Master Rel
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« Reply #750 on: September 30, 2012, 03:38:34 AM » |
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 I SEE YOU.... From yay to yuck in one stroke! The eye pony is...unsettling.  |
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Master Rel
Game Master
Knight of the Consular Order
Knight Commander OVER 9000!!
Force Alignment: 1884
Posts: 12894
Martial artist, fabricator, chef, resident Ortolan
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« Reply #751 on: September 30, 2012, 03:47:11 AM » |
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Luna
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This land is peaceful, its inhabitants kind...
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« Reply #752 on: September 30, 2012, 03:49:14 AM » |
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From yay to yuck in one stroke! The eye pony is...unsettling. Argus Panoptes in pony form, it is  |
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CrossingStar
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Resident Togruta and fan of the Clone Wars
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« Reply #753 on: September 30, 2012, 01:22:31 PM » |
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Points for bringing up the Greek guardian guy! |
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Tasardur
Nerf Herder
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As a Jedi, I prefer Lightside points.
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« Reply #754 on: September 30, 2012, 06:44:18 PM » |
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 "The really bad words are filtered but thats about it. We dont bitch too much about casual swearing, but dont be an ass about it." - Ultra Dominix v2 SY |
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Darth Rifter
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Darth Rifter and Jedi Keldor...Darn it I forgot.
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« Reply #755 on: September 30, 2012, 11:03:00 PM » |
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i have been thinking, I don't think I have the skill to write a successful fanfic. I always struggle woth show versus tell. I still need to create entire backstories for my OCs, I need to develop a good plot and story. That will take time, and I don't think I have it. But I so do want to write one, and get it on EQD.
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Master Rel
Game Master
Knight of the Consular Order
Knight Commander OVER 9000!!
Force Alignment: 1884
Posts: 12894
Martial artist, fabricator, chef, resident Ortolan
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« Reply #756 on: September 30, 2012, 11:10:53 PM » |
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i have been thinking, I don't think I have the skill to write a successful fanfic. I always struggle woth show versus tell. I still need to create entire backstories for my OCs, I need to develop a good plot and story. That will take time, and I don't think I have it. But I so do want to write one, and get it on EQD.
Here is the fun fact, admitting you are lacking in some aspect will allow you to accept advice, input, and grow...most likely getting over that which you feel was holding you back. Work on the aspect that works for you...create characters...then link them together by location, activities, etc...and soon, a good story will come to you...but you must stay within the process for this to work...keep plugging away and wait for your muse. |
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Darth Rifter
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Darth Rifter and Jedi Keldor...Darn it I forgot.
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« Reply #757 on: October 01, 2012, 12:45:01 AM » |
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So I need somepony's opinion. I have two OCs for my fanfic, both Pegasi, and they are twin. Not identical. One became a wonderbolt under the alias of Storm Runner, while his normal pony name is Falling Rain. The other wants to be one and is really trying to be one. His normal pony name is either Breezing Rain or Freezing Rain. which one sounds better. His current job is lead organizer of snow distribution.
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RogueLeader
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Apathy is death?...meh, I don't care
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« Reply #758 on: October 01, 2012, 12:57:10 AM » |
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Breezing Rain sounds better. And speaking of fanfic, my betas seem to be ignoring me...  |
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Darth Rifter
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Darth Rifter and Jedi Keldor...Darn it I forgot.
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« Reply #759 on: October 01, 2012, 12:59:27 AM » |
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hmm, that was the name I gave him originally before he even had a job made. A good portion of the fanfic takes place in Ponyville, and is helping Breezing get into the Wonderbolts.
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Darth Rifter
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Darth Rifter and Jedi Keldor...Darn it I forgot.
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« Reply #760 on: October 01, 2012, 02:08:48 AM » |
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    There they are, from top to bottom. Storm Chaser Falling Rain Breezing Rain Rushing Wind Twins, but only Falling is a Wonderbolt at the start, but maybe Breezing becomes one too? Do they look good? |
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CrossingStar
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Resident Togruta and fan of the Clone Wars
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« Reply #761 on: October 01, 2012, 10:30:27 AM » |
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I love the art! Breezing Wind and Falling Rain look wonderful |
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Luna
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Force Alignment: 550
Posts: 5360
This land is peaceful, its inhabitants kind...
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« Reply #762 on: October 02, 2012, 02:49:15 AM » |
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 Remind you of anypony...?  From the Borderlands 2 credits.... yep, brony presence confirmed.  Tara is best pony.  |
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Master Rel
Game Master
Knight of the Consular Order
Knight Commander OVER 9000!!
Force Alignment: 1884
Posts: 12894
Martial artist, fabricator, chef, resident Ortolan
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« Reply #763 on: October 02, 2012, 03:19:43 AM » |
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She wears it well! |
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SOTJ
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Serenity, the way of the Jedi is serenity.
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« Reply #764 on: October 03, 2012, 05:46:43 AM » |
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Remind you of anypony...? Nobody comes to mind....  |
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