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« Reply #30 on: February 07, 2018, 09:19:26 PM »

Aethans can't bring back the dead - that sounds like a challenge!

Well, at least not as far as we know. Wink We know they can heal, make young, etc. but we haven't seen anyone brought back to life. Yet.
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« Reply #31 on: February 07, 2018, 10:43:50 PM »

can't they?  I thought that was exactly what Valens was after...
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« Reply #32 on: February 08, 2018, 04:53:45 AM »

can't they?  I thought that was exactly what Valens was after...

Pretty much...after all with the Force anything is possible......
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« Reply #33 on: February 08, 2018, 12:10:27 PM »

Pretty much...after all with the Force anything is possible......
"The dark side of the Force is a pathway to many abilities, some considered to be unnatural.” Darth Sidious

Oohh, ominous...  Wink

Then again...look what they did for Mendax...
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« Reply #34 on: February 08, 2018, 01:36:59 PM »

Oohh, ominous...  Wink

Then again...look what they did for Mendax...

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« Reply #35 on: February 08, 2018, 10:53:18 PM »

Chapter 8: Bread on the Water
Blackstar Base
5 ABY


Balnard watched the explosions march across Scardia Station and pushed down the rising despair he felt. Alarms rang on the station, the unexpected attack overshadowing even the damage control activity from the collision they had perpetrated.  The sounds of panic echoed through the station and Balnard watched as fighters and assault shuttles launched, streaking toward the Imperial fleet only to be swatted away by the fire of escorting corvettes, frigates and TIE fighters.

It was a slaughter...

Balnard looked down at the wreck of the freighter.  They were back in the upper docking ring, not far from where the Dragon had been docked, and the wreck was clearly visible.  The hull stuck out of the side of the habitat ring's pressure hull like a cross-bow bolt, stubby and lethal.  The fires had died down for lack of fuel as the small amounts of atmosphere on the automated ship vented and the engines had long since died.  The push they'd given the station would have required correction - if it didn't seem a certainty that the station itself only had a few hours at most to exist anyway.  He shook his head, mind racing.  The escape pods were gone - panic evacuations when the freighter had hit - and anything that could fly was either headed into  battle or running away.  There was nowhere to go...

"Bal ... cargo bay ... pods ... medical ... three cee two ..." Talia croaked out, a suddenly intense look on her face. 

Julwynn shushed her, cradling her head back to her shoulder as a mother would a child.

The lass is daft... Balnard frowned sadly, the pathos of his wife and her friend tugging at his heart in an odd way for the old warrior.  ...still, what do we have to lose?  Balnard shut down the tactical displays and called up the manifest from cargo bay 3-C2.  The list of cargo container pods was long and varied, but it was row after row of hardware and spare parts.  Bal tabbed through the list quickly, his eyes starting to glaze and drift slightly...  "Wait..."  He stopped and back-tracked.  There...  "Well I'll be dipped..."

Julwynn's eyes sharpened their focus.  "You found something?"

Bal nodded.  "Maybe..."  He pulled up the manifest on the unit, a Modular Emergency Medical Pod, designed to be deployed independently or in combination with other units.  "Medical supplies...  Water supply...  Water recycling plant...  Emergency rations...  Full life support..." Bal tapped some additional keys.  "Seven modules with universal docking clamps for hexagonal arrangement with core..."  Bal nodded to himself, still mumbling as his eyes dropped back down through the list of the bay's contents.  The tugs and lighters were all gone, of course, as were the escape pods, but...  Yes!  That will do nicely...  "Jules, can y' carry th' lass?"  Julwynn responded by rising, using the force to lift Talia with ease.  Bal smiled.  "Excellent. Follow me, lass, and stay close.  There be trouble afoot, and I've lost enough friends for one day."

**********

"Joker One to all Jokers: Stand by for jump to hyperspace." Armsman Captain B'Lain checked the coordinates he'd entered into the navicomputer and suppressed a sigh.  His flight, call-sign "Joker", consisted of a dozen ARC-170-MXZ fighters, two tankers, two heavy cargo shuttles and a CR-90 corvette.  They'd been on deep patrol when the Alpha-priority message had come in giving a set of coordinates in Mid-Rim null space and an order to proceed at best speed and render assistance as needed to four Mak'Tor operatives there.  No other explanation, no clue what they were jumping into...

And no sense worrying about it.  If a Knight was in trouble, the Men-At-Arms would bail them out - and make sure they never forgot about it!  Still, caution was required, so Captain B'Lain had staged his team a short hop out from the final coordinates, where they'd refueled and reformed for the final jump in.  He would leave four fighters behind with his tankers as escorts, and the four ships would jump to a nearby rally point.  Meanwhile the rest of his fighters, the heavy shuttles and the CR-90 corvette would proceed to the coordinates, and with the Maker's help they'd deal with whatever situation they found there.

Or die trying...

"Joker Nine, stay sharp.  We're a half-hour out, but I have no idea what we'll find there.  Wait eight hours, and if there's no contact proceed home without us."

"But sir..." Joker nine, Flight Officer Jan'a'naith, began to protest.

B'Lain cut her off.  "Orders, Jan.  Follow them.  If we don't come back, you need to go back and get help before returning.  Anything that can chew up eight fighters and a corvette won't have to much trouble with four fighters.  Understood?"

"Yes sir.  Maker preserve you, sir."

"And you."  B'Lain grinned and toggled his stick.  "Ok, Jokers, let's go.  Jump to hyperspace on my mark."

"Three..."

"Two..."

"One..."

"Mark!"

B'Lain hit his jump control and this fighter leapt forward with psuedo-motion into the tunnel of hyperspace, followed by the remainder of the flight, the shuttles and corvette. 

It was a leap into the dark.  Thirty minutes...  The crews settled down for the tense wait as the nothingness of hyperspace swirled by outside their cockpits.

*************


They reached the cargo bay without incident.  Talia had lapsed back into unconsciousness along the way, despite the healing song Julwynn was singing over her.  They had one close call when they'd literally come around a corner and come face-to-face with a squad of Storm Troopers.  Bal's blaster had come to life and started cutting them down but it would have been the end of the line if Julwynn hadn't pitched in as well, picking up and tossing several of the troopers down side corridors and crunching them into wall and ceiling panels.

But now they were here, and Bal needed to get to work.  "Lass, set the wee girl down and cover me.  This is giong to take a bit..."

Julwynn carefully laid Talia down on the deck, curled near Balnard, and stepped out where she could cover the corridor intersection.  She ignited her saber blades and extended her senses, shifting to a battle song as she covered her husband.

Bal cracked his knuckled theatrically and began reconfiguring the modules in the bay. First, he keyed in a series of commands that would release the docking clamps on the nearly 1000 cargo containers currently in the bay ten seconds before dropping the bay's atmospheric shield.  This would allow the bay to explosively decompress, sending the contents of the bay hurtling violently into space in what he hoped would resemble just another system failure on a base that was already starting to come apart under the hammering of the Star Destroyer's guns. 

The next part was a bit more tricky as he isolated the seven MEM Pods and maneuvered them into position. He wanted them in their full hexagonal formation.  Fortunately the pods were designed for deployment under less-than-ideal conditions by inexperienced personnel and the on-board computers took over, using the small thrusters built into the outer hulls to maneuver each pod into position and docking them quickly and efficiently.  That done, he maneuvered a small robo-tug into place and affixed it to one end of the "core" MEM-P.  He then put a second unit on the other end, giving him a low-endurance thrust package on either end of the impromptu spacecraft / life raft. 

The final move was to program the core pod's computer with the standard Mak'Tor distress beacon codes Telow'na had given them when they departed.  There was no way to stealth the output but he was operating as much on hope at this point.  Besides, even the Imperials would hesitate to just blow up a medical pod.  Even capture at this point would be better than the alternative of being blown to bits by the Star Destroyer's bombardment.

Bal completed his commands and extended a docking tube to the outer layer of his impromptu life raft.  "OK, Lass, that's the best I can do.  Let's go." He called, scooping up Talia and handing her to his wife as she tucked her saber away and headed down the tube.  Bal looked around one last time, checked to verify that control of his programs had indeed passed to the MEM-P's onboard computer, and then fired three shots into the bay's control terminal.  He then sealed the hatch and boarded the MEM-P, leaving a small thermal detonator behind in the tube.  It went off with a muted <<crump>> as they transferred to the core MEM-P, sealing them off from any outside intervention.

Bal sat down and strapped in at the main terminal.  The pods were designed with transport of medical personnel in mind as well as on-site treatment and triage, and there were several seats with 5-point harness systems.  "Strap in, lass.  This is going to be a bumpy ride..."

Julwynn braced Talia in a cushioned seat and strapped her in, then herself.  Balnard did his final checks, checked the passengers, and then pressed a flashing key.  "Hold on."

Julwynn braced them with the force, waiting...

There was a loud "THUNK" and the collection of containers across the bay floated free.  For a few seconds they floated, free, calm, peaceful...

Then the force field dropped and with a roar 1000 containers blew out into space.  Behind them the station, now under fire from the Star Destroyers directly, came apart with fire and fury, adding to the spreading debris ... and cover.

**************


Captain B'Lain flexed her fingers on the controls as the time to emergence wound down.  She checked the status of the ARC-170-MXZ fighter.  The design dated back to the clone wars, but the current model flown by the Men-At-Arms of M'Tzigon was quite different from the original.  the biggest change was the reduction from three crewmen to one, plus the ever-present astromech droid.  The additional space had been used for more powerful weaponry, eight concussion missiles instead of six, and a faster hyperdrive.  B'Lain understood the logic and in combat the heavier weapons, shields, and overall faster drives and better maneuvering were a plus.  But on these long hops...

She missed having someone to talk to.

"Joker One to Joker flight: Stand by..." She called, watching the counter dial down to zero.  With a flash the hyperspace tunnel dissolved and dropped the eight fighters and accompanying ships into real space ... and right on top of one of the most bizaar sights any of them had ever seen.

Immediately to her front, Captain B'Lain saw what looked like a cylinder or perhaps a brick accellerating sluggishly away from a surrounding cloud of additional bricks.  Whatever was driving the ... ship ... it wasn't particularly powerful, but it was steadily putting distance between itself and the debris field it was leaving.  Her targeting sensors told her that there were small craft coming out from a gaggle of Imperial Star Destroyers parked nearby to check out the field, but it looked like a shuttle with a pair of escorting fighters - a standard search-and-rescue formation, in no hurry to close the distance.  Dozens of other such formations were poking through a truely immense debris field in the near distance, but it all looked like an exercise.  There was zero urgency to anyone's movements.

Except for the make-shift ship in front of them, which appeared to be moving with as much urgency as it could muster..

"Joker Prime to Joker One." Captain Ne'man'Jo of the CR-90 corvette, the Virtuoso called her on the tactical link.  "We're being challenged by the Star Destroyer.  Suggest we expedite."

"Affirmative."  B'Lain watched her sensor suite stabalize following the jump.  "I'm getting a transponder from ... whatever that is ... headed toward us.  Wait one..."  She hit a switch on her stick, toggling to a general hailing frequency.  "This is Captain B'Lain'Throwd of the M'Tzigon Men-At-Arms.  I am picking up your transponder.  Please state your designation and need."

There was a crackle of static, then a very relieved sounding gravel voice responded.  "Captain, this is Shadow.  Condition Xenophon.  Request immediate extraction."

B'Lain blinked, then watched as Lexi spit out a translation of the codes.  "Shadow" was an under-cover mission sanctioned by the Mak'Tor Intelligence group, reporting directly back to Maenowan Jackson.  "Condition Xenophon" meant that they were blown, in retreat, and had taken casualties requiring immediate medical attention.  And immediate extraction...

Well. It meant "get us the hades out of here...."

"Shadow, we read.  Can you cut your accelleration?"

"Affirmative, Captain."

"Very good.  Cut accelleration and prepare for docking.  Once you're aboard the shuttle we can get you out of here." 

B'Lain saw the shuttle was already maneuvering to match velocity with the unorhodox craft even as her Joker flight spread out to cover them.  The Virtuoso hovered nearby, matching the fighter's general course changes without getting to close, the second shuttle tucked in close under the cover of it's guns.

It took less than two minutes for the transfer to complete, and they were on their way.  The last thing B'Lain saw was the core section of the craft explode, tossing the outer ring sections away to rejoin their fellows in the debris field.  By the time the SAR craft were in range for detailed scans, the Mak'Tor craft were long gone.
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« Reply #36 on: February 09, 2018, 02:23:09 AM »

Cool little search and rescue, but main point of interest here is seeing the Men at Arms make their first big appearance (or at least firs solid POV).  Interesting to see just how integrated they are into the Mak'tor command structure, way more than just a defensive force it seems...a curious parallel you've built in with the ARC fighters, like the men at arms are even in their equipment like the the clones to the Mak'tor's Jedi.
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« Reply #37 on: February 09, 2018, 12:12:12 PM »

I was wondering how Bal would get them out of there and he (you) didn't disappoint!  What rich details especially concerning the Mak'Tor Men-At-Arms; not just "canon-fodder" but integral characters within a much more complex (and interesting) dynamic!

grumbles Wish I had thought of that...  Wink

Well Karm, it's official: you really go out of your way to throw your people out of the proverbial frying pan and into the fire...

Illian dead ( Sad ), Talia badly hurt, Mellichae abroad wanting revenge, to say nothing of the mission...

This.  Is.  Good.  Writing.

I think Bal is going to be a Mak'Tor "fixer" and he's got A LOT to catch up with  Wink
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« Reply #38 on: February 09, 2018, 01:54:06 PM »

Cool little search and rescue, but main point of interest here is seeing the Men at Arms make their first big appearance (or at least firs solid POV).  Interesting to see just how integrated they are into the Mak'tor command structure, way more than just a defensive force it seems...a curious parallel you've built in with the ARC fighters, like the men at arms are even in their equipment like the the clones to the Mak'tor's Jedi.

Yes and no...   Honestly, I picked the ARC-170 fighter for the Mak'Tor Men-At-Arms for three reasons.
1. Its "old" - and therefore would be more likely to be available for construction under license.  The ARC-170-MXZ is a modified version, only has one pilot, so its more like an X-wing operationally but I didn't want to give them X-wings.
2. It is a "heavy" fighter with its own hyper drive and carries an astromech droid.  Again, like the X-wing ... but not an X-wing.
3. The ARC-170 is, at least in canon, still in use with both Imperial and Rebel forces.  While we haven't seen it on camera, the Wookipedia entry clearly states that the ARC-170 was still in use among both Imperial and Rebel forces during the Rebellion era.   It was considered an "elite" craft, not a cannon-fodder craft like the TIE... 

I will be honest, I didn't even think about the clone/jedi parallel when I laid this equipment list down.  But I can certainly see your point.  :-)  I think the Mak'Tor Knights would see themselves in relation to the Men-At-Arms more like, oh...  Delta Force compared to the Regular Army.  Elite troops, yes.  Certainly in a "special" niche, but still all part of the overall Mak'Tor military structure.  Such as it is...

But you've raised a very interesting point, and I think it may be time for Joker Flight to get a story all it's own.   Hmm..... 
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« Reply #39 on: February 09, 2018, 07:13:10 PM »

I've got a LEGO ARC-170. It is pretty awesome.  Grin

Besides that, this has just been quite the ride so far, and I don't think we're done yet. Like TD said, great writing. And a story just about the Joker squad, that would be awesome.
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« Reply #40 on: February 09, 2018, 10:16:58 PM »

I will be honest, I didn't even think about the clone/jedi parallel when I laid this equipment list down.  But I can certainly see your point.  :-)  I think the Mak'Tor Knights would see themselves in relation to the Men-At-Arms more like, oh...  Delta Force compared to the Regular Army.  Elite troops, yes.  Certainly in a "special" niche, but still all part of the overall Mak'Tor military structure.  Such as it is...

But you've raised a very interesting point, and I think it may be time for Joker Flight to get a story all it's own.   Hmm..... 

That is why comments are so helpful, you guys always come up with points and connections i hadn't really thought about before that shift how i look at my own stories at times!!! All feeds into the next chapter!
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« Reply #41 on: February 15, 2018, 09:17:42 PM »

Chapter 9: Afterward...
M'Tzigon
5 ABY

Talia felt the warmth on her cheeks, drying the tears, and knew that the sun was rising over the horizon.  She opened her eyes and saw the warm orange glow of sunrise on the obsidian pillar standing before her.  Rows of names lined the face, but only the last, newest name mattered to her at this moment.  She reached out and traced it, a ritual she realized she would be repeating for a very long time...  Il'Lian'Cam...

A gentle clearing of a throat nearby caugth her attention.  "I thougth I'd find y' here lass."

Talia turned to find Balnard standing there, looking oddly awkward.  "Bal.  What can I do for you?"

Balnard stepped closer, eyes cast downard.  "I ... wanted to give you this.  I managed to hang onto it..."

Talia took the object, heavy an cylindrical and wrapped in a heavy-weight back velvet bag.  Inside was Illian's lightsaber.  "Bal..."  Eyes shining, Talia stepped up and hugged him hard around the neck.  "Thank you, Bal.  This means more to me than you can imagine."

Bal didn't say anything.  He just bobbed his head, turned and left Talia with her renewed grief.

********

Julwynn held Balnard's hand under the table as they sat with Melow'na Jackson once again in her office.  "Welcome home.  I read your report, as well as the updates you  squealed out via KT-40 along the way.  While the loss of Knight Il'Lian is tragic, it is obvious that it resulted primarily from being put into a position that was beyond the scope of his training.  So that's on me."  Melow'na looked down at the folder on the desk before her, her own eyes shinging.  "Joker flight was dispatched to support you after Kato's last report.  Another group, The Black Aces, traced three of the other light freighters.  So far as we can tell the KDY shipments to Blackstar Base were going into construction meant for forces loyal to Trioculous, and were destroyed along with the base.  The Inquisitorious that were training and equipping there are being tracked now by ... other assets."  A look of odd satisfaction flitted briefly across her face before she masked it again.  "I wanted to thank you two for pulling the mission off and rescuing Talia.  For that I am grateful."

Julwynn's eyes shone but she only smiled.  "You are welcome, ma'am.  So ... what's next?"

Telow'na leaned back and studied the couple for long seconds, then tossed over the folder.  "This ... if you're interested.  Read it, think on it, and then let me know if you're interested."

Julwynn picked up the sealed folder, glanced at it, and handed it over to Balnard.  He read it without expression.  Under the normal "Top Secret" stamps and seals there was only one word: "Starfire"

*********

Flames crackled and rolled through the shattered compound.  Dark troopers moved here and there, gathering equipment or personal tokens of their victories over the guardians of the compound.  Mellichae flexed his new cortosis-plated arm in satisfaction.  It had performed splendidly, and proven key to defeating the Kowan who had been leading the stubborn defense of the Mak'Tor medical station on Cassander.  Tucked away in an out-of-the-way section of the spaceport they had proven vulnerable when his Infiltrator landed. 

And now...

Mellichae stopped before the two captive taken alive.  Robes torn and streaked with blood and carbon, they were on their knees bound and blindfolded.  They were also gagged and drugged.  No sense risking them trying to sing or use the force...  Shock binders on their wrists and shock collars around their necks were also in place to provide proactive control.

One of his Shadows trotted up.  "Sir!  All medical supplies and crystals have been collected.  We are ready to proceed."

Mellichae smiled broadly.  "Well done!  Lets get these two loaded up and get out of here."

The Shadow looked down at the prisoners, face sour.  "Why keep them alive?  Why not just kill them and be done with it?"

Mellichae nudged one of them, the young female apprentice of the older female healer, with his toe.  The girl whimpered and flinched away, nearly toppling over.  Mellichae felt her fear in the force, relished her panic in the song.  He looked up as his subordinate.  "Rest assured.  They will be useful."  He looked back down, his face now hungry.  "And then they will die."


*** The End ***
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« Reply #42 on: February 15, 2018, 09:56:00 PM »

The End...

Oh that is the probably the most inaccurate way to describe that chapter ever!! I won't say its a good conclusion to an great series because it is clearly not over!!

Three solid new leads rather...the Mak'Tor are in trouble if Mellichae is gunning straight for them...they have the numbers but he had flexibility and ruthlessness they can't match without losses.  And the Starfire...interesting choice to have Bal and Julwynn look into that at least in part...

Talia might be a bit of a dark horse...if she here's about the attack on Cassander - as Obi Wan might say..."This is  dangerous time for you, when you will be tempted by the dark side of the force"   
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« Reply #43 on: February 15, 2018, 10:11:37 PM »

Talia might be a bit of a dark horse...if she here's about the attack on Cassander - as Obi Wan might say..."This is  dangerous time for you, when you will be tempted by the dark side of the force"   

It WILL be interesting to see how she handles the temptation to attempt to avenge her loss.  Especially, as you say, if she finds out about the attack on the Mak'Tor medical mission.
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« Reply #44 on: February 15, 2018, 10:43:46 PM »

LSG is SO right: "The End?!"

NO!!!

Ah, but onto MORE stories!  And Mellichae is such a great bast...I mean bad guy.  Yeah.  And with a cortosis cybernetic arm?!  Karm better be careful...

And I like your idea about Joker Squadron; I'd like to read more about them.

Poor Talia...and Illian.  Said it before but: great writing!
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