selanae's reunion.
All of TD's Karm's, and Illyiss' comments. Cheesy

Wonderful job so far, I only wish I had been able to comment on everything as I read it.
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« Reply #183 on: March 06, 2018, 12:12:39 PM »

Wow those were some whirlwind chapters!  I like that Milaea is taking a third option but DAMN is Kiraea making it difficult to maintain an Olympian view, the warring sides of her Aethan heritage with her Jedi upbringing.  But what writing!  The action: edge of your seat!  The drama: Shakespeare has nothing on you!  The explosions: Michael Bay could learn a thing or two!

I absolutely love the exchange between Milaea and Kiraea: despite the fact that they are adversaries and at odds with one another, I think that there is sincere love...at least on Mimi's side.  Kiraea?  ...That's a tough one...

But this proves that only imagination (heh, and cognitive dissonance) are strictures for what one can do with the Force.  I'll say it again--and I'm including Karm, TR, TDC, Illyiss, and (at the risk of sounding immodest) myself--LSG: THIS is what SW should be!!!

You guys are awesome!
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« Reply #184 on: March 06, 2018, 01:06:59 PM »

Wow those were some whirlwind chapters!  I like that Milaea is taking a third option but DAMN is Kiraea making it difficult to maintain an Olympian view, the warring sides of her Aethan heritage with her Jedi upbringing.  But what writing!  The action: edge of your seat!  The drama: Shakespeare has nothing on you!  The explosions: Michael Bay could learn a thing or two!

I absolutely love the exchange between Milaea and Kiraea: despite the fact that they are adversaries and at odds with one another, I think that there is sincere love...at least on Mimi's side.  Kiraea?  ...That's a tough one...

But this proves that only imagination (heh, and cognitive dissonance) are strictures for what one can do with the Force.  I'll say it again--and I'm including Karm, TR, TDC, Illyiss, and (at the risk of sounding immodest) myself--LSG: THIS is what SW should be!!!

You guys are awesome!

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« Reply #185 on: March 06, 2018, 02:18:47 PM »

Echoing others: This was an amazing and deep chapter sequence.  Millaea helping the Jedi, knowing she was going up against her own people, but deep inside the drive to save innocent lives is strongly instilled.  Her outlook on the other people of the galaxy is very different than her sister's.  I do not believe the Aethans see anyone else as a true "person".  They are inferiors that can be used and discarded at need.  Sure, you don't go out of your way to hurt or harm, but you don't worry about doing it if you need to either.  Kind of like the way I think about spiders...

ON the other side, Kiraea burns with her hatred.  I am honestly surprised that this hasn't burned her up by now.  Smarter they are.  Stronger.  Genetically superior.  But they are still people, and deep down that will destroy them if they don't eventually learn to live in peace.

Millaea is the key to them truly bridging that gap.  I fear they will not turn it.
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« Reply #186 on: March 06, 2018, 09:33:34 PM »

Thanks All Sounds like that chapter went well!  And thanks for your patience things are now coming to a close (?) so watch this space!
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« Reply #187 on: March 13, 2018, 09:52:59 PM »

Chapter 44
Jarys


“Ahh,”  He sighed contentedly behind his helmet as a spray of globby green fluids coated his armour and the mutant beast with five legs and leathery brown skin flopped before him,

“It’s good to fight together again,” he felt his brother’s presence amongst the dying pools of a gaggle of other creatures…mutants that inhabited the under levels of Coruscant.  

“But,” he added, “It will be better when we don’t have to fight at all…” he wiped chucks of quivering flesh from his tremor sword

“Our war for survival never ends….” Valens countered stomping a ganger’s rebreather covered face into the corroded metal floor, “but yes…at least we can stop fighting these…others, start living…”

Since the first riot they’d incited six more working through roughly levels 2-50 …since they left the last hovel it had been a near constant fight against mutants, gangs, outcasts, strays…all manner of beings that stalked these humid and toxic levels.  

Hundreds had tried to rob them, kill them or eat them…every last one of them was now a smouldering or bloody wreck.  

“Might as well rest here…we’re close,”  Valens said

“Kiraea should be starting soon,” Jarys added checking his helmets chronometer

“Speaking of which…she’s a strong woman…determined bold…” he hinted not too subtly,

“You want to set me up with her?” Valens asked,

“Not you…you’re more suited to Adaea I think,”  

Valens sighed…Jarys could feel his reluctance in the force…They had both lost their wives…for Jarys when he saw the footage of Cilina dead…it had just confirmed what he long suspected…he could deal with that…he would carry her with him, and avenge her by saving their daughter from the Jedi…but for Valens there was no such consolation…he had seen his wife twisted and tortured, killed before his eyes…he was a deep feeling person, that pain still haunted him.

“Ughh…this isn’t the time…”

“We’ve been lost for twenty years…there is no time to waste!”  he said firmly,

“You don’t under…when I brought her back…it was on condition she bring them back…once she returns to us…”

Jarys crossed his arms incredulous,

“do you truly think my daughter can bring the dead back to life?”

“She has powers beyond even what I can understand…she already just about did after you belted the life out of Sofa on Cygrat,”  

Oddly that wasn’t as much as sore point between them as Jarys had feared…but he suspected it would be different had he actually killed Sofa or Milaea not healed her. That reminded Jarys

“Speaking of whom, what happened to her, you took her into that bedroom and she never came out,”

“Kiraea took her,”

“Alive?”,

“I have no problem with you and Kiraea…the Republic would never sleep soundly were you to have children…”  

He was about to press when he sensed it…six, three closing on each of them.  Valens leapt up onto a rickety broken catwalk with a grace that bellied the heavy armour, Jarys stood firm and raised his rifle.  

As soon as the first limb peeked from behind a rusted cabinet he fired, the shot speared through the enviro-suit hissing gasses and eliciting a cry.  Two stun grenade flew out, he caught them as easily as a he had rocks in games of flying stones back home and sent them sailing back, more squeals followed.

The top half of a body in an enviro suit flopped to the ground beside him, then a head from another body…he sensed the attackers fleeing.

“Why do they bother” Jarys asked through his helmet comm,

“They have little choice…this is the legacy of centuries of Republic neglect…the rotten core at their heart,” Valens replied leaping down.

Jarys shook his head, “Just like the rim, full of the desperate and the dangerous…the Jedi, the Senate…why even pretend, why not just admit they are as corrupt and complicit as the frelling Hutt’s,”  

Valens shrugged, “They like their illusions too much,”

Jarys looked up the towering edifice of a skyscrapers foundation as though he could see her up there

“Kiraea will soon dispel it for them,” he noted as they rose to continue on.
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The Entrance was covered by auto turrets, both alongside and in a bunker opposite the door way.  Three Jedi stood guard…he could feel their nervousness…normally no one would be down here…but with the riots so close they would not take chances.

“How do you want to play this?” Valens asked through the comm, only a few metres away he was invisible in the dense green smog of the under levels.

“I’ll take care of it,” he replied.

The entrance was on the edge of the Temples foundations, the lowest entryway without having to tunnel in.  The Jedi were on edge…annoyed they were not on the front lines…he could hear the thin sound of the comm from their envrio-suits as he leapt from I beam to I beam amongst the jumble of trusses and struts that supported the buildings foundations by splaying the weight outward.

He let the aether flow through him in a cooling stream to lower the temperature around him avoiding the auto-turrets heat sensors stalking ever closer the sounds of his armour dampened by the aether…not that it was really necessary amongst the clanks and hiss of the pipes and vents…but it was good practice.

“Another sector lost…” said one voice distorted by their rebreather

“It’s getting worse…”

“We should be out there…”

“And get ourselves killed! After what happened in the East Hangar…Better here than out there…I tell you those Sith are too smart for us…they won’t attack the Temple again…they’ll draw us out pick us off one by one…”

Jarys smiled at how poorly they understood as he dropped down silently behind them, the aether flowing around him gently as though he were a pebble on a river bed…all flowed past, it caused on ripples only subtly shifting the stream as it needed to.

“There’s only two of them, the Sentinels will catch him soon enough…”

“Like Fergo and Hmmum?”

“They didn’t know what they were up against Kirkut does…once Yshrrk’s back from Kashyyyk with Oma…not even the Sith would take on a three metre tall Wookie Sentinel”

Jarys pursed his lips…that sounded like a challenge. He quietly drew his dagger.

“I don’t know they don’t seem like Sith…I met Valens a few times…he’s damn clever and cold as Ilum …”

“Yeah and crazy a Gungan on spice,”

“That’s really racist you know…” one chided, “I can’t help think more is going on here…the Councils not saying much…and that tells me a lot”

“The guys spaced, what more is there to know, Kimar’ll have his head,”

“Don’t you think that could be part of the prob…”

He aetherically lifted a piece of scrap at the far end of the clearing and let it drop, the turrets immediately repointed, the Jedi sabres out in an instant

“What was that…”

“Check it out,”

“no way you go,”

“Ugh it’s probably just a valve or something,” the middle one headed forward yellow sabre pointed ahead as Jarys gently worked the knife on the Jedi in fronts pouch, slicing into to grab the ident card before springing up.  

Arm around the Jedi’s throat he crushed it in an instant as his dagger plunged silently into the spine.  

Letting go he sidestepped behind the other as it turned to regard the flopping form of its companion.

“Hey…what….”

The momentum of his step carried Jarys arms through in a twist snapping the neck.  

With the ident card on his person the turrets ignored him as the other Jedi turned back around,

“Just a womp….”  The dagger was firmly planted between his eyes before he had time to finish the sentence. A flick of his wrist sent thin bolts of energy into the turrets overloading their circuitry with indifference.

Not bad...but he really needed more stealth practice he mused.
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The caverns beneath the temple reminded him of the dead lands of Aethas…ruins ancient beyond understanding, but still suffused with the aether.  

“Check this out!”  he said excitedly before a door with strange Runes, “haven’t seen an aetheric mind trapped door in years…that one Melron showed us…this ones much more functional…”  He could feel the mind trap pushing him to kill his brother and then himself…it was strong in its own way…but not strong enough.

“I saw that one years ago…” Valens replied, “Never got around to opening it, maybe someone else will,”  

The went down, then up, then down some more heading to what Valens had termed the Spire. The remnants of so many dead cults and Jedi…it was a sobering thought…everything died…

He tasted a thin scent on the air…a feminine sweetness…Milaea had been down here recently…

“You alright,” Valens clapped his back as he paused,

“Just thinking…so much loss…” he spoke not of the Jedi and the others who had come here but his own kind,

“Too much…” Valens replied  
“You’ll see her soon brother…”

When they finally reached the dark portal he began to feel it…a churning in the aether, a back and forth, a dynamic equilibrium.  


When they finally reached the dark portal he began to feel it…a churning in the aether, a back and forth, a dynamic equilibrium.  
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Valens

The cave was full of crystals in the all colours and light...shielded by force illusions...strong ones it had to be said.  

“Grab as many as you can carry,” he told Jarys whilst prising out one with the Aether

“We might not have a chance to get more any time soon…especially form here.” Jarys obliged picking one of each colour within his reach.

The Monolith was an ancient thing, deep beneath the temple…created long ago by the ancient ‘Kings of the Hill  -the Mak’Tor, and added to most crucially by Jim Xandin, an early Kage.  

What he had come here for sat in a pit lit from below flanked by two lamps, the aether echoed, twisted and turned in a rhythm, a song Odjina would’ve said, it suffused the room and diffused across the entire planet.  He stepped down the stairs toward it, the aether of the place immediately began to resist him…it could feel the emptiness he carried with him…

This was a place of balance, he was a walking vessel of the dead.  He pushed past its resistance by sucking the repulsive energies into the hungry emptiness of the death he carried…its energies were strong…yet the insatiable desire of a thousand Aethans to live again was something the people who built this place could never have anticipated defending against.  

He found the hidden latch and opened it with the aether, the monoliths outer shell rose to reveal the three crystals, one red for what the Jedi would call dark, and one yellow for their light side the one in the middle a shifting orange blend for balance.  

“What’s the point of all this”  Jarys asked behind him, his blunt tone seemed disrespectful for a place of such power, but Aethans were not known for respecting…well anything or anyone other than their own.

“An ancient shrine to balance the aether,” Valens replied peering at the crystals with the aether, using the shatter-point and white current techniques to see the flaws in them and dispel any illusions.  Odjina’s memories had furnished him with a detailed knowledge of this place…still there were things about this place even the Kage had not fully understood.

“Right...” Jarys was catching on…”And you’re going to destabilize it…send those Jedi and all Kiraea’s toys into a spin,”  

“Precisely” he fixed his eyes on the yellow crystal

“It will let what they call the Dark Side permeate more…the Jedi try and regulate and suppress emotions like fear, anger, pride, with the aether, this will make it more difficult.”

“Dark Side?” Jarys inquired

“Of the aether…they apply moral categories to it,”

“Fools,” Jarys spat,

“Exactly…that is why they hold themselves back, and that is why they will never let us be…we are an abomination…anathema to their dogma, just as their beliefs are to our culture.”

“How did you put up with them for so long?” Jarys asked poking at one of the lamps

Valens just shook his head and reached for the light crystal…it fought him…pushed his hand back with a righteous fury…it didn’t want to be broken free, it was part of a grander melody than his petty scheming…it was as though the crystal could think back at him as well as push…it was alive in a way…

Do not break the balance…it cried

Abomination…kill it!!!, the dark crystal screamed at him in equal measure

He felt the attack come…but he had plans of his own…he touched the phantom of his people…he smiled viciously…yes…this was the truth.  

“Your light and dark are false idols” he screamed, “There is no good, no evil, only life….” With all the strength he could muster he surrounded the ghosts of the dead that he had carried with him since the day he had pulled Aethena’s power out of the altar into Milaea -

“AND DEATH” he whispered with a scream

He pushed it out of himself

The ghostly image of his Grandfather tore free from him at last…a huge weight lifted from him immediately.  Jarys stared in astonishment as he saw his grand fathers apparition stare at the Light crystal…the face they had known as children turned rotten and vicious…like a hungry vampiric ghoul of old…the true face of the dead.

Finally…finally it had found something it could fill its empty hunger with…it plunged into a ghostly white beam straight into the yellow crystal.

The aether crumpled into an implosion as the yellow light of the crystal lost all luminosity….then exploded out as the strength of the death ate the light energies….a black hole sucking in a stars brightness and spewing forth an overload of darkness into the galaxy as the Red crystals energy pushed against an empty shell.


The crystal turned dark…muddy yellow-brown and fell from its slot as the Orange crystal with what balance it had accumulated fought to regain some normality…it would last for a time…but the balance had shifted irrevocably until it could be properly replaced…and with the last great Singer dead by his hands…it could take centuries.  

He fell to his knees…not in exhaustion…but strength…the dead legacy of the power he had used to resurrect and reforge Aethena into Milaea was finally gone from him…He smiled broadly…all that remained was the memory of the techniques he had forged with it…an understanding of the power of aetheric phantoms no one else could ever match….

Jarys was beside him, he felt himself being turned as Jarys checked him over,

“That looked dangerous, you alright brother…I can’t lose you so soon…”

“It was…but it’s done.”  He rose with Jarys help, feeling his true strength returning.

“Was that…was that Grandpa?” Jarys asked,

He shook his head…”No…not in the way a usual aetheric ghost exists…that was…something left behind….”  He stood and brushed himself off…finally free and back to his full power.

“We have the window we need, the Jedi will struggle to adapt to the new flow of the aether…play on Yorens pride and arrogance…he is a proud man, use that to kill him”

Jarys nodded, their arms still grasped, Valens looked around the room now darkened, the crystals supressed by the imbalance.  

“Now brother…” Valens said intently pulling his Jarys closer, “We find your daughter,”
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« Reply #188 on: March 13, 2018, 10:01:58 PM »

Chapter 45
Midnight of Madness - Part 1
Thanks to Dutchman for his amazing Contributions to this!


“What the frell was that!” Yoren slurred as he struggled to stay standing after the dark tide had struck them from somewhere…somewhere below…

Soryu tried to shake off the dank oil he felt himself dripping with…but like oil it felt sticky and scrubbing at it just moved it around rather than soaking it away.

“I…I don’t know…” there could be no doubt now, if there had been before, this was a co-ordinated attack on the whole planet…and now an attack on the force directly…

“You’re always bleating about being in tune with the living force…” Yoren snapped, his tolerance already drained by six hours of coordinating the response effort.  The room was empty apart from the two of them, every other Jedi was out there fighting to regain control apart from the padawans and a handful of Masters in lock down.

“There was nothing living about that…” Soryu said quietly.

The air remained punctuated by the whining beeps of City Security Holo Cams sending alerts as their algorithms detected violence…but what was previously a second by second beeping now ramped up to a hideous drone.

“Frell…” Yoren stared at the tactical readout as the blue map of the city slowly turned ever more red with alerts

“Frell, frell, FRELL” Yoren was not normally the kind to swear…even in such a stressful situation…could the dark explosion have…

“Where do we even start…Team 74 head to Uscru District, Team 89 Dea plaza…” Yoren directed one hand propping up his head.
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Golban did a good trade…refurbishing and scraping ident codes off rifles and blasters, he could buy ‘used’ rifles for around 200-300 credits and resell clean ones for 600-700. 

With his store on Level 61 Section14 C he was high enough to get business from the mid-tier gangsters, but low enough to escape notice.

Flicking the button under the desk, behind his electro-cage he opened up for the night – more customers by far after dark -  the door swinging open…and to his surprise two customers already, a large Male and small non male.  His eyes scanned them…odd combination, the male had the right look, chipped armour, the woman looked too well dressed in the hooded robe…he never understood human courtship and pairing and had long since given up trying to.

“Welcome to Golban’s  your store for Rifles, Blasters, grenades, all with three month guarantees on the cleaned ident codes, and buy two blasters get a free heat sink!” rang the slightly tinny greeting message as they came in.  The male hung back looking over the rifles behind the trasnparisteel as the non-male approached him.

“Golban…” she said quietly…”Duros…” she paused and stared at him oddly…eh he’d dealt with weirder,

“You’re going to have a busy night Golban…you’re having a sale, 100% off,”

“Yes…I’m having a sale…” It was such a wonderful idea, why hadn’t he thought of it before…if he gave everyone a hundred percent off sales would boom!

“And everyone gets a free detonator with their blaster,” Adaea suggested

“Oh!” he slapped his large head with his hand “Of course…I should give everyone a free detonator!”

“And we’d like a few boxes of thermal detonators, that way we can spread good word of mouth about you,”

“Brilliant!” he beamed, “I’ll get you three boxes straight away!”
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She leaned back against the wall, her left foot propped up and knee crooked to give a little thigh away. 

She heard the refresher flush behind her and the male Ootoolan walked out having not washed his hands…gross…what a hypocrite to want to kill his hatch mates for not washing out their apartment’s humidifier filter regularly .

As he left he passed a female Devaronian heading to the refresher to her left, surface thoughts showed her annoyance at being dumped by some male or other.

“Excuse me,” she said pleadingly, she made sure to wet her hair a little and smudged up some lipstick and a tear in her dress, gave her a nice roughed up look that made females willing to try and help and played on the universal rule that every male was willing to believe any given female needed his help.

“Can I help you hon?”

“Yes you can…” Lyaea replied pressing gently on her mind,

“Can you head to sector 32-G and kill every male there…they roughed me up!”

Her eyes glazed slightly and she rocked back a little,

“Bastards…all of them….”  her eyes steeled as she turned back around

She checked her chrono then flicked a glance to her mother who pulled a detonator out of a bag and handed it to the Devornian as she walked past,

“How many left?”

Selaena held up three fingers,

Lyaea nodded, three more and then it was time to get the ships and get out of here.
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As Aquila Varga walked slowly through the square leading to the Galaxies Opera House in the Uscru District, everyone failed to notice the young Bamasian.  But then, why would they notice a lone person walking amongst the masses as they flowed to and fro within the Entertainment District?  Had anyone taken the time, they would have thought that the lavender-skinned woman was speaking as if to herself.

And they be right; she was speaking to herself.  Because her other voice was inside her.

It was telling her where she needed to be, what she had to do prior to arriving, and the specific time for her gift.

As Aquila looked around, seeing all of the rich, opulently dressed crowd, she shook her head as her other voice continued to talk.  Nodding, she agreed that they were deserving of gift, they needed her gift.  They were the entrenched affluent, their method of disenfranchisement subtle and absolutely unyielding.  Yes, yes her eyes were opened.  It was their fault.  They were the reason to blame for everything that was wrong.

But it was her gift that would fix everything; her other voice assured her of this.  And it hadn’t been wrong yet, it had already told her where her fellow activist Golban was posing as an arms dealer who provided her with the gift so enthusiastically.

The Tower of Harena sounded the half-hour, the doors opening to the Galaxies Opera House as the Intermission chimed, disgorging a multitude of theater-goers.  No, Aquila agreed with her other voice, they were criminals. And with that in mind, she readied her gift.

As the crowd reached its height, bodies packed tightly together, reinforcing the smells of perfumes, expensive tabac, and rare spirits, Aquila closed her eyes and, exultant, pressed the button on her gift…
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Tsi hit the deck as another volley of red and blue cut into the darkness over the barricade.

Everything here was not fine.

“Suppressive fire, where are the stun nets!” Command Tsi yelled over the tvump tvump tvump of the rioter’s fire…where they had gotten all the weapons from he had no idea.

“Transport got rammed by a speeder en-route sir…” the lieutantnt replied beside him popping his pistol over to loose a few stun shots to keep any more of them sneaking up to the debris constructed barrier, just behind them lay two Sneevels that had gotten up and over it armed to the teeth with vibro knives and sliced poor Officer Tgrut to piece before they blasted them.

“Dren…” without the stun nets this would be a lot harder…already the no-man’s land between their positions was littered with bodies under the nets they had used…but they needed more…it seemed like for every rioter they took down six more appeared twice as angry.

A heavy body slammed behind him and pulled his shoulder around, he almost put a fist through the Officer before realising who it was.
“Sir Jedi support in bound,” Ambrin informed him pointing to the two robed figures rushing forward.

He crouch ran over to them as another volley flew overhead, this time met not just with stun fire but with deflections off an orange and green blade.

“Master Jedi…thank the Maker you’re here…we have them pinned, but we’re out of stun nets,”

“I thought you had permission to use deadly force?” came the burbling voice of the Crolute Jedi, that surprised Tsi…
“We do…but I’d rather avoid any more deaths than necessary…these are our citiz…”

“They are criminals, The Grand Master and Chancellor have demanded a swift end to this, switch your fire to lethal and follow us in,” 

The hulking creature pushed past him, armour glinting beneath the brown as the Lieutenant looked to him for orders.

He sighed,

“Live fire, back up the Jedi,” he called despite himself

They wasted no time leaping the barricade sabres spinning like shields of pure white as they bounced red bolts back, explosions rocked the rioters upturned crates and hovercars as they sent grenades back at them.  He valuted over the barricade…he might not like this but he still needed to lead from the front.

Cover to cover he picked off limbs where he could with his rifle taking a half dozen glancing hits and one solid one to his left shoulder. 

“Forward” he cried in lieu of screaming in pain as his vision briefly reddened before his armours auto-medic injected him with anaesthetics.

Glancing up he saw limbs and heads flying from blackened sabre wounds…were these Kimars guardians of peace and justice?
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Risshk A’kazz stood staring at the flashing lights of the CoCo Town Bistro, the only “five-star” diner in the Industrial sector.  And it had earned its fifth star just recently, as the head chef Sitau Thell was wont to tell everyone…which just happened to coincide with Thell’s advancement to the position.

Pure rancor poodoo.

It was Risshk’s menu that had garnered the awards, it was Risshk’s cooking that had drawn the crowds.  But since Thell was pod-cousin to the owner, he got all of the accolades.  And Risshk had said nothing.  Not even when Thell had had him fired did he say anything…

…That is until his other voice had spoken to him…he had just been sitting on the refresher the other day and it just happened…HE was the real chef, HE was the real talent, HE the real master.  It was HIM, Risshk, that had put the Bistro on the map, amazed every critic, from the Corusci Fine Dining Holo-mag to winning a Cream of the Core award HE had pulled them kicking and screaming from a petty “three-stars” into the Avant guard of the culinary world . 

Try telling Thell that though…not only had he been rebuffed but fired to boot!  And how he’d lamented…

But his other voice had given him clarity, given him perspective.  Risshk deserved better, would demand his recognition.  His other voice had promised him.  Otherwise, Risshk agreed with his other voice, they were criminals.

Revving the accelerator to his hauler, Risshk gained velocity as he quickly covered the distance between himself and the diner, the large speeder a missile aimed right at the Bistro’s kitchen.

And right before the chassis of the hauler broke through the bulkhead of the kitchen, Risshk knew that he would finally have his recognition…
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Shamus Vrieska had seen his beloved neighbourhood encroached upon by the Bimms and had wondered if they would bring crime along with them, as he’d been told from several of his drinking-mates.  And it seemed, at first, that they were the suspicious types: keeping to themselves, always quiet, never ones to say ‘allo.

But, as time went on, Shamus noticed more and more that they weren’t so much “suspicious” as just…polite and…hospitable.  He made friends with them, both individually and as a community.

And so when he saw that a couple of young punks were terrorizing Sire and Sira Khaar, Shamus got angry.  What right did these punks have to hassle good, law-abid’n folk?  And although Shamus was afraid, he weren’t no coward.  And, Shamus reminded himself, these weren’t punks, they were criminals.

Running out to help the Khaars, Shamus jumped into the fray, confronting the two criminals...
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“…Breaking news: The insanity continues with the CoCo Town Bistro burned to the ground as a result of an out-of-control collision from a heavy speeder, killing many of the people within.  Among the casualties was beloved Epicurean Chef Sitau Thell who had given the Bistro its new menu, resulting in a “five-star” rating…emergency response is still yet to put out the fires as…”

“Sorry Gilib we have this just in a suicide-bomber exploded what appears to be an improvised thermal-detonator, killing dozens and wounding hundreds in the Uscru District near the Galaxies Opera House.  We’ve just been sent a link on out Holowitter feed to a broadcast by a former Coruscanti University student with some kind of manifesto…if you have any leads or picts send them to our Holowitter feed on As It Happens @ Coruscant New Network.”

“Thanks Kolbi, CSF Commissioner Orbis maintains that the CSF have the situation under control….”

The frell they do Corrix Hern mused as he switched off the holo news before hopping out of his speeder, wiping the blood from his hand on the door.  The whole place was coming apart…and he was loving it.  Caution to the wind he’d already collected on three bounties…now he was going for his fourth in as many hours…

Another yellow explosion blossomed on the plaza below as private security forces opened fire on an angry mob of what looked like students trying to make their way to the opulent Deas tower…not a CSF officer or droid in sight the wealthy denizens had unleashed their private armies to protect themselves – where the state failed, capitalism succeeded.

Proceeding through the tower opposite he came to the address, apartment 3121-4…he had only taken the job yesterday, usually it would be a week more research and stake outs…but with the cover of insanity he went straight for the jugular. 

A flick of his wrist auto-sliced the door, behind it the target wobbled up on fat legs as the holo screen showed a live feed of the burning opera house.

“Wa…wa….”  Hern didn’t give him a chance, he sprung forward and planted a fist in the flabby mans gut, grasped his arm and pivoted him around in a lock, popping out the shoulder,

“50,000 credits is now 60, you got it!” he seethed with his ‘intimidation’ voice

“I’ll pay, I’ll pay I just need ti…” 

He tugged harder on the arm and stomped on the back of his foot,

“No time, pay now!” It was a good night to be a criminal.
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« Reply #189 on: March 13, 2018, 10:03:00 PM »

Chapter 45
Midnight of Madness - Part 2

Tsi pulled off his helmet trying to get a fresh breath…but was met only by the grimy granulated air of the under levels now mingled with burnt blood and fresh death.

The Crolute Jedi held up an amputated Wee’Quay by the throat,

“Who is orchestrating this, where are the leaders of this uprising,”

“E chu ta” it replied, only to be met with a wet cracking as its throat was crushed.

Tsi’s eyes widened in astonishment,

“Master Jedi you can’t just execute a captive!  It’s criminal!”

“Silence, the Grand Masters orders are clear,”

He glanced around the other bodies…the fruits of chaos, disorder – he would uphold the law against anyone who broke it…anyone!

“No that is murder, I am placing you under arrs….ahckk…” his throat choked up instantly

“You dare defy the Grand Master!”

As his eyes started to roll back in his head the swimming thoughts tried to formulate a response in tune with his mother’s lullabies….

Tvump Tvump, Chktssss…bdow bdow

He crumpled on the ground,

“Commander…are you alright,” the Lieutenant hurled him upright as the blood returned to his brain in warm flushes of sanity…in front of him lay the Jedi with three black holes smoking from his chest.
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“Me Bwaster…” The Gamorrean grunted in the best basic it could manage

“Yes yes of course!” Golban nodded enthusiastically…it was going so well, there was a huge line up! He’d run out of detonators, so was now giving away free stun mines.

“Oh dear…” he suddenly realise he was out of blasters…it had been such a busy Night!

“Oh I am sorry it seems we’re out of stock…all I have is this Vibro Axe…”

“It Do” the bulky green creature snatched it from his hand and wandered off muttering “call me fat…not call me fat no more…chop chop chop…”

Suddenly Golban realized something…if he was to get even more attention he needed to make a big statement…

Pocket…

Pocket…of course his pocket…he still had a detonator

Show off your wares…

Uh! How had he been so stupid, he needed to show how good his explosives were! A Live Demonstration!

Determined he marched straight out of the store, the market street was empty…he needed a crowd, he pulled out the detonator and pressed the activator, once released it would detonate…now he just had to find a crowd to show it to.
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“The latest from our feed…a Duros has blown himself and an unknown number of others up in the back of a holo-cinema in the mid-level Tonga shopping district…we’re getting picts from camera comms…” Gilib said deflated

Soryu glanced at the reporters as their desk piled up with ever more hands from nowhere placing new reports before them to read…How many more stories would go unreported, those that Reporter Kolbi now read were the few prominent exceptions as this Night of Madness wore on…

“The Chancellor will be making a statement in half an hour, the Jedi order are…A BUNCH OF FRELLING NERF FRELLERS FRELL FRELL FRELL I WANT MY PROMOTION”

Soryu staggered back himself as the lithe Togruta leapt from the desk onto Gilib and tore at his face before the screen went black, replaced by a picture of an Ugnaught holding two sparking wires [We are Experiencing Technical Difficulties – Back with the latest Soon].

This was a war…a war they could not win…for it was a war they had only just realised they were fighting…the enemy soldiers their own citizens, with no front line and no single field of conflict…against an enemy whose goals he did not understand.

The lingering slick of dark emotions told him who was behind it…only two or three people in the whole Order had the ability and creativity to unleash an attack on the force directly…it would be easy to hate Valens…and the way he felt right now he wanted to…but that would solve nothing…there was too much about this situation he didn’t understand.

He tried to centre himself…to find balance…to seek guidance...be the eye in the heart of the storm of destruction…yet the Force he stood upon had shifted beneath his feet…the landscape changed when he needed stability the most…the other Jedi…might not fare as well…It would be too easy to give into the dark for too many…

Only those who cared nothing for the distinction between light and dark when they called upon the Force would be indifferent to such a shift.

The dark circle beneath Yoren’s eyes seemed somehow more sinister now as he directed the CSF as best he could bereft of Milaea’s insights.

Milaea…where ever she had run off to…it could only be to stop something worse than what was already happening- and whatever that was terrified him.

That girl was their last hope.
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« Reply #190 on: March 13, 2018, 10:27:14 PM »

Wow....  LSG, these are terrific!  *nod to Dutchman* and your contribution as well!  Simply amazing...

The trek under the temple...  Now we finally see what happened to the Mak'Tor shrine.  How the balance was lost.  Its sobering, Karmack worked his BUTT off to fix that.  :-)  and the mind-trap almost killed him anyway.

Amazing.  Simply amazing.  The fight was precise, but the exposition, the weight of what Valens is carrying, the hopes and dreams of an entire race...  Wow.

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« Reply #191 on: March 13, 2018, 10:57:46 PM »

Yeah, wow! I think we are finally starting to see why there is such a difference between the Jedi of the SW movies, and the Jedi of your stories. It is probably a good thing Yoda isn't around right now. He may be one of the only Jedi left with the correct view of the Force (form a Jedi's perspective anyways). Well done, but I feel it is still just beginning.
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« Reply #192 on: March 14, 2018, 03:57:53 PM »

Wow LSG...

OK, those chapters were doorstoppers!  But SO many AWESOME scenes!

I have to say: I LOVE how you tied in the Aethans' plan to disrupt the Jedi with Karm's earlier crystal mission.  Inspired! 

Valens' and Jarys' plans to disrupt and demoralize the Jedi is proof of their superior tactics: attacking on multiple fronts, obfuscation, and (literally) scorched earth.  I don't know how (or even IF) Kimar can recover from this!

I wonder what Valens will be like now that he's been divested of the weight of the Aethans' collective presences (quite literally giving up the ghost...).

AWESOME chapters LSG!  Now THIS is the way for Force-users to wage war...
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« Reply #193 on: March 14, 2018, 06:29:56 PM »


AWESOME chapters LSG!  Now THIS is the way for Aether-users to wage war...

FTFY  Wink
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« Reply #194 on: March 14, 2018, 07:19:28 PM »

FTFY  Wink
LOL  Indeed  Wink

Point!
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